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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi! the next part-thanks for the likes/ replies and views--

Part 12

(Some acts going on , Announcement of rey s dance, taani was behind the stage and couldn't see the stage)

Taani lifted her head up as she heard the announce ment. The guy looked at her in surprise

"kahaan jaarahin ho?"

"wo mujhe ...rey ka dance dekhna tha" she blurted

"tho pehle jaana chahiye tha, ab stage ke near kaise jaaoge? itne crowd mein"

She looked lost, the guy caught the anxious look in her face, held her by the arm- chalo- and took her from the side entrance to the stage both walking fast and reached just in time for the lights to come on and music to begin.

Imagine this dances - maula mere

Taani stood watching him as he danced effortlessly, meaningfully, perfectly , in synchrony with the beats and harmony with the music. she could see that it was real - but she knew all his dances were real. All of them came from inside his heart, thats why everyone felt connected to him when he danced. He danced for himself but carried the crowd along with him in his journey... Her eyes filled up. she knew the crowd would be cheering, she didnt hear it- she knew the crowd would be dancing- she couldn't see it- all that she coud see was rey- his whole being transported into a world where only dance existed

The music had stopped and the usual chant of once more had begun.she felt a blur of movement around her , the guy standing next to her was speaking into the headphone- she did not register what he was saying...

Then the host announced rey s name again- rey came on stage again- imagine the ganesh festival solo

Taani face broke into huge smile as he danced different styles- she recognised the d3 team members in his steps . nil-bharat-bhai-vicky-rinni-sharon-simmi"aashi-neha...and then his own..he was so damn versatile- sab kuch- sab kuch aatha haina aapko? She thought fondly- the music stopped and he bowed - waved and blew a kiss to the crowd. She smiled more as tears flowed , shaking her head- he enjoyed the attention , he loved it and she loved him .She felt a rush of pride in him.her anger completely forgotten

"TAANI" she was woken up from her dreamland by the guys voice loud

"haan!kya?"

"tum ro kyun rahin ho?"

She wiped her eyes,"nahin, wo bas.. sorry," she bbent her head down, wiped her nose and face ,"sorry, main rey ki fan thi...hoon...sabse bada fan.." she was still looking dazed though she smiled.

"jabse rey aaya haina tumhaare behaviour kuch strange hogaya hain" he placed his hand on her arm and led her away . '

Edited by prtn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Awesome update
loved it
taani was so lost in Rey s dance
Update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
lovely update...finally rey realised wht he done with her...hope he win her back soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
taani lost in his dance and crying...i loved the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
awesome update ..
natasha and taarey scene lovely ...
wow .jab tak taani ke face par smile ni ayega rey ni jayega ...super
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Oh no why didn't you send me any pm??? i missed out 2 updates???????

Anyways coming back loved both the updates.A harsh Taani,a hurt and dejected Rey in the first part of the update was written so well.

Rey will never let her face anything bad now but will not leave her like this

And in the second part we see Rey dancing the Rey style 😎 and Taani getting emotional Oh this girl is so madly in love with this guy yet is not allowing him to come close to her!!!!🥺

koi nahi she offcourse needs time and i am sure Rey will win her back in his style ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
awesome
loved girls blabbering about taarey
and teh button wala scene was nice
do cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
finally finish read your both parts together... finally both him and she had a conversation
and finally they realize what they want... and the performance went awesome...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
its awesome update
rey's dance and T feel proud wow
taani loves him soo much
lovely update
continue soon
pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
awesome story
read all parts in one go

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