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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
finally finish reading all your chapters in go... all were good and fabulous...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi! thanks a millin for the likes and replies... and the views as well. i never understand why my topics dont have likes but have views😕- sometimes feel bad but thanks anyway.hope this is okay
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part 10
Taanis College"some long hall

Lot of props costumes etc., lying everywhere. Some ppl are doing some random stuff.

Rey found what he wanted ,"thanks taani, " she didnt smile,"waise mujhe practice karna ho ..."

"next class room s khaali , aap performance ke pehle practice tho nahin karthe na"

"nahin par aaj prepared nahin hoon tho.., tum dekhogi?" he asked her hopefully

"aapke liye dance practice ki zaroorat nahin padegi rey. Waise mujhe kaam hain" he was beginning to hate the word kaam handing him the music player.. she moved to another corner and started talking to the guy..rey walked out to the next classroom to practice wondering what dance to do..though taani s vote of confidenvce had cheered him up.

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After a while, rey walked back into the same room ,having changed into his costume (like in the solo which rey did during ganesh festival) looked for taani and found her where some team were in costumes for drama and helping out in stitching something. she looked so sweet , he smiled as he stared and took in her hair which had come undone from her pony- naya style , she looked better with her hair let down..aur waise bhi her hair s so straight that it wont stay tied up...and remembered the feel of her hair...so soft and silky...some people walked in front of him obstructing his view. He frowned and tried to catch her eye failed. She didnt look up from her stitching...he immediately pulled of a button in his costume and walked to her

"taani" she looked up," yeh..." and pointed to the button. She got up , moved nearer and without a word started doing the button. Rey looked down at her stitching , standing so close to him with her hair flying out and wondered if she couldn't feel anything, sach mein? Kya sach mein taani ko koi farak nahin padtha? Itne aasaani se sab karrahin hain.nahin..but.. and without his knowledge pushed the strands of her hair behind her ear. She stopped, looked up from her button and thread to catch his questioning expression ..she understood the question in his eyes in an instant and realised that the button hadn't come off by itself.she hadn't realised she was standing close to him- she moved back suddenly making the pin poke his chest and "ouch"

"sorry sorry ..sorry rey. Aapko laga ? meri galthi .." she moved towards him and touched his chest where the pin may have poked

"no, its fine" he put his hand to rub the place and held her hand instead, for a moment both of them stared at each other but taani pulled her hand back ,"sorry"

Suddenly, natasha cut in," waise mujhe yaad aaya ki maine tumhe kahaan dekha hain!" her enthusiasm was irritating taani ," youtube main! Tum logon ka video bannewaala tha na? Kya hua?" rey had a glimpse of his and sharons photoshoot that had created so much trouble and he heard the slap he had given swayam- he would never get over the guilt of it.

Catching his expressions and realsiisng that he was disturbed remembering something "jab banjaayega tab dekhlena aap" taani answered her back ( rey looked at her with affection ) making that girl go laughing again at both of them ,"so possessive!!" she teased and smiled at rey

Rey s face broke into a smile," tum kya hamesha aise hi sab ki class lethi ho?"

"class? What class? Class tho sabko tumse lena chahiye- button thodne ka." She replied smile still on her face," main wahin khadi thi" taani s face turned red with embarrassment," but of course tumhe tho main dikhi nahin"

Rey saw taanis embarrassment ," tum jaise beautiful ladki ko koi miss kaise karsaktha hain?"

"of course miss karsaktha hain jab tumhe kisi aur ko dekhne ka dil ho tab"

Taani started moving away when Natasha pulled her arm and making her stand in front of him said," tum mat jao, warna yeh saare button thodke yahaaan khada rahega" she stoped , imagined the scene ," actually not a bad idea." Taani frowned and moved again. Natasha stopped her again and said," sorry yaar. Itna gussa kyun hain tumhe?" turning to rey," waise main ek baat boloon? Taani ko kabhi gussa hote hue yahaan kisine nahin dekha aaj tak.she s generally.."

"sweetest. Pata hain" he completed . Natasha s eyebrows went up, taani met his eyes which was looking at her with so much warmth and felt all her anger melt for an instant but...she shook Natasha s hand and turned away just as some six/seven guys and girls walked towards them.

"rey tum yahaan ho!"anjali," this is our college dance team, "she introduced everyone and rey started saying hi while taani tried to disappear in the costumes ," you guys r wonderful! Have u learnt? " they were talking "tho tum yahaan kaise?" one guy asked rey

"main taani se milne aaya tha" rey replied. The team people looked at her in surprise except anjali who said," before you ask," looking at two girls who had the obvious question written all over their faces," rey taani ke bhai ka friend hain" the girls looked at one another , one said," how lucky! Itne ache bhai ke friend" and giggled," waise taani tumhaara bhai nahin aaya?"

Taani walked out of the place without answering , everyone realising that she had become upset.

"did i ust say something wrong?" the girl looked around as one guy hit her on the head.

Rey replied," nahin , she s just ..wo mujhse upset hain bas... ill just carry on..main baad main miltha hoon" waved a bye and walking towards the door.


Edited by prtn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
oho to I am the 1st one to comment. Too good yr. Very sweet. Plz update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Awww...i loved the part jaha Rey ne apna button nikala so that Taani comes nearer to him ..

And then the scene where Taani was busy stiching and Rey was admiring her ☺️

Hahahahahaha "Taani ke bhai ka friend." i like that a lot 😆

You truely are a very good writer...

and about getting less likes i guess many are not aware of the ff...you spread the link of the ff...everyone for sure will be loving it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
i really loved this update
each & every line was so nice
it was an amazing update dear
waiting 4 nxt update
so update soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update dear..
luvd it..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi sorry like button not working so cant like ur replies, thanks for the replies, likes and views
@sreeja_rox thanks for the tip

PART 11
St Louis

"tum me se kisine nahin dekha hain rey ko?" swayam asking the gang," kal afternoon se pata nahin"

Everyone shook their heads.

"kahaan jaasatha hain" "na college main" "na ghar main" "na canteen main"

"na Rehearsal hall main" "aur phone bhi off hain"

Vicky," par guys main bolrhaan hoon, worry ki oi baat nahin hain kyuni aashi bhi missing hain"

"oh shut up Vicky"swayam

"arre kyun shut up, us din class mein hum sab ne sunaa " "aur dekhaa bhi" "aashi aur rey ko saath saath " "hasthe hasthe"

The gang was all convinced that rey was with aashi while swayam knew that couldn't be and Sharon was arguing with them that it couldn't be.

Some classroom- taanis college

Taani sat on a desk, her hands clamped together , her eyes staring out at space -mujhe itna gussa kyun aarahaan hain? ...aur kispar?

"taani?" rey had walked in and stood in front of her. she looked at him ," kya hua? Tum itne gusse mein kyun aagayi?" no answer. He moved next to her ," tum itni upset kyun ho taani?"his voice soft.she didnt respond, he put his hand out to hold her but something in her stern frame stopped him

"aap yahaan kyun aaye rey? Aapko yahaan sabko batane ki zaroorat kyat hi ki aap mujhse milne aaye ho?"

"kyunki main tumse hi milne aaya hoon taani. Itni si baat tum samaj kyun nahin rahin ho?" he was wound up completely by her attitude.

"aap kyun nahin samajthe? Yeh aapki baat nahin hain. mujhe achha nahin lagtha jab koi mujhpar hastha hain"

"taani, they were just teasing ...itna seriously mat lo. Tum itni spoilsport tho nahin..."

"Main kaise bhi thi khush thi. Apni nayi life , nayi aims lekar main aage badrahin thi " She stopped ," aap aaye kyun rey..?" rey moved closer and sat on his knee , his eyes level with hers .

"main..." rey began clearly wanting to say i love you but she cut him short, "rey, aapne mereliye bohot kuch kiya hain " he opened his mouth to speak, she held her hand," mujhe bolne do please. ek aur favour kardo" she looked down, her voice emotionless," mujhe yahaan koi jaantha nahin hain

aur agar jaanthe bhi hain tho sirf meri projects ko aur main khush hoon aise . is new lifemein, main na kisiki behen hoon aur nahi kisiki girlfriend " he didnt know where she was getting at," aur main aise hi rehna chchthi hoon." she met his eyes "so please aap yahaan bhi mera tamashaa create mat karo" her voice calm in contrast to the harsh words.

Rey felt like she had slapped him. he couldn't reply, he couldn't think, all he could do was see her - her small frame suddenly so large , her eyes steely without any tears , her hands clasped together . " please rey " and she walked out of the room leaving behind a stunned rey

Rey sat on the desk- his head in his hands- shes right. Main yahaan aaya hi kyun? tamashaa? And he had a glimpse of the gang taunting her when she was GS , a glimpse of shivam walking away with her in front of the college, her screaming at him and fighting after their fake breakup and Vicky scolding her and the final straw- him telling the whole story to the college in his drunken state...he felt the guilt in a whole new way- people would have laughed at her ... wo itni sensitive bhi hain. he banged his hand on the desk - main na kisiki behen hoon nahin kisiki girlfriend, he heard her say--- tum mere liye sirf swayam ki behen ho, main tho usse sirf isiliye jhel rahaan hoon kyunki wo swayam ki behen hain---he heard his own voice but that was before ...usse pata hain ki wo mereliye kya mean karthi hain ...im sorry taani..main kaise sab kuch teek karoon? Yahaan mera tamashaa mat karo"nahin i promise ki main aisa kuch bhi nahin karoonga, not again. Par main yahaan se jaa nahin saktha. Tumhare is state ke liye responsible main hoon tho main tumhari chehre par smile lane tak nahin jaaoonga. Tum chaahe kuch bhi karlo.

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Taani walked out , her face not showing the heaviness she felt in her heart- mujhe kabhi nahin laga ki meri life itni complicated hojaayegi. maine rey ko itna kuch kyun kahaan? Par wo aaye kyun yahaan?

She had entered into the large room with volunteers. Natasha came running," taani, rey kahan hain? usse kehna ki uska performance mein half an hour hain " She ran , stopped," are you okay? "taani nodded thinking," rey ko bhulana padega, jab bhi wo meri wajah se upset hothe hain tab dance nahin karthe." The guy walked to her just then," taani tum kahaan thi itni dher se? Kya hua?"

"sorry, main bas rey ko bhulaake aathi hoon phir yeh..."

"rey ? dance ke liye? Wo anjali ke saath hain, don't worry "

rey apne aap hi dance karne aagaye! Achha hain , NDC e final mein kitna problem hua tha...par kya iska matlab yeh hain ki main unkeliye koi importance nahin rakhthi? He face fell at the thought, taani tu chahthi kya hain? ek tho abhi abhi itna sab kuch sunaa ke aayi ho unko, phir yeh expect bhi karrahin ho ki wo tumhaare liye dance na karein? Nhain ...maine kabhi yeh nahin chaha ki wo dance na karein.unki personality a hissa hain dance, kitne din se unki dance dekhne ko nahin mila.

(Some acts going on , Announcement of rey s dance, taani was behind the stage and couldn't see the stage)


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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Awesome update . . . loved it
finally rey realize what he had done
taarey convo was so emotional
Waiting to know what rey will do now to make taani his
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really lovely update
rey broke the button to go near T wow
tum jaise beautiful ladki ko koi miss kaise karsaktha hain?" just loved this line👏
each and every line is awesome
i loved this ss
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awesome update
swayam knows R very well
main na kisiki behen hoon aur nahi kisiki girlfriend i loved this
rey thinking past that each line is awesome
so R desided not to go from there but what he do to owe T
intresting update soon

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