Swaron OS: Pyaar kiya toh darna kya

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey people,
I've again come up with something I imagined and have written an OS on the current track.. I actually wanted to write something as I got into this writing spree all of a sudden and this current situation helped me imagine something again.. So here it is, I tried by level best and I hope you'll like it..
And soory for the errors as I didn't get time to proof read it..

Swaron OS

Pyaar kiya toh darna kya?

Swayam: Oh come one Sharon aise chup rehne se kya hoga?

Just the someone knocks on the Announcement Room door.. Swayam opens the door just to find Rey standing there with a stern face.. Rey comes in and first switches off the mic.. Swayam and Sharon stand there shocked to the core..

Sharon: Yeh.. Yeh ON tha?.. What the hell!

Swayam (walking forward): Toh kya sab ne humari??

Rey: Haan and fortunately tumhari personal fight ab public bann chuki hai

Swayam and Sharon were shell shocked..

Swayam: Situation bahut buri hai?

Sharon (tensed): Kya hoga Rey? Bahut badi problem ho gayi hai

Rey: Kya hoga? Kya karna hai? Kaise karna hai? Tum dono toh pata hai.. Main iss main kuch nahi bolunga.. Filhaal chalo yahan se..

Sharon: Mera public tamasha bann gaya hai

Rey: Sharon chalo yahan se.. Chalo

Sharon (mumbling): Sabko pata chal gaya.. Tamasha bann gaya..

Rey (pulling her): Sharon Chalo!!!

Rey takes both Sharon and Swayam out of there.. The gang was standing right there.. They all rushed to the trio and Simi took Sharon who was still in a shock..

Bharat: Kya ho gaya hai tujhe? Sharon ke saamne majak banne main maza aa raha hai tujhe?

Swayam: Tum jaisa soch rahe ho waise kuch nahi hai..

Swayam just looks at Sharon who was lost..

Vicky: Ya right! Jo humne sunna woh sirf humne nahi baaki sab ne bhi sunna..

Simi: Aisi bhi kya fight Sharon tum dono itna out of control hogaye..

Amar: Sharon se aise baat karte hue pehli baar suna hai tujhe.. Hua kya yaar?

Rini: Swayam ki kaunsi baat pe tum itna argue kar rahi thi? Kya hua Sharon?

The gang was just interrogating as they wanted to know what exactly was going on between these two friends of theirs.. Now they had publically become a big joke.. Sharon ignoring the question pulled Rey to one side..

Sharon: Rey, kya sabko humare relationship ke bare main pata chal gaya?

Rey: Not really!! But tum dono ki baatein sunke sabko yeh idea toh laga gaya ke tum dono main koi na koi major problem hai..

Sharon was shocked.. What now?'.. She stood there numb..

Bharat: Jo tu chahta hai na woh hone wala nahi hai.. Tu piche kyun nahi hatta yaar?

Vicky: Dude tu literally Sharon pe apne aap ko thoop raha hai yaar..

Sharon wasn't in the state to react she was too numb to hear the conversation.. She was lost in her own thoughts and mumbling something..

Swayam (in disbelief): What? Are you'll mad? Mujhe apne aapko Sharon pe thoopne ki zarurat nahi hai.. Because hum dono ek couple hai..

Everyone was shocked except for Rey and Sharon.. Sharon was yet standing like a statue.. She didn't even hear what Swayam or the rest of her friends said.. Simi looked at Sharon then at Swayam and just moved forward..

Simi: Swayam yeh tum kya bol rahe ho?

Swayam (looking at Sharon): Sach! Sharon aur main ek couple hai..

Swayam looked at Sharon for a reaction but she was just starring in thin air.. Everyone looked at Sharon for a reply but she was just mumbling something.. Swayam got a bit worried looking at her like that.. Rey just shook her a bit

Rey: Sharon!

Sharon (looking at Rey): Meri wajah se phirse Swayam ki feeling public ho gayi.. Maine phirse Swayam ka public tamasha bana diya..

Rey was about to say something but before that Swayam moved towards Sharon.. He held her by her shoulder and got her to face him.. Sharon's faced was covered with tears and her eyes were ready to spill more of them..

Swayam (calmly): Sharon..

Sharon (looking into his eyes): I'm sorry.. Phirse meri wajah se tumhari feelings public tamasha bann gayi.. I'm really very sorry!

By now she had started crying.. Swayam could not see her like this and just pulled her into a hug.. And Sharon dug her face in the crook of his neck.. She just wanted to forget all the problems and his arms were the perfect place to do so..

Swayam (caressing her hair): Nahi Sharon! Iss main tumhari koi galti nahi hai.. Shhh.. Stop crying please..

Sharon (crying): I'm sorry..

Swayam: No Sharon! Don't say sorry! Shhh..

Sharon (while crying): Tum mujhse ghussa nahi ho na?

Swayam: Nahi Sharon!

Sharon: Please mujhse ghussa mat rehna! I can't take it..

Swayam: Shhh.. Ghussa nahi hu.. But please stop crying..

Sharon (sobbing): I love you..

Swayam: I love you too..

Sharon was still sobbing and Swayam continued to pacify her.. And here the gang was too shocked to react.. Rey was smiling looking at his best friend madly in love..

Rey (in mind): Finally! Finally Swayam and Sharon are together.. Thank you.. Thank you so much God! Aapne meri sunn li.. I'm just so happy for them.. But.. But ab yeh jo tamasha hua hai usse theek kaise karenge? Shit!!

Just then he turns to look at his friends who stood there with their jaws almost touching the ground and their eyes ready to pop out of the socket..

Rey: Guys!

Nil (in a trance): Ae Vicky kya sapna dikh raha hai yaar.. Swayam aur Sharon ek dusre ko hug kar rahe hai aur I love you bhi bol rahe hai..

Vicky: Haan yaar! Tera sapna mujhe bhi dikh raha hai..

Bharat: Mera dost sapne main hi Sharon ko pa sakta hai..

Amar: Haan yaar.. Real life main toh Sharon usko kaat khaayegi..

Rini: Ek weakling aur ek dazzling.. Couple?

Aashi: Par Sharon toh Swayam ne nafrat types karti hai na?

Simi was just grinning looking at Sharon and Swayam together.. She knew Sharon had feelings for Swayam but they being a COUPLE, was a shock to her as well.. But on the whole she was happy for her bestie..

Simi: Guys! Yeh koi sapna nahi hai! Sharon aur Swayam sach main ek couple hai!

Rey (shouting): Guys!!!

All get out the trance.. Swayam and Sharon finally break the hug.. Sharon was smiling whole-heartedly that finally Swayam was back in her life.. And Swayam he was all the more happy because Sharon had no fear in accepting her love in front of everyone.. And somewhere had also initiated a step towards him.. He wiped Sharon's tears and stood there with his one arm wrapped with her arm.. They both were smiling looking at one another.. Rey came forward and hugged them both..

Rey: Finally tum dono phirse saath ho.. (breaking the hug) Dekha Swayam meine kaha tha na Sharon aur tu phirse ek couple banoge..

Swayam just smiled and hugged his best friend once again.. Sharon was just grinning from ear to ear.. Simi immediately walked upto her and stood infront of her with her hands on her hip and an eyebrow raised..

Sharon (fumbling): Simi.. Woh.. main.. woh..

Simi: Woh tum kya Sharon?

Sharon: Woh..

Simi: I was right wasn't I.. (excitedly) God Sharon I'm so so so happy for you.. (faking anger) Haan but tumne yeh baat mujhse chupai..

Sharon (hold her one ear): Sorry!

Simi couldn't even fake in front of that puppy dog face of Sharon.. Both the bestie hugged each other.. Rini to came and hugged her friend congratulating her.. The boys yet stood there..

Vicky: Yaar yeh kaise ho sakta hai?

Nil: Haan yaar yeh log toh jab dekho tab jhagadte rehte hai..

Bharat: Sharon toh jab dekho tab mere dost ki in.. insu..

Amar: Insult..

Bharat: Haan wohich karti rehti hai..

Amar: Haan aur ab yeh dono ek couple..

Rey: Guys! Tum log pagal hog aye ho kya? Idhar yeh dono itni mehnat ke baad couple banne hai aur tum log khush hone ke jagah log aise pagalon jaise question puch rahe ho..

Vicky: Nahi dude well are really happy that finally

Nil: Finally Swayam aur Sharon ek saath hai..

Bharat: Haan yaar mere Majnu dost ko uski Laila mil gayi..

The boys started hooting and picked up Swayam.. they started dancing with Swayam in the air.. All were really happy but no one noticed the one broken heart standing in the corner.. Rey noticed Aashi and walked to her..

Rey: Hey Aashi! Tum theek ho?

Aashi (looking everywhere except at Rey): Haan haan mujh kya types ho sakta hai!

Rey: Are you sure?

Aashi: Haan.. (looking at Swayam): Swayam toh humesha yeh hi bolte the ke woh Sharon se pyaar karte hai.. Toh ab unn dono ko saath dekh ke mujhe bura kyun lagega..

Rey (surprised): Kya baat hai Aashi ek baar bhi types nahi bola..

Aashi just smiled at him.. Rey gave Aashi a friendly hug and Aashi reciprocated the same.. In the meantime the guys had put Swayam down and pushed him toward Sharon.. The lovebirds were lost in each-others eyes that was filled with immense love.. The gang saw this and then their eyes fell on Rey and Aashi who were hugging each other.. And the boys went 'Chemistry'.. Both the girls just went Awww.. Rey broke the hug and looked at his friends confused.. Aashi too looked at them and understood where the things were going..

Aashi: Guys main aap sab se ek baat types bolna chahti hu.. (after getting everyone's attention) Guys woh main..main Rey ki secret admirer types nahi thi..

Gang: WHAT?!

Aashi: Haan woh.. woh Sharon hamesha mujhse ghussa types rehti thi.. kyunki main Swayam ke saath types rehti thi iss liye.. Maine socha ke agar main yeh bolu ke secret admirer main types hu toh woh mujhe ghussa types nahi karegi..

Rini: Toh tum ab bhi Swayam ko like karti ho?

Swayam got a bit awkward and Sharon was again shocked to react [Bichari! Kuch jyada hi shocks mil rahe hai ek din main]

Aashi: Kya! Nahi.. Nahi woh sirf acche friend types like karti hu (looking at Sharon) Sacchi!!

Rey was also relieved that he doesn't have to act like he is committed.. Swayam was smiling and now Sharon was too relaxed..

Vicky: Ek minute phir Rey ki secret admirer kaun hai?

Nil: Haan yaar ab phirse kuch sochna padega..

Bharat: Par kaise.. Abhi tak toh ek bhi tofa nahi aaya..

Vicky: Idea! Rey woh pehle wale gifts nikaal..

Sharon (blurts out): Aare but woh gift Rey ke nahi Swayam ke hai!

Sharon bit her tongue whereas Swayam and Rey just smiled.. Everyone was took a few moments to understand but now all the thing fell in place and they all were grinning and the guys again went Chemistry'.. Simi elbowed Sharon to which she just blushed.. All their friends were shocked that Sharon had actually changed into a true Laila for Swayam.. That was a bit hard for them to digest but at the same time they were really happy for their friends.. All dispersed off..

Everyone was back home..

In Sharon's house..

Sharon was so happy that atlast Swayam was back in her life.. She had never thought that Swayam would become such an integral part of her life.. She sat on her bed and lost in her thoughts..

*THUND*

She came out of her trance and saw her loverboy sitting there and rubbing his butt.. Swayam stood up and saw his lady looking at him with eyes filled with endless love.. He slowly moved forward and suddenly Sharon's expression changed from love to shock..

Sharon (shocked): Swayam! Tum? Yahan? Itni raat ko?

Swayam: Haan my love! Main! Tumhara Swayam! Yahan! Itni raat ko!

Sharon: Par.. Par tum aise?!

Swayam (seductively): Kyun nahi aana chahiye kya?

Swayam was moving closer and closer whereas Sharon stood rooted to her place..

Sharon (lost in the closeness): Nahi.. Tum.. Woh.. Darwaze se bhi aa sakte ho na?!

Swayam (intently gazing): Kyun mere khidki se aane se tum khush nahi ho?

Sharon (lost in him): Tumhe lag jaati toh?

Swayam (moving even more closer): Toh tumhe farak padta hai?

Sharon: Haan! Bahut!

Swayam (huskily): Kyun?

Sharon (in a trance): Kynuki.. I

Swayam: Kynuki tum?

Sharon: I..

Swayam slowly puts his hands around her waist which send shivers down her spine.. In response she just closes her eyes.. There was no gap left.. Their bodies moulded perfectly together.. Both were still lost in each other orbs..

Swayam: Tum?

Sharon: I love you!

Swayam: I know!

Sharon (still in trance): You are my life Swayam.. Tum mujhse ghussa rehte ho na toh mujhe kuch accha nahi lagta.. Mujhe pata hai I was at fault.. But I'm sorry to hurt.. Tum hurt hote hot oh main bhi hurt hoti hu.. (innocently) Aisa kyun hota hai Swayam? (cupping his face with one hand) Jab main tumhara sad face dekhti hu, toh main bhi sad ho jaati hu.. Jab tum mere saath cold behave karte ho, mujhe bahut hurt hota hai.. Jab tum mujhse dur hote ho main sans nahi le paati.. Jab tum paas hote ho toh main tumse dur nahi jaana chahti.. Jab tum mujhe hug karte hot oh I just want to hide in your arms.. Kyun Swayam? Aisa kyun hota hai?

Swayam was happily shocked to hear this innocent confession from Sharon.. He was just adoring her and her innocence.. He held her palm that was on his cheek.. placed a sweet peck on it and wiped the silent tear drop that fell from her eyes..

Swayam (cupping her face with one hand): Kyunki we are deep, madly, crazily in Love with each other.. Hum ek dusre ko complete karte hai.. Swayam ke bina Sharon adhoori hai aur Sharon ke bina Swayam.. Main bhi tumse dur nahi reh sakta.. I kills to ignore you.. Tumse rudely baat karna, tumhe hurt karna mujhe pal pal andar se maar raha tha.. I love you Sharon! I love you and I'm sorry!

Sharon (with tears): Don't be sorry! Galti meri thi.. Maine tumhe hurt kiya..

Swayam: Nahi Sharon!

Sharon: Haan Swayam.. Main tumhe nahi samjh nahi payi.. Aur..

Swayam: Shhh.. bas! Let's keep the past where its suppose to be.. That's in the past.. Aaj important yeh hai ke tum aur main saath hai aur mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye.. Lets starts new and forget what happened then..

Sharon was happy listening to this and hugged him tight agreeing to what he said.. Swayam hugged her as tight and felt light having the love of his life in his arms.. Both promising to be together forever.. Promising to let the love grow each passing day.. each passing hour.. each passing minute.. They had come through a lot of hurdle but still stood strong.. This time their love much stronger and much deeper..

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SanskritiS thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Amazing OS 😊
Sharon in state of shock but loved the way she conversed with Swayam
Gang shocked n Rey happy
Aashi ke emotions bhi nicely penned
Swayam jumped in Sharon's room😆
Loved the Swaron moments
Edited by SanskritiS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing os..
wish something like this happened in real also..alas it wont
but loved d way u wrote
pefectly describing d emotion and justifying d situation
in short a lovely os:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely os!!
the description of the situation was amazing!!
gr8 work on the whole!
ty for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
it was really cute tanvish
i loved it a lot
the way sharon apologized in frnt of all was really good
the gang scene was nice
rey and ashi's scene was nice...
Sharon's house scene was awesome
i loved each nd every dialogue of sharon
beautifully penned
Lovely OS

P.S. FF update krna yaad h 😈

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayee I remember how I wished k kuch aesa hi hota show mein bhi (sigh)

At least got to see that here. Aww Sharon was so cute when she felt bad that she made his feelings public and it just shows how much he matters to her<3 😳
Finally the secret admirer thing was also all open.
That innocent confession of Sharon pleased me so much<3 Loved it a lot.
The gang part was quite funny 😆
Beautifully penned. Great job Tanvish<3 👏👏
Fatima :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a fabulous and great os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unres. .
I so wish to see something like dis on d show. .
It was lurk so brilliant. .
Enjoyed every bit of it. .
I can't tell u how happy i feel reading dis os. .
Loved it totally. .
D way u penned was beautifull. .
D ending was superb. .
D gang reactions n all shocked dat was perfectly written too. .
A very well written os. .
Awesome one. .
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS tanvish... felt like smiling after so many days of dard bahara swaron story😊😊 ya a different version on what could have happened if sharon spoke 😊😊 thank u so much for writing it awesome as always😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I donno why but I feel like crying after reading this 😔

The confession, the confrontation, the secret admirer thing..

Sorry but I'm not in a state to write any more. It was wonderful! Thanks for the PM *hugs*

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