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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 8 A
Suddenly riya enters the cabin n sees that both are hugging each other n had tears She comes to arjun n askes " Kya hua Arjun aap aur bhai aise" Before she could complete Arjun said " Ab tum hi samjhao ise Riya ye kehta hai ki ye apne dil ki baat aisha se nahin kahega kyuki ise lagta hai ki aisha isse better deserve karti hai ye musibato ke ilava use kuch nahin de sakta" Riya said"Bhai aap kya sochte hai Aisha kamzoor hai wo musibato se lad nahi paayegi main janti hoo app aisha se bahut pyar karte hai main jaanto hoon aapke saath jo pehle hua use leke aap pareshan hai par aapki usme koi galti nahin thi shayad aapne galat insaan ko chuna tha"Sameer sighed n said "Tum theek keh rahi ho riya par aisha se door rehna hi theek hoga main uski aur meri zindigi ki uljan nahin bada sakta." Riya n arjun tried to explain him but no use he walked out of the cabin n they both kept on calling him back but it was all vain. Sameer walked out of the office to calm himself from his thoughts he just needed some fresh air.
Next day when Aisha came back to office and they doing their normal Paper work as there was no case reported. Arjun n riya thought of speaking to sameer once again so that he can confess his feelings to aisha they were talking to sameer in his cabin n here chotu Aisha liza n Shree were doing paper work. Chotu Cursed saying "hey Deva itna likhana padna hota to main kuch aur nahin kar leta police main kyu aata?" Shree n others chuckled at this n continued their work. Shree said"Bheem tu sahi keh raha hai subah se sir main dard ho gaya hai" Aisha said " Accha koi baat nahin main coffee banati hoon tumhe aaram milega waise mere sir main bhi dard ho raha hai" With that she went to make coffee. In Sameers cabin both tried their best to explain him Arjun said " Dekh Sam yadi tu usse Sach main pyar karta hai to use bata kyu nahin raha hai yadi tune use nahin bataya to shayad tu use kho dega Aur main daave se keh sakta hoon ki aisha bhi tujhse bahut pyar karti hai yadi tu kehaga to wo naa nahi kahegi tu ne bahut kuch bardasht kiya hai ab bas bahut ho gaya tujhe bhi apni zindagi jeeni chahiye aur Aisha se acchi hamsafar tujhe nahin mil sakti" Riya added " Arjun Bilkul theek keh rahe hai bhai aap kyu aisa kar rahe hai kyu apne kushiyo ka gala khud hi ghoot rahe hai aap sirf ek kadve attet ki vajah se vo ab beet chuka hai bhai plese aap kab tak purani yaado ko lekar baithe rahege" Sameer Said " Tum dono bas karo please mujhe kuch nahin sunna hai kya chahte ho tum dono ki apne zindagi se use jod kar uski zindigi bhikhatre main daal do jahah har taraf maut ka saaya hai haan main jaanta hoon ki wo ye sab deal bhi kar legi par uski family kya galti hai unki wo kya apni beti ke aanso dekh payeege aur uski choti behen hai uska future uska kya main apne kushi ke liye aur apne sukh ke liye itne saare logo ko dukh nahin de sakta arjun Itna sab kuch jaane ke baad bhi keh do usse ki Aisha main tumse bahut pyar karta hoon" as soon as he finished the sentence they all heard a sound of glass breaking they turned towards door n saw aisha standing with shocked face. All looked at aisha n said " Aisha Tum"
Few minutes back when she went to make coffee. She thought for making coffee for Smaeer n Riya too she went to sameers cabin for giving them coffee n then she overheard everything she went into a shock when she heard that sameer loves her n tray sliped from her hand. Riya n Arjun tried to explain her" Aisha dekho hum sameer se yahi kehne aaye the ki wo tumse baat kare wo tumse bahut pyar karta hai use please galat mat samjhna" She just said" Mujhe sameer sir se baat karni hai akele main please aap log bahar jaayeye" Riya n Arjun again tried to explain her "Aisha please samajhne ki koshish karo" Aisha again said in a stern voice "Sir please" Arjun dragged riya outside n gave them some private time to sort-out matter among themselves. As soon as both of them left sameer was preparing him self for the worst reaction from aisha may be she would give him a tight slap or would curse him saying that he has broke his trust n all but he got surprised when aisha closed the door of cabin n ran towards her hugged him tightly n started crying. Before Sameer could overcome shock she asked him with tear filled eyes "Aapne ye pehle kyu nahin kaha yadi aaj bhi main nahin sunti ye sab to shayad aapki feelings ke baare main mujhe kabhi bhi pata nahin chalta aapki kahi ek ek majboori ek ek baat aap hi ki tarha sachhi hai aapko meri kushi ka itna khayal hai ki aap mujhe aur mere parivaar ko takleef main nahin dekh sakte par khud duniya bhar ka dukh utha sakte hai" Sameer said"Aisha dekho job hi"" Aisha cutting him" Mujhe kuch nahin sunna hai aapne ek bhi baar ye jaane ki koshish nahi ki jis ladki ke liye aap ye sab kuch kar rahe hai wo aapke baare main kya sochti hai kya feel karti hai aur yadi use pata chal gaya is baare main to wo kya sochegi aap apni zindgi ka faisla to kar sakte hai par meri nahin aur ye app acche samajh lijiye" With that she started crying sameer said " Aisha please shant ho jao I am sorry mujhe aisa nahin karna chaiye tha" Aisha again hugged him n said" Aap jante hai mere papa kehte hai ki shadi usse karo jo aapse pyar kare aur mujhe ye bhi kaha tha ki wo mere har faisle mmain mere saath honge aur khud maa aur papa ne mujh se poocha tha ki kya main aapko pasand karti hoon aur yadi haan to unhe koi problem nahi hai aur main aaj shyam jaa ke maa papa se keh doongi ki-" she stops suddenly realizing what she was going to say Smaeer smiled n said " Kya kahogi aisha?" She shyly lowered her gaze n was searching for right words sameer again asked "bolo na aisha kya kahogi" aisha shyly hid her head in his chest saying"yahi ki main bhi aapse bahut pyar karto hoon."

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 8 B
Sameer smiled at her innocent confession n hugged her back saying "I love U too". She was happy that she had made the right decision n has choosen a correct life partner for herself. After a while they parted the hug n Aisha said "Aapse ek baat poochu?" Sameer replied "Haan Poocho na"Aisha said"Aapne kabhi khul ke is baare main mujhse kyu nahin kaha main jaanti hoon aapko meri aurmummy papa ki bahut fikar hai par main jaanti hoon sirf yahi vajah nahin hai aap acche se jaante hai na main khatro se nahin darti hoon aur rahi meri family yadi main unki kamzori hoti to mujhe kabhi ETF main aane nahin dete unhe pata hai ki mere zindigi ab khatro se bhari hai phir kya baat hai?" Sameer passed her a weak smile n said" Haan par tumhari zindgi main aur complicated nahin banana chahta tha hamari zindigi ka yeh sabse bada sach hai Aisha ki shayad hame desh aur apni duty ke sivay kisi se pyar karne ka haqq nahin hai tum mujhse better deserve kati ho apni life main nahin chahta tha ki tumhre saath kuch galat hoo" Aisha said"Aap bhool gaye hai ki main bhi ETF ka hissa hoon aur aap please aisa mat kahiye infact main bahut kush hoon ki mujhe app mile jo mere kaam ko mere family ko itni respect deta hai main bas yahi chahti thi apni life se" Sameer said "Zindigi utni seedhe nahin hoti aisha jitna hum samajhte hai" pain was evident in his eyes when he said that Aisha noticed it n said "Kya baat hai sir" he tried to shrug it off saying "Kuch nahin" he tried to move out but aisha held his hand saying "Aap mujhe nahin batayege"
Sameer closed his eyes n sighed after a pause he said "Theek hai main batata hoon suno ye ek saal pehle ki baat hai jab main Mumbai main naya naya aaya tha ACP banne ke baad ye meri pehli poasting thi Ek case ke dauraan meri mulaquaat Sanjana naam ki ek ladki se hui use maine bachaya tha ek mall main kuch aatakiyo ne kuch logo ko hostage bana liya tha unme se wo bhi ek thi. Dhere dhere main usse pyar karne laga phir use propose bhi kiya aur usne maan bhi liya main bahut kush tha main chahta tha ki meri life shanty aur sukoon ki ho jab main ghar aakar baithu do din bhar ki thakan utarne ke liye aur mera saath den eke liye koi saathi ho jo meri muskil zindagi ko aasan bana de aur Sanjana me mujhe wo pyar aur wo humsafar mila. Wo aksar mujhse mere cases ke baare main poochti thi aur main use bata diya karta tha par nahin jaanta tha ki wo mujhe dhoka de rahi hai. Wo usi terrorist group ka hissa thi jise maine mall main pakda tha ye baat mujhe tab pata chali jab shadi ke pehle official background check hua aur wo mujhse pyar ka natak kar rahi thi sirf is liye ki use information chahiye thi. Main ander se toot gaya tha yakeen kho chukka tha main pyar pe aur rishto per se Arjun aur riya ne mujhe bahut support kiya. Uske baad maine faisla kiya ki unme se kisi ko nahin choduga maine usper zahir nahin hone diya ki main uski asliyat jaanta hoon main usi ke zariye uske gang tak paucha aur sabko khatam ka diya yaha tak ki us Sanjana ko maine khud goli maari thi. Uske baad maine tai kiya ki kabhi bhi apni feelings ko apne dil par haavi nahin hone doonga. Jab aapke rishte aur aapka pyar aapke farz ke beech main aate hai to kaisa lagta ye baat shayad tum acche se samajh sakti ho annu ko tum hi laayi thi na interrogation keliye par tunhe ye to yakeen tha ki wo bekasoor hai parmere paas to ye sahara bhi nahin tha "Sameer closed his eyes trying bear the pain n tears started rolling down his cheeks n aisha too had tears in her eyes.
Aisha said in a shaky voice" Mujhe bilkul nahin maalom tha ki aap ke saath aisa hua hai par iski saza aap khud ko kyu de rahe hai aap aisa kyu sochte hai ki aapko pyar karne ka haqq nahin hai? Shayad saccha pyar hi aapke dil ka marham ban sakta hai main aapse promise karti hoon ki hamara farz sabse upar hamesha tha hai aur rahega par aap uske liye dubara apna dil nahin dukhayege" With that she wiped her tears n sameer to wiped his tears n they both came out of his cabin n started coming towards the conference room suddenly sameer phone buzzed n it was call from DIG. Smaeer had a chat with him for few minutes n aisha went back to conference room n joined all her friends in the conference room. After finishing the call sameer also went to the conference room n said " team we have a new case aap sab us underworld Don Zafar Durrani ko jante ho na?" Shree said " Haan sir lekin uske baare main to koi surag nahin mila tha aur uski koi picture bhi nahin thi hamare records main kya koi lead mili hai uske bare main" Sameer said "Hana shree wo Dubai main tha aur waha ki agency ne hame uski picture beji hai aur ye bhi pata chala hai ki wo bhi is waqt mumbai main hai aur kuch bahut bada plan kar raha hai hame rookna hoga use DIG sir ke orders hai" Saying this sameer gives details to the entire team n when it was late night so he calls the day off n says"Guys kal milte hai ye case jald se jald solve karna hai " he droped aisha home n she went upstairs n sameer left biding him bye . As soon as she enters the house her mom welcomed her n after dinner avinash n avantika went to her room n said "beta hamne tumhari profile matrimony site pe banayi thi aur tumhare liye ek bahut accha rishta aaya hai unhone photo aur biodata bheja hai so tumne jo decide kiya hai hame bata do ye us ladke ki photo hai ladka dubai main business karta hai yadi tumhari haan hai to hum baat aage chalayege" Aisha was about to say that she loved sameer but when she saw the photograph she was shocked.


SO Kaisa tha mast ya bore zaroor batana n plz guys do comment without ur comment I will not be able to improve this story n no silent reading guys n excuse for typing mistakes

P recap - Aisha ko kiski photo dikhayi hai ? n what change will this praposal bring in her life 😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice..
Loved it..
Ariya try to make sam that he should move on..
Sam was amandment on his decision..
Next day arjun again tries to convince sam..
Aisha listens it n is shocked..
Sasha confess their love..
Sam reveals his past..
New case..
Aisha's parents shows her a pic they have selected for her..
She is shocked to see the pic..
Awesome..
Curious to know the pic belongs to whom n why aisha got shocked..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
Edited by unishaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res ... mujhe time milne do ... ye mai sabse pehle khatam karungi 😉
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Unres
Phew!!!!!!!!!!! read all 8 chapters at one go 😊
First of all... excellent choice of actors for the respective roles... 👏👏👏
Interesting... very interesting 😉
Brave Aisha ... I loved her attitude, smartness and presence of mind. 👍🏼
She is actually fit to be in ETF 👍🏼
Naughty Ananya and Riya ... abhi se Aisha ko Sameer k saath fix karne mein lagey hain 😆😆😆
Hospital wala case ... Chhotu ward boy aur Sameer Mareez ... 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Cant imagine 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Agey ki story bhi interesting turns le rahi hai ... 😉
Punjab village wala case ekdum super ... Sam-Aisha ek dusre ka khayal rakhtey huye ☺️
Fake currencies case ne Aisha ki pol khol di family ke saamne 😳😳
Good that Sameer made her family understand 😊
Team back to Punjab
Ahan... Aisha cooking 😉
Blast ... haaye ram ... ye kya kar daala...
Aisha ki jaan ko khatra 😲
Ye Ekta Kapoor types scene rakhna zaroori hai kya 😡😡😡
Riya cheater ... chhup ke dusron ki baatein sunti hai 😉
Haaye... mera Sammy kyun itna dukhi hai
Cool... dono ko award... milna hi chahiye 👏👏👏
Award function mein Sameer ko family bhi mil gayi 🤗
O Teriii!!!!!!!!!! Sameer Rathod, ETF Chief gaata bhi hai 😉 ... ahannn
Beautiful song ... kisi zamane mein ye mera favourite song hua karta tha ... abhi bhi hai 😛
Cool... Papa-Mumma Kapoor ko beti ki shadi ki chinta hai... and thankfully unhe Sameer pasand bhi hai 😉
😆😆😆 Poor Bheem ... paperwork ne fasa diya
oopsss... ye Arjun and Riya to chadh hi gaye Sam ke sar par ... 😳😳😳
And mujhe laga hi tha ki Aisha ab coffee lekar Sameer k cabin mein jayegi and wo unki baat sun hi legi 😳😳😳
Aur aisa hi hua 😉
ye lo!!!! poori coffee gira di... itni mehnat bekar aur office ganda ho gaya wo alag 😉 (just kidding)
ab shuru hua emotional atyachar ... 😳
But yes... Aisha ka confession was the best part 👏👏👏
Sameer ka past ... it was really really really super shocking and amazing 👏👏👏
His GF being a terrorist and Sameer killing her ... superb 👏👏👏... agar time mile to is par ek OS likhna ... u wrote ki ek saal pehle ki baat hai ... so u can take idea ki ek saal pehle Riya-Arjun ki shadi ki shopping ek mall mein kar rahe they aur waha terrorist attack hua ... aur fir kaise Sameer ne Sanjana ko bachaya... unki dating... Sameer kaise uska background check karta hai and finally kaise unke group ko pakad ke Sanjana ko goli maarta hai 👍🏼
So ab Aisha ke liye rishta aaya hai ... 😉
ummm... kuch kehna chahti hoon... par yaha nahi ... PM bhejungi 😉
Supercool story and lovely twists so far ... I'm enjoying the story and its pace... would love to read more 😊
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
shayam ko unres karoongi
unres
it was awesome update dear.
finally confession ho hi gaya.
i am feeling bad for sam.
update soon.
and thanx for the pm.
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome yaar..
kl last paper tha.
saare paper thik thak ho gaye.
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
hii read still now read chap 2
Its realy nice so finaly sameer offer aisha job in etf n she eccept sam 's proposal
her first salery she bought gift for all ..
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but tell me sam ke old watch ka raaj kya hai
tee invitation good going...
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Posted: 11 years ago
arey tum aise point pe brk kyu lagati ho??
chalo acha h confession to hua atlst..
aww..i fwmeel bad 4 sam..bahut bura hua uske sath..
bt m sure aisha ab usey sambhal legi..
arey aisa kiska pic dikha dia usey?? pllzz updt soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks Radhika
Love u stay tuned 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bgargate

Res ... mujhe time milne do ... ye mai sabse pehle khatam karungi 😉


So sweet dear love u
Tum Ek kaam karo saare parts aaram se padh lo I have index
AUr Ek saath comment karna ki kaisa laga 😊

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