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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zaynie259

read all the chapters in one go

amazing story...keep going...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Goldie dearie,it was a superb and amazing update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pihu_angad

awesome,,

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Goldie dearie,it was a superb and amazing update.
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Continue soonish.
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 6 A

Arjun calmed him n said "Tum chinta mat karo sam use kuch nahin hoga "Sameer said "Haan use kuch nahin hoga mujhe pata hai wo mujhe aise let down nahin karegi maine uncle aunty se kaha tha ki aisha meri responsibility hai kya jawaab doonga main unko jab wo aisha ko aisi haalat main dekhege" Arjun Said " please sam tum stress mat loo take rest tumhe zaroorat hai " Riya said" Arjun main bhai ke paas hoon aap ek baar doctor se milke aisha ki condition check kariye " Arjun went to check the condition but still there was no improvement . Team members were getting tense with every passing hour as there were no signs of improvement in aisha n moreover they were not in condition to shift aisha as it could be more dangerous for her in this state. So they could do nothing but wait for aisha to come back to senses n pray to almighty that she should be fit n fine. Smaeer after few hours had recovered a bit n he kept on asking about aisha at regular intervals but what he got was same answer that she is still in same position n still unconscious . Doctors at the hospital were trying their best to get aisha back to senses but it seemed that all efforts were going vain. Aisha was not responding to any medicines n treatment . Smaeer was loosing his patience n finally sameer barged into doctors cabin n asked "Doctor Please kya ho raha hai abhi tak aisha ko hosh kyu nahin aaya hai 18 hours ho chuke hai abhi tak koi improve ment kyu nahin hai?" Doctor was also helpless but seeing sammers condition n agony he said "Mr rathore aap shant ho jaayiye aap ko bhi gehri chote aayi hai aisha ji ke liye hum jo best kar sakte hai kar rahe hai par abhi tak na jaane kyu wo treatment ko respond nahin kar rahi hai jaise wo jeene ki umeed chod chuki hai" Smaeer said "Doctor kya main aisha se mil sakta hoon?" Doctor protested saying" Mr. Rathod aap ki haalat abhi theek nahin hai aur aisha ji abhi behosh hai main aise main permission nahin de sakta" Sameer said "Please doctor mujhe ek baar mil lene dijiye" Doctor finally agreed n sameer went to aisha room to meet her.

When he entered what he saw broke his heart. Aisha was lying lifeless on the bed connected to different machines. He composed himself n went near her bed n took a chair. He clutched her hand carefully n started to speak to her"Aisha please aankhe kholo hosh main aao tumne itni bahaduri se pure gao ko bachaya to tum bahaduri se apni zindagi ke liye nahin lad sakti. Tum kehti ho na ki tum meri respect karti ho to tumhara chief aur tumhara dost tumse keh raha ki waapas aa jao tum mujhe aise let down nahin kar sakti kya khonga main uncle aur aunty se ki main apni zimmedari nahin nibha paya. Yadi mere liye nahin to please apne mummy aur papa ke liye tum waapas aajao.tumhare bina wo toot jayenge"Aisha was still not responding to sameers voice. He broke down n when he saw that his efforts are all vain so he tried to move but he found his hand clutched by aisha n she was breathing heavily. Sameer called riya who was watching this from outside n asked her to call the doctor immediately. Doctor arrived n checked n confirmed that she was coming back to senses n is safe now but she needs rest n will recover soon . Sameer n riya had tears of joy in their eyes riya said "Bhai aap ne aisha ko bacha liya maine suna shayad aaj aap ki aawaz use waapas llayi hai" Sameer in a stern voice " Riya promise me ye sab kisi ko pata nahin chalna chahiye tumne jo dekha use bhool jao aur khas kar aisha se is baat ka zikra bilkul nahin karna" Riya said " Bhai kyu nahin yadi aap uski itni care karte hai aapne uski jaan bachayyi hai to kyu nahin" Cutting her short sameer said "Riya please tum mujhe bhai kehti ho na to ise bade bhai ki request samajh lo ya apne chief ka order par ye baat kisi ko mat batana main nahin chahta ki uski zindagi main koi aur problem ho wo bhi meri vajah se bilkul nahin so please" Riya sighed in defeat n sameer marched out of the room .

After half n hour when aisha came back to senses she asked "Sir kaise hai wo theek hai na unhe bhi chot lagi thi?" Shree said "Haan wo bilkul theek hai dusre kamre main rest kar rahe hai" Doctor entered the room to check aisha n team left to let her take rest . Doctor checked her n said " Aisha ji ab aap kaisa feel kar rahi hai" Asiah said " Much better Doctor" Docttor said "Good bas do teen din ke baad aap ghar jaa sakti hai" She repled " Thanks doctor par Sameer sir kaise hai unhe kya zayada chot aayi hai" Doctor said "Haan wo theek hai unhe thodi chote aayi thi ab wo theek hai par aapko aise dekh kar wo bahut ghabra gaye the har ghante aapki haalat poochte the mujhse aur jab aapko 18 ghante tak hosh nahin aaya to wo khud aaye the aapke kamre main aur unke aane ke kuch der baad hi aap hosh main aa gayi aur abhi aap apna khayal rakhiye take proper rest warna aapki tabiyat par bura asar padega " She smiled n asked doctor to send riya in. Riya entered n said "Kya baat hai aisha mujhe kyu bulaya?" Aisha coming straight to point said "Haan Kya sir yahan aaye the aur unke aane ke baad hi mujhe hosh aaya tha?" Riya was in a fix n said "Tumhe ye kaise pata chala ?" Aisha in a firm voice said " Doctor ne bataya mujhe sach sach batao" Riya nodded in yes n said " Haan wo aaye the unke hi wajah se tujhe hosh aaya" Riya told her everything. Aisha said "Phir sir mujhse milne kyu nahin aaye? Mujhe unhe thanks kehna hai meri jaan bachane ke liye aur unki tabiyat kaise hai" Riya said "Unhone mujhe mana kiya tha tumhe ye batane se wo nain chahte ki unki wajah se tumhari life main koi problem ya complication ho" Aisha was stunned for a while n said "Par unki wajah se mere life main problem kyu aayegi ye sab kya hai main unse baat karti hoon " She walked towards his room n it was vacant she checked at the reception n found that sameer has been discharged n left the the hospital.

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 6 B
Aisha was shocked at sameers sudden behavior. She was puzzled that what made him think that his presence may cause some complications or problems in her life. In fact he saved her many times from the problems n helped her too when it was required. She could not bear this n went back to sarpanchs house where rest of team was there with sameer. She entered the room n found him lost in thoughts. She called him" Sir aap kya soch rahe hai?" her voice broke his trance n he said with a surprise "Aisha tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Tumhe aaram ki zaroorat hai tum hospital se kyu aa gayi?" Aisha said in a stern voice" Yahi to main aapse poochne aayi hoon ki aap yaha kyu aa gaye chot to aapko bhi lagi hai "hearing her stern voice he understood that she requires explanation to his indifferent behavior but he didn't knew that she knows every thing. She asked again"aap kyu aagaye wahan se sir? Appko aisa kyu lagta hai ki aapki vajah se mujhe koi problem hogi. Mujhe doctor ne bataya ki aapne meri jaan bachayi thi aap har ghante mere baare main unse poochte the aap sach batiye kya hua hai?" sameer sighed in defeat n said "Kya jaana chahti ho Aisha haan ye sach hai ki main is liye waapas aa gaya ki meri wajah se tumhe koi problem na ho" Aisha said "Par aapki vajah se mujhe kyu koi problem hogi?" Sameer said " Aisha mere kehne par tum ETF main aayi thi aur jab se join kiya hai tab se har case me tumhari jaan ko khatra raha hai is baar to -" his voice chocked after this n after a small silence he composed n spoke to her again"Main tumhe aur khatre main nahin dekh sakta tum par tumhare ghar ki zimmedari hai aur main nahin dekh sakta tumhe aise khatro se khelte hue bhagwaan ka sukra hai ki kuch nahin hua warna main kya kehta tumhare parents se ?" Aisha said "Sir aaj pehli baar mummy papa ke ailiva kisi ne mere liye itni care dikhayi hai aur ETF join karna mera faisla tha aapne to bas mujhse poocha tha. ETF join karne ke baad mujhe do aur jagah se Job offer hue thi Par maine join nahin kiya jaante hai kyu kyuki mere liye ETf main rehna sirf job nahin hai balki ab ye mera junoon ban chukka hai desh ki seva karna mera sapna tha aur ye sapna aapne poora kiya hai mujhe ETF ka hissa bana ke. Please Sir aap aisa mat soochye ki aapki vajah se ye sab hua." Smaeer tried to say" Aisha par -"Cutting him short she said "please sir aur kuch nahin hum ye discussion dubara nahin karenge" Sameer Sighed n after 2 days of rest all went back to Mumbai.
As from this village of Punjab they had got the large consignment of ammunition they submitted in headquarters n after two days they received a letter praising entire ETF n also specifically Aisha n sameer who without caring for their lives saved the entire village n both will be awarded a gallantry award for this act in a small function n party from the government. Shree told about this to the entire team n everyone was happy. As aisha was on leave n still recovering shree made his way to her house to share this good news . When he entered her house he met her n asked "Kaise ho aisha?" She said with a smile " I am fine shree 2 din mein back to work" Shree said " Good waise main tujhe kush khabri dene aaya tha tujhe aur sir ko gallantry award mila hai government ki taraf se kal celebration hai uncle aunty aunu sab ko leke kal theek 7Pm tumhe aana hai." Aisha was very happy n so were her parents they were extremely proud of their daughter. They had always thought of a bright future for their aisha as she was sharp, Hard working n courageous from very beginning n to see their daughter awarded was like a dream come true for them n their happiness had no bounds. They all got ready to leave for the venue of celebration .It was big day for them n for their daughter too.
As soon as they entered the venue all greeted them. Aisha wore a beautiful plain saree of off white colour n look beautiful as n angel from heaven. She met her team mates except sameer n all congratulated her n all even complimented her for her beauty but she was searching for sameer as she wanted to congratulate him too . She was searching for him n asked shree" Shree sir kahah hai wo aaye nahin kya?" Shree smiled n said "Oye Rathore sir ki aastha tu na ek mala le aur uspe rathore sir ka naam japna shuru kar de do din sir ko dekhe bagir ghar pe kaise kaate the tune" Aisha in a furious tone "Shree bakwaas bandh karo kuch bhi bolte ho tum main sir ko congratulate karne ke liye dhoond rahi thi unhe bhi award mila hai aur unhone meri jaan bhi bachayi thi to mujhe itna to karna chahiye na" Shree Again smiled in naughty way n said " jaayiye meera ji aapke Krishna ji waha khade hai" pointing towards sameer. Aisha shook her head in disbelief n giving shree a "is ka kuch nahin ho sakta" look n marched towards sameer to wish him. She came closer n in polite voice said "Congratulations sir" Sameer turned to thank but what he saw made him completely speechless. He could not help but stare at the beauty n innocence personified in front of his eyes. She wished him again loudly n that bring him out of trance n he relied "Thanks Aisha n congratulations to u too aur bahut achhi lag rahi ho" she blushed slightly at his compliment n muttered "Thanks" Sameer met her parents also n they also congratulated him . When the program started aisha n sameer were called on the dice n they were given the award by the chief guest of the programe. Aisha requested that she wanted to receive this award from her parents n sameer as they have supported her a lot . Avinash,avantika n sameer handed over the award to aisha n after that sameer requested avinash n avantika to hand over the award to him as well. They were extremely touched by the sameers gesture n aisha too. Avinash said " Par sameer ji hum kaise -" Smaeer cutting him short said" Uncle mere koi family to nahin hai par kehte hai ki bado ke aashirwaad ke bagir har kushi adhuri hoti hai to kya aap aisha ke saath mujhe bhi aashirwaad nahin deenge" Avinash n avantika smiled n gave the award n sameer touched their feet n they gave their blessings to sameer .

SO Kaisa tha mast ya bore lease give ur comments no silent reading samjhe ya samjhaoo 😆 please excuse for typing mistake

P recap - Fun N masti in party n a decision of aishas Parents regarding her life 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb dear..
Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
Edited by unishaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thhaannkk u so much 4 d lovely update!!
*sigh* thank god aisha ko kuch nahi hua!!
aww..sameer's voice saved her..how sweet..!!😳
arey..aisa kyu kia??..why was he indifferent??
lo...ye janab bahut zyada nahi sochte!!😕
oh..award 4 them..great!!👏👏
they both deserve that!!
haye!!..beautiful update!!
update soon!!😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb dear..
Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..

Thanks dear unishaz
Keep commenting n stay tuned 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

thhaannkk u so much 4 d lovely update!!

*sigh* thank god aisha ko kuch nahi hua!!
aww..sameer's voice saved her..how sweet..!!😳
arey..aisa kyu kia??..why was he indifferent??
lo...ye janab bahut zyada nahi sochte!!😕
oh..award 4 them..great!!👏👏
they both deserve that!!
haye!!..beautiful update!!
update soon!!😃

Thanks Ishita love u
Yes they deserved the award
I think Sameer has a point he was worried as Aisha joined ETF Because of him he offered her to join so heis feeling guilty for aishas State well thats my point of view
THanks n keep commenting😊

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