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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

its interesting .hope to read more

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binimoti

@binimoti

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Hey loved the update, you updated soon,

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aspalas

@aspalas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

👏👏👏

v nice...U depicted the scene very well...and the word choice is great to describe the emotions ...👏

we can feel the pain of characters...but I like the most, where u describe Anjali's addiction to the fiend, that was awesome...

Though it was short but it was great...👏

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Shyam is a filthy filthy man and I expected better from Arnav. What is wrong with Anjali? Is she freaking phycho or what... chi chi
when will Khushi show some fighting spirit?

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Zee just found this story and I must say you are a true writer.

Can u plz PM me

Thnx

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Amazing yet quite a scary and painful update,

I can't believe what a pathetic and creepy man Shyam is, even in the presence of Anjali he has no shame.

I'm shocked at Anjali she actually requested Shyam to help Khushi, poor Anjali is very deluded and thinks Shyam is a saint.

Poor Khushi was feeling so disgusted after Shyam had helped her, I felt so sorry for her.

Why was Arnav standing behind the pillar and misunderstanding the situation he should have come to the kitchen and helped Khushi.

A small request this story is very interesting to have short updates, lol.

The update it was a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Hey just found this story and found it quite intriguing!!😊

Though I am hating this completely blind Arnav but still I want to know where this story will leads to??!!

A separation or a redemption perhaps😕

The way you described Khushi's feelings was awesome👏⭐️.My heart cried for her😭

You write so well that even though its quite heart wrenching,still I want to read it further(tell u a secret,I just love sad and heartwrenching stories mostly,I dont know why but I do😆😳)

Update soon and please add me to ur pm list😛

PS.You deserve much more appreciation for your amazing piece of work.I am surprised that why u aren't getting much responses? It deserve way beyond just 30/40 likes⭐️