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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Lazy you are crazy <3 And I laaau you <3

Okay. Come one. Sanaya and Mohit look pretty hot together. And yes, that man is hubba hubba. Obviously not Barun Sobti, but still pretty drool worthy.

My lips are sealed on the love trangle question. 😳 Read and find out 😉

Love you and thank you thank you thank you <3 🤗

Originally posted by: LazilyAnonymous
LOL Another of you-need-to-see jodi...We were talking about it and here it makes an appearance😆

He does look pretty hot 😉

BTW, is it a love triangle??

I loved the way you described Khushi's thoughts when she woke up!!! Awww Arnav always does hold her hand while sleeping!!! Yeh uski aadat hai!!! ❤️ And I can totally see that adorable pout on my BFFL's face 😳

Damn...Khushi, please dont overthink!!! Bharosa karo apne Arnavji par!!! But it must be hard for Khushi to trust him after his behavior towards her!!! :(

And Arnav thinking the warmth was his mother just shows how much he misses his maa and her presence!!! It also shows how Khushi comforts him and how much he needs her ❤️

Wonder what Arnav will do to remove her misunderstanding!!! I just hope he doesnt insult her while blowing away her doubts!!! 🤔

LOVE YOU ZEEWA 🤗

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Hublkjshurhf? Omg?! Are you commenting on my writing?! *swoons a bit*

Your FF is one of my fave of all time! 😲 Thank you so very much for the comment. I can't tell you how flattered I am.

🤗

I'll try to make the updates longer 😳

Originally posted by: Anarocksick
Your writing is love and this story has got just the write amount of angst in it. The characters are written beautifully and they really make me miss IPKKND.
I really disliked the kitchen scene,...I knew he;d be watching and misunderstanding. And that's what happened 🥺
Can't wait to find out what'll happen next.

P.S.- Really wish your chapters were longer. 😳

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Thank you so much! 🤗

Originally posted by: aspalas
👏👏👏

v nice...U depicted the scene very well...and the word choice is great to describe the emotions ...👏

we can feel the pain of characters...but I like the most, where u describe Anjali's addiction to the fiend, that was awesome...

Though it was short but it was great...👏

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

*blushing like mad*

Thank you my dear! 🤗

Send a buddy request to my PM account, ConAmor, and I'll PM you with all my updates 😳

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Zee just found this story and I must say you are a true writer.
Can u plz PM me

Thnx

Edited by aamir18 - 11 years ago

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Your comments are so thoughtful and you make such an effort, and I get butterflies whenever I see them 🤗 Thank you so much Sarah! <3 I am so flattered and so glad you're enjoying it!

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Amazing yet quite a scary and painful update,

I can't believe what a pathetic and creepy man Shyam is, even in the presence of Anjali he has no shame.

I'm shocked at Anjali she actually requested Shyam to help Khushi, poor Anjali is very deluded and thinks Shyam is a saint.

Poor Khushi was feeling so disgusted after Shyam had helped her, I felt so sorry for her.

Why was Arnav standing behind the pillar and misunderstanding the situation he should have come to the kitchen and helped Khushi.

A small request this story is very interesting to have short updates, lol.

The update it was a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Hina <3 Thank you so much for this beautiful comment <333 We all secretly love sad stories! 😆 That is why I am writing it 😆

To get PMs, please send a buddy request to ConAmor 😊

Thank you so much again for reading <3 I'm touched.

Originally posted by: Hina69
Hey just found this story and found it quite intriguing!!😊

Though I am hating this completely blind Arnav but still I want to know where this story will leads to??!!

A separation or a redemption perhaps😕

The way you described Khushi's feelings was awesome👏⭐️.My heart cried for her😭

You write so well that even though its quite heart wrenching,still I want to read it further(tell u a secret,I just love sad and heartwrenching stories mostly,I dont know why but I do😆😳)

Update soon and please add me to ur pm list😛

PS.You deserve much more appreciation for your amazing piece of work.I am surprised that why u aren't getting much responses? It deserve way beyond just 30/40 likes⭐️

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

I just hope Khushi leaves this hell soon...

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AKHUSHI

@AKHUSHI

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Just read all parts of this FF. Going very good. It's a lsesson to anybody.. What you see may not be true. What is happening will be totally different. Khushi closed her eyes when that snake touched her. She closed because she was feeling so bad I don't know which word I can use here, but I guess Arnav thought different meaning here. I want Khushi to leave Arnav and Arnav should repent badly. I wanted this kind of story line in original too. But I didnot get it there. Please continue. Waiting for the update.

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

A year down the closing of the serial & still writing another version of the same? Its obvious ki the hangover is still there. Your writing is good, but the same MU? Pl handle it differently. There have been multiplevversions of the same, I hope this will have that freshness to sustain interest.