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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Amazing update! They just let their love guide them but hmm I wonder the morning will bring

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enlightenme

@enlightenme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

this was it. I never thought Arnav-Khushi would do this in the haze of alcohol. I felt it wrong at so many levels, it felt like Arnav took advantage of Khushi's intoxicated state and her love for him. Even though he was also drunk but, he is no novice to sex and alcohol, he should have been in better control. Now I can't even think how difficult his redemption may be. I'm sorry if my opinion regarding this chapter offended u in any way. I couldn't help but feel this way. A gentleman never takes advantage of lady when her guards are down and she is in an intoxicated state. My opinion regarding Arnav is going down every passing update.

Waiting for the next chapter more than ever. Just want to know whether they both are in the same page as they were before this or moved to different pages. Can't say about Arnav, but Khushi's life definately moved to another page if not this relationship. Will Arnav continue to abuse her or be a bit more considerate can't wait much for the next chapter. Please this is an ardent request. I'm sure most of thee readers will agree.

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zainab Rameez

@zainy26

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Superb update dr.i lovd it

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Loved the update

He apologized to Khushi..

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

You have every right to feel annoyed! Heck, even I was annoyed while typing the update 😆 So no, I am not offended at all, but appreciate your honesty in expressing your disappointment. If I was the reader, I would agree with you wholeheartedly.

Just a point however, Arnav is EXTREMELY intoxicated at this point and completely unable to grasp the consequences of his actions -- be it his apology or having sex with Khushi. Yes, he is a man who can handle a couple drinks -- but seeing Khushi with Bradley caused him to drown himself in the sorrows of dejection.

It's the shortcomings of my own writing that do not make this point obvious, but I want to bring attention to this before the story continues and confuses my readers.

Thank you so much for the comment. I hope you enjoy the future updates as well.

Originally posted by: enlightenme
this was it. I never thought Arnav-Khushi would do this in the haze of alcohol. I felt it wrong at so many levels, it felt like Arnav took advantage of Khushi's intoxicated state and her love for him. Even though he was also drunk but, he is no novice to sex and alcohol, he should have been in better control. Now I can't even think how difficult his redemption may be. I'm sorry if my opinion regarding this chapter offended u in any way. I couldn't help but feel this way. A gentleman never takes advantage of lady when her guards are down and she is in an intoxicated state. My opinion regarding Arnav is going down every passing update.

Waiting for the next chapter more than ever. Just want to know whether they both are in the same page as they were before this or moved to different pages. Can't say about Arnav, but Khushi's life definately moved to another page if not this relationship. Will Arnav continue to abuse her or be a bit more considerate can't wait much for the next chapter. Please this is an ardent request. I'm sure most of thee readers will agree.

Edited by aamir18 - 11 years ago

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Skyfall

@Skyfall

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

Loved the update,

I obviously am a bit worried about what happens when they wake up since none of them were in the right state of mind,

Loved how you have written the update!

Can't wait for the next chapter 😊

Edited by Skyfall - 11 years ago

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

I'm not sure how I feel about the fact that they actually had sex. I love the way you described it, but I can't reconcile the fact that I too, feel like Arnav should have backed off. Granted, they were both drunk. His last confession nearly broke my heart- I honestly hope that he begs for forgiveness when he finally figures out the truth.

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#608

That was long time coming...the uncontrollable passion they have for each other...I am not sure what I feel about that...considering how he hates her...has no respect for her or her feelings but apologized under intoxication and then had her...kushi loves him...but I wonder if this night changes to many things ...awaiting the next chapter I want to see what Arnav does...he has a way to blame kushi for all wrongs in his life ...he has destroyed her he can do more...

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#609

that was hottt.. lovely update.. but the consequences of this satiated night will be worth watching.. khushi once again lived the moment which she have been doing from the time she have arrived in new york.. one more thing she did and i don't feel she will regret it.. arnav.. don't know he is very confused soul.. only thing is that he shouldn't blame khushi for what happened.. and start calling her names which he does.. that will kill khushi.. who otherwise too won't be living from very next day as her living days are getting over as they are going back home, her jail.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊