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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#251

RES

unres

seriously he is thinking and treating her like that ...a maid...

you better have a good repentance in your pocket...

Why too short, I was thinking you have more for editing and that's why I RES it.

Update soon please...😊

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

I badly wanted the story to mov fwd atleast singl step...with them abroad n all how will Arna know of Khusis truth??? h wil hav a gala time of repentanc..n iam waiting for dat..

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FLGirl

@FLGirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#253

I read the update and it was great but I have forgotten the story. Will come back and read it from the beginning again to remember. I do know this is a story I like so I will surely come back to it and I hope u update soon

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shah.1234

@shah.1234

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

ohhh this is disgusting
he shows her as a maid
even didn't with her in aircraft
poor khushi she have to face each and everything alone
even arnav is not with her in they foreign country
really sad

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@.Boss.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

That was good but a short update! Arnav is such an ass. A maid? 😡 That really infuriated me. I hope he repents REAL hard after doing all that shit to khushi. Update soon!

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stories.1408

@stories.1408

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

His behavior is just unforgivable.how can u treat your love as a maid...doesnt he started loving her before wedding or there was no love from his side.may he suffer like hell

Edited by stories.1408 - 11 years ago

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Thank you to everyone who have commented so far! Just want to apologize again for the length of this update. I understand how irritating it can be when it happens, and I truly apologize. The next one will def be longer, and I'll keep a word count to keep myself motivated 😃 Thank you again SO much to those who comment. I promise to reply individually to some comments soon 😳

Lots of love,

Zee

Edited by aamir18 - 11 years ago

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LazilyAnonymous

@LazilyAnonymous

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: aamir18
Thank you to everyone who have commented so far! Just want to apologize again for the length of this update. I understand how irritating it can be when it happens, and I truly apologize. The next one will def be longer, and I'll keep a word count to keep myself motivated 😃 Thank you again SO much to those who comment. I promise to reply individually to some comments soon 😳

Lots of love,

Zee

Aww its okay. i would rather have short frequent updates rather than long never-there updates 🤗

But I dont mind long updates 😆

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LazilyAnonymous

@LazilyAnonymous

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: aamir18
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