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@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Thank you so very much, and you are very welcome 😃

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle
awesome update
thanks for the pm

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

He absolutely needs to wake up and smell the roses! Just like the ASR in the actual serial did. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I'll be updating very soon... hopefully by tonight. 😊

Originally posted by: smat
Anazing update
he needs to wake up from his dream land and smell the rose.
feel unhappy to see her go through so much heartache because of that one person not having any trust on his so called love.
Pls update soon waiting to read the next update ⭐️

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

In the letter, Arnav told Khushi to get ready for a honeymoon to New York. Thank you so much for the comment 😳 I'll try to make updates longer!

Originally posted by: Angellic_doll
Thanks for the pm. What did khushi see in the letter? Pls give us a longer update. Its short pls. Continue soon.

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Oh my god! You are A M A Z I N G. This comment literally put the biggest smile on my face and I am doing a little happy dance, despite the judgment from my roommate. Thank you SO much for this beautiful comment. I am literally so ecstatic to receive this, and assure you that you are far more awesome than I am.

The dude in the banner is actor Mohit Raina and will enter later in the story. I'm so glad you like them, cause I made them myself 😆 I'm not that popular a writer, so I make my own banners for the story... just to give a face to the writing.

Love,

Zee

Originally posted by: Honeybee27
Hey thanks for the PM 😃

Oh my gosh!!! A M A Z I N G ❤️
I read all the parts again and I must say that this story is so unique!!! Your way of writing breathes life into the story making it so realistic and just..WOW!!!
I really love this plot and I am really feeling bad for Khushi...*sobs*
I can't wait to see Arnavs redemption after finding out the truth...even though its probably far from now
I wonder what changes the NY trip will bring to their relationship...can't wait to see what's in store for us
Keep writing!!!😃 You're awesome!!!
Love:
Tia

P.S: who's that dude in the banner? (Btw...your banners are just #Awesomeness😊)

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: mishachwdhury
Awesome update

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Keep reading and hopefully you'll find out 😃 Thank you so much for this comment!

Originally posted by: ranogill
Has she got enough willpower to resist him

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

OMG, Sarah. I love you so very much too! I can't appreciate the effort you put in enough. It takes a true friend and a true reader to write such a thoughtful comment. I love your take on the chapter, absolutely spot on and accuate 😃 And the fact that you think I have the best redemption story is literally making my heart flutter and fly to the moon. I am so HONORED, in every sense of the word. Thank you SO very much for reading and comment. The least I can do is dedicate a chapter.

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Awww thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me that was so sweet of you and a wonderful gesture, much appreciated.

I love you very much and you are an amazing writer.

Coming to the update it was slightly less heart breaking, yet still quite emotional.

Arnav probably thinks he has become a saint by turning her alarm off but no he is still a monster as he should have made her sleep in inside.

I mean how heartless can he be, he saw her condition and knows she looks so ill and still he is letting her sleep in the cold.

Poor Khushi not wanting to dress up and I don't blame her as she already has to keep up a pretense for a lot of other things,

Yippee my guess was right about Nani and Anjali discussing there honeymoon,

To be honest I want Khushi to refuse as I only want them to go away when Arnav know she Is innocent,

Arnav's thinking needs to be washed with bleach, as he thinks he can take her away and she can rest and then he can resume hating her, I've got a better idea why can't he stay in India and find out the truth behind his pathetic brother in law Shyam.

Also I must praise you as I have read many redemption stories on this forum and yours by far is the best one I have read.

The update was a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

I assure you that you'll get the redemption you want 😆 Thank you so much for reading 😃

Originally posted by: MrMrsChiping.
i always read your story with the song on first page of your story..its bit advice for others to..it felt awesomly sad:(

he wants to took her nk and when will back broke her agan..i want to know how "he" will break after knwoing kushi..
my luck is not good in reading sad story..I am expecting someting from you ..good redemption track and please dont discontinue it>>..!
I AM loving it..true emtoions feelings ahh awesome..!

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

Omg! Thank you so much for this beautiful comment 😳 I apologize about the length... so glad you're still reading despite it! 😃

Originally posted by: pearl.b
I love ur updates...they r short but d intensity n d emotions packed in it leaves u utterly speechless...i cant see khushi suffering like this...please make arnav doubt on shyam...by d way marvelous update.

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#240

SPOT ON THOUGHT. I truly couldn't have put it better. 👏

Originally posted by: rulama
That was one heck of an update. Arnav conniving to revive Khushi to look down upon her. Its like fattening the cow to be butchered!