ArHi TS : UNEXPECTED ~ Part-2 Pg1 15/10 *COMPLETED* - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry for commenting this late.

There's a reason why I'm hooked to IF FF section...There are so many talented writers who take small aspects of IPK to build their own stories.

You my dear did such a wonderful job. I liked it that Khushi left when she did in your story. So she moved to Mumbai and tried getting on with life. Well, Arnav wouldn't be Arnav if he accepted his feelings easily right.

I love Faraq padtha hai track and you used that one to show how much Khushi cares for him. Although she is sensible in being aloof coz she had been hurt often neough in the past.

But the twist in the tale which is absolutely your own took the cake. What an interesteing tale you wove about Akash, Payal and the boy...lovely.

Really enjoyed it. And they lived happily ever after
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing story! I loved it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved itwhen Arnav said he missed fighting with Khushi.just missedher.
Loved the whole story.
Different and interesting.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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AQUAGAL...
Your every word is just magical~~'
Arnav &Khushi can't ignore each other~~
Rather they get oblivious of the world around them~~

Prateek's entry was great~'
It was actually the punishment to Raizada who did let Khushi go in the past~~

NOW,TIME HAS SLIPPED FROM HIS HANDS~~
But no~he has a brain afterall~'
KKG isn't wearing sandoor & mangalsutre~~

I LOVED HIS TACTS TO MAKE KKG FALL FOR HIM~~
U cooked a good story about Aakash & Payal ~~~

Arhi r one in my Arhiland~~
Together forever !!!! 😳
😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
nice one.. just started reading...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Despite of all the difficulties, they are finally together..and Prateek is too cute:)
Loved it..<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
reading it again,. still love it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Beautiful ts, loved Arnav's confession
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woww! Such a sweet story wid a cute lil kid !
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful story.. Their meeting again was destined.. And Prateek helped them come closer...

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