~STORY OF TWO HEARTS ~(Taarey SS)*On hold* - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Awesome !!!
Excited for coming chaps :D
Uodate soon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
nice and itneresting start
how datre she talk with taani like this

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concpet
Chapt 1 was lovely
Hate that samira
arjun nd aaliya r such a good friends
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello hi people!!!. To dekho main laut aayi hoon ek aur chapter ke saath. Maine poore ek din kuch nahi likha , pata hai kyun?...thanx to swaron, aisa shock lagaya ki likhna to door ki baat mujhe raat bhar neend nahi aayi...okay topic change...back to taarey...so as informed before this chappy is also taariya.And pls like and comment to karna yaar motivation milta hai.
P.S.-Samira is hamari story ki local villian :p.
So enjoy...


~CHAPTER 2~

Ar: Par aliya hume wait karna padega ...we have to let taani become comfortable and open before we ask her .
Al:God juno ...tum aur tumhara patience...kitne boring ho...kassh raghav , sia ya kabir yahaan hote.
Ar: main boring huh...huh?( He runs behind her and starts tickling her)

That night
Girls hostel

(alni were roommates).
alni were in the corridor when sam was coming from the front.
al:Yaar yeh daayan baar baar kyun tapak padti hain.
sam: hey ms.carefree, hey aliya... aliya miss carefree ko baal banana sikhao ...aaj tak maine isse khule baalon mein nahi dekha.but the truth is bi***es don't look good whatever they wear .
al: mind your tongue k... and if u cant just dont talk to us... coz if I beat u up it wont be my fault k...waise for your info meri ek friend boxer thi(and she shows her one hand).
sam: Uh oh!!! trouble . I am gonna run(and she hurries off).
alni laugh...
ta: btw that boxer thing was too good ..tera dimaag kabhi kabhi kaam karta hai.
Al:shut up and wo boxer thing sach hai...hey idea!!! kal sunday hai main aur juno kal morning tumhe elite school ki stories sunayenge...
ta: k that'll be fun..
alni go off to sleep...

NEXT MORNING

Ar: hey girls ...
alni: hi juno...
ar: to aliya what was the plan you were talking bout.
al:well...hum taani ko elite ki stories sunayenge..
ar:awesome...
ariya narrate the story of elite...
ta: happy endings...( she remembers st.louis and the sad ending of her story)
al:Tum bhi humein apne puraane school ya college ke baare mein bataao...
ta:(anger) Tum log mere present frnds ho iska matlab ye nahi ki tum baar-baar mera past question karoge...maine nahi kaha tha ki mujhe elite ke baare mein batao,maine nahi kaha tha...but that doesnt mean that main bhi tumhe st.louis..i mean mere past ke baare mein bataoon...(she realises what she was doing)...oh god..juno , aliya ,I'm really sorry ,pata nahi,pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha ,I'm really really sorry...(she runs off crying)

Ariya didn't feel bad by taani's words and they followed taani but found the door of taani's room locked...
they go to the garden...

Al: taani ko pata nahi kya ho jata..thoda rude ho gaya na(she says in a funny tone).
Ar: Mazzak mat karo aliya ...remember taani ne kisi colloge ka name liya tha... what was it...ya, St.louis...we've gotta find out about it.
Al: Not bad juno...tumhara brain kabhi kabar work karta hai...
Ar:Chalo!!!

Here,in taani's room

taani opened an album...the yearbook of st.louis...crying..
A...she saw Aashi and gave a smile,and then Amar's concious photo she gave another one
B...seeing bharat in funny pose she laughed while crying
N...She saw Neha, one of her best friends and then Nilesh and gave a small smile
R...She skipped RE and went t ri...she saw with her smile on,and then reminisced how rinni was sad on the when photo was to be clicked and she was upset as she didn't get her hand accesories although the photos had to be clicked only of the face..
S..the crowded place...Simi..lookin cute in her fav. top...bhab..oops Sharon lookin as always Divalicious...Swayam...she remembered all her memories with the best bro in the world,her bro..
T...she saw herself smiling like a joker...but she soon started crying
ta:I will never get that smile back...
she wiped her tears and continued...
V...Vikramjeet...better known as Vicky...he was smiling like a jerk...probably thinking of neha...

She collected her strenght and went to Re..saw a big name there..Reyaansh Singhania...rey...her rey...her very own rey...memories came rushing to her...

You are just my best friend's sis...
Stop me if you can...
Maine tumhe use kiya apna anger ooze out karne ke liye?...
Samajhna bhi nahi chahunga...
Darr lag raha hai...
Main tumhare bina incomplete feel karta hoon ...you know why?...coz I love you
Chuha...kahaan hai chuha?...
Sweetheart...
Tum poori bahu type material ho...
Hamara breakup sirf ek drama tha...
Aur kitna punish karogi Taani...

She cried remembering everything ,shut the book close ...cried even more...
and after 15 mins ,she washed her face and went out looking for ariya...



So guys how was it...pls ,pls,pls...like and comment ... bohot mehnat lagti hai ... jab se maine if pe ye ss likna start kiya hai I've decided that I will very soon comment on all the stories I've read as a silent reader...
Pls like and comment...

Love-
Sandy

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Posted: 11 years ago
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good work dear
taani becoming sooo emotional
nice update😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuppypie121

awesome concept

continue soon


Thanx and I sure will...
Edited by sandyChV - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nagalaksh

good work dear

taani becoming sooo emotional
nice update😊😊

Thank you soo much..n I 'm not really good at writin emotionl scenes..:p
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha.

Nice concept
Plz do continue


Thank u soo much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

awesome concept continue soon


Thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: raddhi

Awsm concept
Thanks for pm


Thank you so much and you are more than welcome...

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