~STORY OF TWO HEARTS ~(Taarey SS)*On hold* - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
awesome update ,,,,,,,
taarey new friend lovely and cute
update soon ...do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
superub update JJ
hope taarey reunite soon
and even u too have a brain isliye itni acchi story likhi 🤣
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuppypie121

superub update JJ

hope taarey reunite soon
and even u too have a brain isliye itni acchi story likhi 🤣
continue soon


Junglee...tu kabhi nahi sudhregi...btw thnxxx aur haan reunison itna jaldi expect mat kar 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Read both d chaps😊
They were awesome
Omg..Taani is in so much pain😭
Arjun nd Aliya r so nice
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
nice and itneresting
taani's new friends are too good
feel very bad for taani

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Hey guys I'm back to irritate you..n i know i'm late par kya karein yaar ff ka first chappy likhna tha..accha bas nuff bak-bak..here you go with the update ...ENJOY...

CHAPTER 3

Ariya are sitting in a secluded area working on a laptop...
Ar:to St .Louis College..aliya any idea ye kaunsi city mein hai?
Al:Oh bangkok!!! Juno,mujhse nahi Google se pucho..main wikipedia nahi hoon...
Ar: accha baba..
Arjun types in search tab..'St.louis college'...
Google shows him a website ...Stlouis.com...
Ar: To ye mumbai ka koi college hai..wait..India ka top college hai...
Al:to phir pakka students list website par hogi...
Ar: lemme check...oh no...
Al: what?
Ar: Student list sirf st.louis ke students hi access kar sakte hain... but photo gallery main kuch ho sakta hain...damn..ye bhi protected hain..
Al:God..chodo Juno..main taani ko dekhti hoon..
Lo naam liya aur haazir..
They see taani coming..
Ta: hey guys..sorry pata nahi muj..
ar:explanation needed nahi hai..we're frnds...
Al:ya..aur ab chalo..Shaam ko college terrace par party hain ,we'll have fun...aur ready bhi to hona hain...
aliya gives arjun a peck and runs off with taani to her room...
taani goes off to take a bath and aliya opens taani's wardrobe to select a dress for her..first all she finds are her simple suits but hidden inside she finds harroms, jeans,tops(kinda clothes which taani used to wear in d3),A red suit(V-Day),A blue suit(taarey first date ),both beautifully embroidered,then she finds a beautiful frock(On the party in which boy's drinks got spiked)...And then a box...it had a heart shaped pendant,a banner on which was written'U R A Star', many gifts and many photos of a guy..
Al: who's this guy..and ye gifts..ye clothes..I'm damn sure ye taani ke past se related hain..but agar uska past itna beautiful tha to present itna dull kyun hain...
She suddenly sees a yearbook titled 'Louisan'...
Al:to ye st.louis ki yearbook hai...
she hears taani's footsteps so she hides the yearbook in her bag...
al:Heya taani..all ready.?
ta: ya..
Al:no..aaj tumhare clothes main decide karoongi...
aaj tumhare clothes main decide karungi...
Aliya goes to her own wardrobe and takes out a dress...

(Ignore the hairstyle)

Taani starts tieing her har in a braid...
Al:ye kya kar rahi hai...I know tujhe baal khule rakhna nahin pasand but pony bana le ..mere liye ...pls..
Ta:umm...theek hai...
Aliya goes to get ready...


Ta:God your looking awesome..juno faint ho jayega...
the girls do light makeup and go the terrace giggling but raaste mein unhe daayan I mean Samira rok leti hai thodi bakwaas karti hai ..aur phir..phir kya aliya se dar ke bhaag jaati hai...
Terrace

Al:Taani your gonna witness the coolest party ever...so be ready...
Ar:hey girls...hey you both are lookin awesome..but aliya ,taani tumse bohot better lag rahi hai...
Al:ab meri bff hai hi itni pretty...
Sam: Pretty my foot...ek din glam clothes pehen liye to pretty ho gayi ...bloody hell,miss carefree pata hai I'm damn sure tumne isse better terrace to kya isse better place hi nahi dekha hoga...coz you know ,you don't have a life...ye drink lo ..have fun..aur koi mil jaye to make out karne ke liye wo jagah..waise bhi s**ts kahin bhi kuch bhi kar sakti hain...
she points to a white bench just st.louis' terrace bench at a secluded corner...Sam was drunk..so she had gone out of control and was converting a fun party into a melodrama..
Sam:miss carefree,go get a life ..
and she turned away to go..taani had tars in her eyes...
Ta(shouts):Know what samira..you need a life...actually you need classes on how to live...
everyone including arjun was shocked due to taanis reply but aliya was smiling..
ta:Tumhe jeena hi nahi aata..tum oxygen breathe in karti ho but saans nahi leti..tumhara heart blood pump karta but beat nahi kartaa.you know why...coz tumne apne aap ke alawa kisi se pyaar nahi kiya...pyaar karna seekh jayogi to jeena bhi seekh jaogi..seekh jaogi...(Taani runs off to her room crying)..

Arjun tries to follow her but aliya stops...
al:Give her some time...
ariya go to a quiet place where aliya tells arjun about all she found in taani's wardrobe...
Ar: hum wo yearbook nahi kholenge taani humein khud batayegi...

So guys,how was it...
raat ko 12 baje tak likhi hain maine ...plsplspls like and comment kar dena...

Love-
Sandy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
awesome update...love the clothes ...that bloody sam...taani ne usse achha sunaya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
awsm update
loved how taani answered back to sam

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Read all parts in one go

All were superb

Luved taariya frndship

They r awsum threesome

Samira...ughhh I hate her

Luved the way taani answerd back

Taani burst out was emotional

Updt soon n PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
luvly update...
aliya is so cute n adorable frend...
i wish evry1 gets a frend lyk her..
the dresses r so pretty..
i cnt w8 2 read dat aliya reads taaniz yearbook or not..
thnx 4 pm :)

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