Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Kiran

@sana27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

Wowww two updates at a time..!!!!
Awsomee updates!!
Ya i have some confusions but as u say nxt updates will clarify them..so waiting for it..
Thanks for teaser!!
What arnav is going to do..??? :-O :-O 😲

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Thank god Arnav is not the serial killer... I'm happy for now with that..

What's his intensions regarding Khushi n what is he upto with his Gun...?

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

part 4
awesome...
Khushi is giving in to her desires...
interesting...

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xyzsm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#724

thank GOD for the note!!...phew!!!

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#725

teaser
nice...
oh ho something is mysterious about this Arnav...
cont soon dear...

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#726

Jen, why the note at the end?

You should have kept everyone guessing.

More fun that way.

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Veena..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#727

part 3 nd 4 both were awesome, loved ur uodates but i aleayd reply so late, sorry yar i'm so busy with the office and all, but reading ur updates is pleasure fir me, never missed them although reply so late [:p]
a very differnt story from all ss or ff, its superb, thnx dear

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#728

Jenny,

Finally caught up with the story..Its completely a different style and theme from all the other works of yours I read. The mystery aura is what keeps the story moving. All the 4 chapters were sort of building the backdrop of the story and giving an outlook to Major Raizada's life on the basis of speculation. We don't know anything about the girl Khushi except that she is a struggling to meet the ends and works as a dancer in a low grade bar and she has high moral standards. And on her first day of work, she meets this stranger with whom she feels a strange pull...I can't really comment on her because there is more to her. You did reveal bits and pieces but her story is yet to be unrevealed.

Arnav's nightmare was interesting..it gave me a possibility to think on...Was he really innocent of the crime? Now with Khan on prowl, I guess the story is going to come out soon..

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leena

@aleena.1884

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Posted: 11 years ago

#729

k fine. i knew he wasn't the killer. so he IS using her as a bait ri8... 😒 poor girl. she'll be heartbroken. although she also knows he was lying but knowing the reason behind it... 😭

but the question is... does he really love or feel Anything about her????