Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Sarikaa97

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

Ok..now that arnav is not the series killer, what is he up to? God! The suspense is killing me...:)

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

Thank god for that snippet of information..I can't think of arnav as a killer

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yoga123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

Awesome teaser...what is Arnav upto...

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Crazy4Sobti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Chapter 3

First, I love those banners.. Nishu, Maverickmartin and Heaven...you guys rock!!

Jenny, this is very intriguing now.

You are playing with our minds here. You start a chapter very normally, then the encounter between Khushi and Major Raizada, their musings and then bam end the chapter with suspense and oh! So many questions!

Looks like life has been harsh to Khushi and she is somewhat bitter towards life. It's like a routine for her, doesn't want to trust anybody or get anybody's help.

Though all the traces suggest that Arnav might be the killer, I do not want to believe that. He probably feels guilty for killing Lavanya.

Major Raizada wants to protect Khushi, bas.

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deepthi laxmi

@deelax18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

*shocked*,...has arnav found out who is the serial killer?...but why to drug khushi;...

is the serial killer khushi's boss??..

thrilling teaser...update soon

P.S i knew :P

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Ananya

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#706

Okay... 😆

Of course he's not the serial killer, that I knew 😉

Ps- I'm yet to read the last part, I'll do that soon. Yes Jen, 10 parts sounds good, I knew that too 😉 😉

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Chapter 4

Jenny,

I am loving the titles you are using and they are also so captivating.

"A Moth's Dilemma" - sounds apt to my state. Like a moth I am drawn to this story and left in dilemma after each chapter.

Okay, two big questions from this chapter - Did Arnav really kill his wife? And is it really Jenny writing this story?

Khushi is fighting a losing battle here - Try as hard as she may be, she is failing to push Major Raizada out of her thoughts and heart. She is going to give up and let herself drown in the depths of gray eyes. For once she wants to live her life for herself and not hold herself.

For a change you didn't end this chapter leading to suspense or more questions. It was short, yet oozing with raw passion and hot.

PS: What is inspector Khan up to?