Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1. - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mysteriously intriguing, not to mention a bit aggressive as well...
WOW Jen... Ur stories are always one up against the other...
Ahaan... A very aggressive Arnav , who couldnt wait to drive home his point, with the background of a defence personnel and Khushi seems to have some secrets...
somebody waiting for Khushi at home??? Who??
cant wait to read the next parts... As it is I just love mysteries, suspense and thrillers with their adrenaline rush!!!!
awesome start Jenny...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Wow that was just something else, loved it, loved it, loved it.
Mystery no less with Major Raizada with his sexy grey eyes, limp, extremely handsome no doubt with his formal attire and a very attractive attitude, you just blew me away with this one and its only a three shot..why Jenny? Why? Would definitely love to read more on those lines may be another story.

He just kissed her in first meeting? Will he be intoxicated on that one kiss and will not be able to stop at one? Will he?
Khushi obviously is dancing in a seedy bar for a reason. Survival? Or something else? Who will not understand her being out at this time if the night? someone waiting for her? And it's a He. Waiting to know more eagerly.

His past history has scared Khushi and how he will go past that remains to be seen.

Awesome, wonderful, fantastic, fabulous and the list goes on.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
A different plot!...Kinda mysterious story😃...I just love it...
Arnav, an ex army major and Khushi a dancer?...
Who was the "he" she was referring to?
and they kissed😲...
He has a dark..a somewhat dark past too...had killed his wife and friend who were cheating him...
A day full of shocks for Khushi and me too..😆
Superb staring...now waiting for the next part...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Looks intense...looking forward to d next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Nice story n very unique plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Seems interesting
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Jen...you are surprising me every day...

This was fantastic...I loved your details and descriptions...wow...transported me back to that era...

I loved the ambience and the atmosphere you described with the magic of your words, I could smell the smoke and alcohol and hear the singing ...I felt the air of excitement and mystery surrounding the man in his long over coat and limp...perfect distinguishing features making him more intriguing was his past that seemed surrounded with scandal. Making him hot and a dark rake..who gets what he wants...and now he want her...

I can't wait for more to be revealed...loved the instant attraction and they sexual chemistry , love the spark and spunk exhibited by her...I wonder what her story is...this seems to be profession she has chosen not willingly ...who is waiting for her and why?
He seems to have the darkness to him...someone who can be possessive and protective as well as dangerous...whatever he maybe am sure there will be a tender side that she will bring out in him...truly intoxicating...

A very promising start and I have full faith in your abilities to take it forward do full justice! I do find him hot...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
wow. something new. i love thrillers. he is a major n that too a dangerous one. so some hint of darkness will be there. waiting for more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Another interesting concept just loved it. Hmmm so she is a bar dancer and he is a ex army man. Just excited for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
OMG!
A really different story. .
Especially Khushi. . Have never read a story on Arhi like this one.
And mysterious! Khushi is afraid of someone or may be is forced to the job. .
And Arnav a murderer. .
Whether its a ts, ss or ff, count me in. .
Am gonna read it till the end. . :-)

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