Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Jen i am sorry i am this late i will comment on the last 2 updates here...

Chapter 3:

Oh my good lord Jen this gets murkier and murkier...really you want us to believe that ex Major Arnav Singh Raizada is the new 'Jack the Ripper' in town. Nahi mera toh dil hi toot jayega.

But why is arnav giving those looks to khushi's photos and also parallely at the same time you give glimpses into major's past which seem to be traumatic and given his emotional state of mind after 'killing' his wife it could all be true. But i don't want to *all izz well* dil par hath rakh kar bolo *all izz well* that has to me my mantra as i read your updates now.

I am enjoying this mysterious ride that you are taking me on...bring it on baby can't wait to get to the bottom of this.

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

i am just enjoying it...awesome

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Chapter 4:

Jen yeh kya kar rahi ho tum hamare saath...I have no clue. What did Inspector Khan find in those newspapers that he is so glad about?

What do we make out of these dreams that arnav is having. At the risk of sounding foolish and stupid is Arnav suffering from some mental disorder which unleashes the killer unknowingly.

Do i start feeling sorry for this khushi who just wants to hope and might have her hopes crushed pretty soon. 😭

I enjoyed the whole 'push-pull' routine with lot of trepidation, which is a first. 😆

Can't wait for Sunday now...as usual you have us hooked in your magical web.

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#604

that was awesome

luvd it

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Loved both the updates
Awesome story
Very interesting
Why did u stop there?
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Continue soon
Thanx for the pm

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#606

Omg each update of this story is sooo well written!!

Great update!:D

Im just scared that khushi doesnt ger hurt!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

its mystery mystery mystery -

very intriguing jenny

you have got me hooked to this tooo

love u

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#608

I can't believe I totally forgot about this one after the first chapter!!

This is soo eerie...I am not sure I can wait for the suspense to unfold..

Glimpses of the serial killings and major Raizada's traumatic past and the way he is stalking Khushi - it's uncannily frightening! But I am enjoying the ride!

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MAS_5253

@MAS_5253

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Posted: 11 years ago

#609

Im confused lyk hell... wats wid arnav is he a bad guy or is he positive wats khushis pic doin wid him ..Update soon b4 i go crazy

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#610

Wow, Jen, more mystery, more pain. What hell these 2 are living in.

Khushi wanting to give in to her desire to believe reminded me so much Fleetwood Mac's Little Lies, a song i love.