Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#591

i'm new, and yet not fully ready to write a convincing and pleasing comment on the story.. Yet to read the whole thing again to understand everything.. But all that i have percieved in my speed is - Arnav, is not and Can't be a Bad Guy .. He's just Not!

Khushi, however strong.. Is struggling, deep down realising already that Arnav is not a bad kind of guy, she knows it! Maybe dats why, she dare dream, she might Hope!

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#592

As always an amazing chapter!

I love the way Khushi tries to reason out her feelings for Arnav, and the way she tries to figure out whether her actions are right or wrong.

I'm still confused with the mysterious murderer case, but I strongly believe that the murderer is not Arnav. What's with Inspector Khan? I wonder what his next step is? So many questions, but I love suspense. And you seemed to be doing a great job in keeping me glued to this story by all the suspense, and dark passion that keeps on swirling around Arnav and Khushi.

So finally Khushi decided to give in. And I'm personally glad that she decided to be the moth whose intoxicated by the lure of fire for once, but I really hope that her fragile soul would not get damaged due to her recklessness.

It was a wonderful chapter as usual. Thank you for penning down such an amazing chapter🤗

Eagerly waiting for Sunday for the next update

Update soon😉

Edited by V3Od - 11 years ago

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#593

Suspense all around...very interesting...thanks for the PM

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

what was that night mare about
he is hiding lots in himself
well lets hope not too much
and it doesnt get her killed
why her though
it cant be just her eyes there is something else
so she was ready to burn herself
wonder if thats wise
well she is free to choose her doom or not
maybe it wont be that bad
or maybe it will be even worse
well only time shall tell
gosh this just got even more intriguing
were his nightmares about the murders
or was it something else
wait whats a cowardice bracelet
was she kidding or not
and so the passion overrules her senses
lets see what this brings them

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#595

After reading this update, I have a feeling Arnav is not the murderer that he is portrayed to be. But he is still mysterious, which makes it all the more interesting. Wonder if Khushi also has an interesting past?

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

I could totally picture Sanaya and barun in these roles it's so eerie! Your really good with describing your setting and atmosphere, I can clearly create a image in my mind right away of what the streets look like and the bar

Obviously Arnav is not the killer and I'm curious to see how khan figures that out

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-HEAVEN-

@-HEAVEN-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#597

i want a BAD arnav!!!...bu ha ha ha ha!!! i m evil!!!!

ps. its not a res. u should eat all my res...i m a totall nikamma!😳

ll comment later!

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

AWESOME CHAPTER 4.

thanks for the pm.

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#599

loved being Intoxicated by this ff/ss... loved it till now ..
this is strange one that i am reading and very different from the ones i have read yet... & i loved it.
what is Khushi's insecurity though? and what is Arnav's problem with his past?
what has inspector Khan figured out about Arnav? and why after so long a time is he digging up the case of Arnav? is he the serial killer and has now finally found the target in Khushi by whom he is intoxicated?

well, i don't like to think about Arnav as the serial killer, so prove me wrong...!!
and if Arnav is not the one then who???

waiting for more of this thrilling tale to unveil with ur next update... so waiting eagerly.