Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

loved it...so mysterious hope that I don't get any rude shocks though

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Bavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Each update makes me more curious.waiting for Sunday.thanks for the PM.

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Seems like it was a nightmare

This story is such a full of secrets and i love it

And ohh they're kissing passionately now

Wonder what'll happen now

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Fau Zi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Nice and creepy, the fog n the killer that is...

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loveandluck

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

I like arnav. He seems like a good man.

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Fau Zi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Nice update...like the way the story is moving along...don't think Arnav is the killer or even a murderer...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Brilliant update.

Knowing the result Khushi is still falling for arnav. She knows that there is something which does not settle with him still she wants to give that thing a chance which she feels for him. I hope she does not get hurt badly following in this path.

Is arnav really concern about Khushi safety that he came to drop today also or is he taking chance for what ever he what's . This mystery is killing me.

Is he dreaming about the time he saw his wife with hs friend in heir bedroom, and that scene is still haunting him in dreams or their is somthing related to Khushi. Can't wait to know more on this.

Loved he update. Fantastic.

Thanks for the pm.

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golpokobita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Read two chapters together.

So many mysteries... The serial killer, khushi being stalked and then suddenly meeting arnav, arnav holding khushi's photo... i am so curious now!

And on top of all these that police officer and his informer! Don't want to see arnav as the serial killer, but definitely you must have your own plan with the story..

I am having a strange feeling about khushi .. looks like she is falling too early for him.. and after that comment from her friend/colleague the the bar, i am really scared about her future!

I cannot leave without mentioning one thing about your writing style..

even in a thriller, your description of situations and surroundings, narration of thoughts by each and every character and last but not the least, romantic encounters -- are simply mesmerizing!

Edited by golpokobita - 11 years ago

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pmpm1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#619

And the mystery thickens... I have a feeling that Arnav is not the serial killer although it may seem so...

But I can't really understand Arnav's dream...

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#620

~edit~

Arnav's nightmare is about the day Lavanya was found wih her lover in their (Arnav & Lavanya's) bedroom isn' it? The day Arnav came back from the war? So in hindsight Arnav knows what's coming up next, so doesn't want to enter the house or doesn't want to take the flights of stairs or doesn't want to open the bedroom door in his dream So does this mean it really happened and that he killed them in a fit of rage? 🤢 I was hoping against hope that it was all an elaborate lie, a setup like Harrison Ford got caught in Fugitive..!! I'll still keep the hope open!

Khushi cannot stop thinking about Arnav 😳 Like Khushi's thoughts I like to see Arnav's glorious past 😊 Glad to see Khushi dared to hope, that she wanted to believe him at least one time!!

How did Inspector Khan arrive at Arnav so soon? I mean there could be any number of tall men with broad shoulders in the town?

I felt relieved that Arnav offered to walk Khushi home!!! But then by the looks of Mr. Khan I wonder if this will work against him!! This is ominous!

The Chaper Title is so very apt for this update Jenny!!

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago