Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Awww that's all Khushi wanted moonlight and a rose

I love their talks

Nice update

Quote

-UnknownSoul-

@-UnknownSoul-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#292

I love it :)
So they're in 1969 ?
I love how you write stories of different times.
Something like Teri meri kahaani ? (Haven't watched that movie though)
So they kissed 2 times ? :O can't wait for the next update :D

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Thank you for the PM. Have always read your work and loved it...loving this already.

Quote

Kiran

@sana27

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Awwwsssuuummm!!!!!!
Muahhh!!! :-* :-* :-*:-*:-*:-*
someone is stalking..i hope he isnt killer..
Khushi found her prince charming ohhh..m.dreaming of mine!! He he :-D
loved d update...

Quote

mehak

@mehak06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

A very interesting one indeed

Quote

Not gonna tell

@sherlockthor

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

holy moly.. that was goosebumpy .. !!

thnk you for PM!

Quote

KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

this is epitome
awesome
continue soon

Quote

Arnima

@Eternalallure

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

This story has ensnared me so deeply in its clutches.

Its enthralling and intriguing and so gripping and yet amidst all the mystery and suspense, it has loads of Arnav and Khushi and their romance.

I will wait for you to unravel the mystery because my guesses are almost always as much correct as the weather forecast in the country 😆 but I think Arnav has got something to do with catching the psychopath killer. Undercover agent, maybe???? Its funny how even in such background they are able to find time for Rabba Vey-ing.😳

Incredible update...👏

Cannot wait for next.

Thanks for the pm.😊

Quote

sreemeera

@sreemeera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#299

I love to read all your stories what ever the concept may be. The concept of intoxication is different from your other stories, but that surely do not make it not suitable for IF. Never..

Started loving this Khushi and Major Raizada even if he had a dark back ground. Khushi dreamt of her prince charming coming in the moonlit night with a single Rose for her and her dream came true but is he her real prince charming?? There are so many doubts which only can clear through the upcoming chapters and only by you. Is Arnav the serial killer?!! Or he is in search of the serial killer?? Whether he really murdered his wife? Or was it the same killer who killed her also and the blame was put on him? Is he or some body else following Khushi?? If he was, then what should be the purpose of him stalking her?

Quote

Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#300

I feel someone bad happened to her as well in the past with the harsh words in the flashbacks. Is is why she is working as a dancer? Or does she have to feed others and this is the fastest way to make money? I know a lot of uni girls who do this as it is a fast way to make money and it is nothing more than dancing - they don't have to do anything else beyond this. They are equally attracted. He brought her a rose in the moonlight awakening her childhood fantasy but she is way over this now as she seems to be jaded towards love. Not sure it is love he is looking for either though. You did a great job describing the scene when she is walking home alone at night. Felt pretty scary to me. Is it Arnav who she runs into or is he the one stalking? We will have to wait won't we?