Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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kamtokdin

@kamtokdin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

What I love about your stories is the fact that the intrinsic characters of arnav n kushi remained. Hope that will remain in this story

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golpokobita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Intoxicating!

Jenny, its different, no doubt. But there lies its beauty. Completely different plot, different time and different story line.. The only common thing is your Arnav and your Khushi... Arnav, a mysterious, tricky, determined man and Khushi, a beautiful, emotional yet strong women..And both are vulnerable with their own scars and losses..

And another usual Jenny style... The expressions and feelings written in perfect precision..

Jenny, I don't know why do you think it might not be suitable for IF.. But if its not, then IF be damned!

I love the story and look forward to following it..

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Russell

@russelskhushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#313

it was an amazing update...

But i kind of am confused with couple of things...

1st when the mail man can , she doesn't expect mail and says Probably the mails were all HIS ... who is this His ???

the bar man feeling something fishy abt khushi !!!

shadow of a rose... is she not what she looks like... ? God im really confused!!! AND IM LOVING THAT FACT...

there is alot about khushi.. she surly has a dark past... I wont be surprise if she;s the serial killer ...lol..

Loved it...

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vks11

@vks11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#314

loved the mystery. who was following her.

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#315

Whoa, Jenny! When did you start this? It's awesome. I'm already waiting fro the next chapter to come. You're incredibly talented. It's amazing how diverse your characters are from story to story.

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Vaibhavi Mane

@cookie-lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#316

It is awesome... a welcome change i must say...
loved it...
thank you...

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Tithi

@Tirtharupa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#317

Very interesting ,new type of story and little suspensive.
So Arnav murdered his wife...I thought he is the serial killer...
Waiting for more...
Thanks for PM.