ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 8 - COMPLETED - Page 90

Mind blowing as always ...waiting for next update...continue soon

Arnav... Khushi...and the incomplete sentence about kids...hope no misunderstandings spring up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for giving real long and detailed updates!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome update...

Awesome story...truly soulful love story...of two soul mates...no words...I cried and laughed with arnav and khushi...you are one of the brilliant writer I came across...I have read few chapters more than twice...I have to appreciate your dedication towards the story...you put so much effort to give regular and lengthy updates...as it does not brake the flow of the story...truly commendable...👏...I felt very happy to happen to read this FF..😛...you have carried the story very well without losing the characters strengths and drawbacks throughout...loved akash and payal for being supportive and being understanding in their friendship...loved the way they supported arnav and khushi after marriage...be it playing games after the AR party...or putting a word of promise that they are meant for each other and help them try to break the shackles...which are creating unnecessary confusion and distancing them...couldn't stop myself laughing out loud at khushi's antics.😆...and blush at their romance...overwhelmed to know how much arnav loved her and promised to give her back her world...a husband's promise...I felt contented when khushi said that she has been waiting for him and give all of her to him unknowingly all these years...I cried and could not move forward when arnav wept in khushi's lap remembering how his father might have died taking his name...arnav's loss was terrible...he lost his loved ones and was betrayed by his own, khushi has left him at that point...he has to let go of his past and khushi will be his support to get through the pain...loved how they took baby steps to come close in their relationship and understand each other...loved how they realized their love for each other and understood they are inseparable...loved arnav and khushi's POVs throughout...that brought lot of depth to the story and the characters...loved all the pictures...lovely pictures...it added more grace to the story...loved how arnav made all the arrangements for payal and akash wedding...couldn't stop admiring arnav when he showed her the wedding venue and decorations...which reflected their wedding decorations, they are going to relive their wedding, this time with love for each other and some romance...songs selected in the story are awesome...arnav was angry with Guptas as they made khushi suffer at young age...but I believe this is some thing to do with their horoscopes...will wait till the truth and entire past is out...arshi did not explore the palm tree near the pool...hope it held some memories from the past...there are no pictures of arshi together in childhood either in the farm house nor in RM...there should be some thing more that happened in the past...will wait for the story to unfold...thank you for a beautiful story...thank you so much for all the PMs...waiting for next chapter...

superb!!

Read the last 3 ch in one go
They were fab
👏 👏 👏 👏

amazing chappy dii..
sorry fr late comment..
the aakash arnav talk..omg..i m scared khushi didnt hear the entire thing...i hopes thid doe s not create any misunderstanding...
the conversation with the boy..was lol..
aakashs idea..arnav stuck wid ladies craked me up..i was roflng..
that was too good..
😆 😆
the bathroom conversation was romantic..the cream arnav got..aww soo caring 😊
the dance was good..
arnav telling khushi to complete the mehendi..whts he planning..
the blouse thing..i m waiting fr the next one..
jst loving every bit of it.. 😊 😊

that was awesome

Aesomely written as always ,no backing of from that fact ,loving the way the story is progressing ,looking forward to their SR ,😉