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Posted: 11 years ago
Dude you write so well that I forget what I wanted to comment after each part!

Lovely update! The separation was really sad!

And such lovely moments!

Hmm shashi garima part awkward! Heheh!

Looking forward to their childhood past!


Listen and then get to her!


Cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super awesome update...
They are head to toe in love...
Missing each other like hell... 😳
Love to read this FF...
Arnav is becoming noughty day by day...
Poor Khushi.. Got embarrassed in front of her parents... 😉
Loving their rocking romance...
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update...poor one got embarressed infront of her parents hehehe...ahh cant wat 2 get 2 know d past...n whats wid d artificial tree um very curious...cant wait 2 read d next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
as always it was such an awesome update
i just love the way they miss each other even for 3 hours
arnav was getting distracted seeing khushi's mehndi feet :)
and khushi situation too was no different
she was missing arnav terribly looking continuously at arnav's cabin
awww. she made a sketch of arnav
and knew in instant that something is wrong with khushi
so he called her and consoled her
i just love the understanding they share
aww. i just love that phone call and his little surprise 😉
he is just too cute
loved the way they teased each other
and they ate their lunch together together talking to each other on phone
and after a long tims we get to see arnav in ASR mode
khushi was scared when arnav yelled at aman
and loved the khushi's cabin scene
the way arnav pacified khushi and his concern and khushi's last words
wonder about the person arnav thought. who is it?

"NO , You are the best thinghappened in my life"

loved that one

and then they ate street food
and he kissed her soothing her lips not minding the people around
then that small fight
arnav denied khushi's demand cuz of his concern toward khushi
stay away is a very hard thing for both of them
but at the end arnav dropped her to her parents house
awww. loved their goodbye. arnav kissed her and gave her a love bite
and arnav was a little sad when she did wave at him but just then khushi came out and blew a kiss at him
all this was noticed by her father
and then arnav sent the chocolate bar and a note

"Noone can understand me better than you. ALWAYS be the way you are!...Forever YOURS!"

loved that

so now payal and akash's wedding is happening in farmhouse
hope arnav will be alright in there as khushi is with him
abd what was that tree thing? very curious about that

then the most embarrassing thing happened

" Beta, whats wrong with your neck? Did
something sting you?"
" what happened? You must have ate something? I dont think you are allergic to anything. Hey devimaiyya, yeh kya? What happened to your lips? How did you cut yourself there? Tell me truth, were you eating off the knife?" 🤣 🤣 🤣

poor khushi. she was tongue tied 😆
and shashi knew what happened so he took garima away
so kaka will be coming again now
and then again i loved that early morning call
they miss each other veey much

"Bolo...Kya baat karni hain meri wife ko"

loved that and also khushi's praising lines

"Decide Mrs. Raizada, you want decent
romance or rocking romance. "

of course khushi prefers rocking romance 😉 😳

and i think arnav will go to khushi's place as he could see khushi is upset

will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
rocking update.luved the shaitaan arnav and ofcourse our embarrassed khushi.so mr.designer has designed sumthng for mrs. raizada too I guess.so mr gupta had told kaka to be away for few days,that was surprising.enjoyed the blooming romance.luking forward to next update.wat is dere near tree!have they engraved their names??!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update!! :)
The whole "missing" part was..just beautiful..
And the embarassing situation..poor khushi😆
Loved it!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow loved the updates...i know i havent commented for the past three but slightly busy
Love how arnav and khushi are becoming inseperable .. I wonder what conection the farm house has to them ...continue soon..thanks for the pm ...sorry for such a short reply

Jenny x
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful Update Dear!!! Loved it!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
its an amazing part
the understanding between them is awesome
arnav is someone who need love in his life
if he has someone who can love him without leaving his time
he doesnt want anything in his life
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unresd on Pg 47 😆
Edited by asthagarwal - 11 years ago

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