ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 8 - COMPLETED - Page 19

Awsme simply Awsme update...!!!

The way u write...is it emtnal part or romance i always felt goosebumps in my whole body...
Nd i cn feel nd easily visualise evrythng..like m watchng infrnt of me...lovd ur writng...deepthiji...

Aww payesh r pregnant...:)
Akash is so caring...he don't want payal to take those pills...lovely couples nd m happy dat dey didn't thought to abort nd all infact they r happy...
Payal wrrdnes sahi hai...if her inlaws got to knw abt it...wat might wil they thought abt hr...
Nd arshi r damn amazng frends dat one could have...
They nt even handld payesh situatn also helpng them to cme out of it...
Arnav care fr their frends...nw m nt only lovng arnav charactr bt respectng him...:)
hope arnav's payesh pre-pond weddng plan wil went well...nd smoothly...


khush payal pregy cnvo...lovely nd arnav adorng his wife evry expressn hayee..lovd it..

Arshi bedroom nd office moments was just beautiful...:)
nd their each kisses only makng our knees weak pata nai sr update main kya kya hoga...hamara..

My fav part in this update was that red nd pink wala lahenga cnfessn...
I too get ovrwelmed wit the intensity they r lovng eachothr...hope hamari zindagi main bi aisa pyaar naseeb ho...:)

lovd the whole chappy as usuall...:)
wil be waitng fr next eagrly arshi mising eachothr...

As i said u be4 too deepthiji m nt good at words nd expressng my views nd feelng...
In last update cmment i made my own specltns nd cnfusd u...pardn me if i do so in futre too...:)

thanx fr the pm...
Update soon...:)

PA having baby 😊
N arhi art...ooo...hot 😳 😃

interesting update. The romance is at its peak . I dont want any more misunderstandings between the couple they have already wasted their precious 8 years please yaar dont make them suffer more

awesome update
loved it.
Update soon...
Sorry for late reply.

Great update!! :D

Arnav and khushi moments are soo shweet!
And dis is called true friendship!
D moment u described btw payal and khushi was really cute :)

Read the whole story in one go and it is getting very interesting. Loving the romantic sides of the two. Please PM when you update next

unress my comment on page 20 :))

payal pregnancy news was a little surprising.really arnav luvs akash payal and khushi ofcourse.wat is arnav designing for khushi now!enjoyed very bit of the update specially the ending.plz update soon!