Smitar's: Saving Khushi#3 Last Part Part 17(1)(2) Pg 1, 28 (15/10)

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snoopy84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Awesome update and such a beautiful ending to an amazing story.

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rana5

@rana5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Another beautiful story. I love them all and reread them regularly. I am can't wait for 'Marrying Khushi'! Thank you for your frequent and steady updates.

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taniks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Awesome update ,litttle sad remebering

That diwali pyn that khushi experienced.

Rashmi thanks for email

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

What a lovely end.

Liked how they rewrote their story.

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733619

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

That was such a lovely ending. Great story

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Wow that was a perfect and beautiful ending,

The last two updates were amazing and awesome.

Loved how Arnav tried too erase the horrible memories from the previous Diwali for Khushi,

His apology for hurting Khushi in the past was just perfect and so heart felt.

Awww love the fact they are becoming parents, a perfect end.

Thank you for writing this awesome story it has been a pleasure too read,

Thanks for the emails,

Eagerly waiting for the new story, the title has already got me quite excited.

Also could I make a suggestion for a track I would like you to consider writing about as you are an amazing writer, the "Sheetal track".

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Wow! that was a very sweet ending to a very sweet story... Chotu-sa Arnav Singh Raizada is on the way... 😉

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Loved how you brought in past Diwali events & made Arnav apologize.

Great ending! Looking forward to the next part.

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

awesome ending loved it <3
loved that arnav apologized for the past events

aww a baby

cant wait for the marrying khushi

thanks for the email rashmi

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Part one sounded so gloomy - It was a very dark night for poor Kushi. I could not believe his actions and words. He did everything to hurt and humiliate her. That kind of thing really scars a girl. I cried for her after that episode. Yes he should feel like a scum for putting her through it. But his gesture this Diwali was amazing, him and the family putting those ladies down was very special. Listening to her rants about burning the sari, not lighting the diyas, etc. . . Was very nice. You put the cherry on the cake with her gift to him. Aww imagine feeling sick at the sight of jalebis? Poor Kushi need to make him work super hard during her mood swings and cravings. Loved this story as usual. Can't wait for the next one.