Smitar's: Saving Khushi#3 Last Part Part 17(1)(2) Pg 1, 28 (15/10)

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MeenuCrazyPanda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: IPKlover

Ahh, that explains it! I wondered how I could have forgotten such a scene! That was genius! 😊

Hey that Edit was made by DEEP Di for her story where she wrote about ArShi Confession and their first kiss

There are more

They are just perfect n fit in everywhere

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yusam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Heyyy.. I love all your stories... n sulk when they come to an end... do pm me for further stories.. marrying khushi.. cant wait..

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msmarple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Lovely ending to a lovely story!

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annieK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Superb ending . Loved the story and looking forward to the next . Thank you for a wonderful journey Smita .

And thanks Rashmi for posting as always .

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Aplihs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Thank you for this amazing story. Loved every part of it and eagerly waiting for the next one😃

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aisha13D

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

this was awesome!

cant wait for the next story!!

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831628

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Super ending love you dearie for such beautiful creation..keep writing and never ever stop

rashmi dear, looking fwd for interpretation...

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Edited by toeditor - 11 years ago

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cute_sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

WONDERFUL ENDING...WAITING FOR MARRYING KHUSHI

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aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

That was a very lovely ending..
I especially liked the way you changed the significance of Diwali in Arshi's life, making it complete by bringing in a New life that they created, filling each and evry wound that was left!

Khushi's pain and Aunty's taunts were all dealt well by Arnav, who is there for her forevr along with the rest other Raizada's..

Lovely ending to yet another lovely story.. Beautiful!

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

That was an amazing ending. Arnav finally realized his mistakes and apologized for the ones he committed last Diwali and also for being indirectly the cause of her distress this Diwali. This is something I so wanted to see in the show. I never thought it will end so soon. But good things do come to an end one day. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next story of yours :)

PS: But Arnav did ruin Diwali for Khushi for life