Smitar's: Saving Khushi#3 Last Part Part 17(1)(2) Pg 1, 28 (15/10)

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Awesome awesome awesome. Lovely ending. Now waiting for the next

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mutermuter

@mutermuter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Awsume update

Cant wait forr the next one

Plz update soon

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Smitaji ab kya bolu hmm ?
very beautifully written..both the updates...
part 17/1,

Diwali night,
and the bad memories entered in her mind,
the pain and hurt ...😭

and Arnav was helpless he could feel the pain she was in because of him,
and he tried to convert the bad memory by actions and few words...
the gossip queens ...😡
but this is the ugly world...
but loved the way all the members stood for her...👏

Part 17/2,

WONDERFUL,
amazing and very beautifully written
so I am not going to express my feeling for this update...

because you broke my heart Smitaji,
how can you end this story..
me very Khafaa you know !
yes, you are writer and the you have the right to end the story ,
but what can I do ? yeh dil mange more...
I hope you will full fill my wish of long story soon,
but still ...me kafaa...😔

take care of yourselves,
Reshu after a long time I am waiting for the interpretation on part 17/1,
see you.

love you both.

Edited by Divyahet - 12 years ago

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Smitaji,
this not a comment, a letter for you ...my favorite writer,
You are an amazing writer⭐️ of IF,
I didn't remember how I found out your story link..
but when I read His Smiling Girl for the first time I fall in love with your work, the silsila of reading your work yoo hi chalata raha aaj tak aur muje yakin hai aage bhi yoo hi saath bana rahega...

all your os were wonderfully written but if I were to arrange the five stories
they would be in the following order..

1) Keeping Khushi and His Smiling Girl,
2)Living without you and Knowing Khushi,
3)Finding Khushi and Loving Khushi,
4)Saving Khushi,
5)Burning in Your Love.

Unexpected endings for me in Knowing,Finding,Loving and Saving Khushi...so beautifully written par phir bhi kuchh jyaada chaahiye tha..
and even in Burning in your love too.

why I am writing this all because I want you to know what I feel after reading your wonderful stories and what I wish from you.Pehle toh socha private maa , detail maa sandeshwa karenge phir laga iss thread par kar dete hai agar meri jaisy soch kisi or ki bhi nikli aur mujse sahmat ho toh achchhi baat hai.

I hope ki maine apni baat karke aapka dil nahi dukhaaya, aur agar aapko dukh hua ho Smitaji toh phir mai Dil se maafi maangti hoon. Kaafi samay se mai apne dil ki baat share karna chaahti thi aur aaj mai apne aap ko rok nahi payi..chhotisi bachchi samaj kar maaf kar dena muje..😆.

waiting for the next journey of Marrying Khushi.

with lots of love.😛
Hetal.

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Edited by Divyahet - 12 years ago

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Did not even know when Saving Khushi started and Ended...this is an excellent arshi suspense-thriller...khushi kidnap scenes were excellent...the suspense was really gripping and I read all the chapters holding my breath...Very excellent ending...really did not expect and was very pleasantly surprised...you have made up for what ever arnav has done last Diwali...he stood for his wife and his entire family stood for khushi...arnav's gift from khushi was a memorable one...thanks for such a wonderful story...did not expect this story to end so soon...but all good things will come to an end...will wait for Marrying Khushi...

Edited by yoga123 - 12 years ago

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ayushi

@flutterlashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

it ended...

waiting for d next os..

loved the ending

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_Devaki_

@_Devaki_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Wow!!!
You took me to another world with this update...
You closed all the loopholes that CVs left...
Yup,the past Diwali was a pure insult for Khushi..and loved how Arnav apologized for all he had done then..
I really adore the Mrs ASR in Khushi when she said she will burn all the red sarees and will never make any diyas..
She very well know her husband cannot live a day apart from her..and he asked to take him too with her.How romantic!..
Khushi is pregnant!!..That is like a cherry on top..I always love to read about a pregnant Khushi and pampering Arnav...Khushi really expected Arnav to react like Salman Khan in movies and he again surprised her by promising their baby that he will be a good dad..
A baby fills a place in your heart that you never knew was empty...
I should make my husband read this story😆
Waiting for the new story :)

Edited by _Devaki_ - 12 years ago

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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: Divyahet
Smitaji,
this not a comment, a letter for you ...my favorite writer,
You are an amazing writer⭐️ of IF,
I didn't remember how I found out your story link..
but when I read His Smiling Girl for the first time I fall in love with your work, the silsila of reading your work yoo hi chalata raha aaj tak aur muje yakin hai aage bhi yoo hi saath bana rahega...

all your os were wonderfully written but if I were to arrange the five stories
they would be in the following order..

1) Keeping Khushi and His Smiling Girl,
2)Living without you and Knowing Khushi,
3)Finding Khushi and Loving Khushi,
4)Saving Khushi,
5)Burning in Your Love.

Unexpected endings for me in Knowing,Finding,Loving and Saving Khushi...so beautifully written par phir bhi kuchh jyaada chaahiye tha..
and even in Burning in your love too.

why I am writing this all because I want you to know what I feel after reading your wonderful stories and what I wish from you.Pehle toh socha private maa , detail maa sandeshwa karenge phir laga iss thread par kar dete hai agar meri jaisy soch kisi or ki bhi nikli aur mujse sahmat ho toh achchhi baat hai.

I hope ki maine apni baat karke aapka dil nahi dukhaaya, aur agar aapko dukh hua ho Smitaji toh phir mai Dil se maafi maangti hoon. Kaafi samay se mai apne dil ki baat share karna chaahti thi aur aaj mai apne aap ko rok nahi payi..chhotisi bachchi samaj kar maaf kar dena muje..😆.

waiting for the next journey of Marrying Khushi.

with lots of love.😛
Hetal.

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Our love for Arnav & Khushi is so strong, Hetal darling, that we want them with us all the time. This is true of the readers and me. They don't want to say goodbye to the lovebirds and I don't want to say goodbye to the lovebirds...ha..ha..😃

That is why everyone wants me to write epilogue after epilogue after epilogue.😃

And this is the reason why many readers get impatient with the beginning of my stories. They want to get to the lovey-dovey part soon and stay there.😆

We hoped to see lots of ArHi romance in the serial after they got married. We were very disappointed.😭 That is why we want to see them living happily in the stories.

How can I be angry with you, sweetheart? You have every right to express what you feel. I am honoured to have such great friends and devoted readers on IF.👏👏👏👏👏

Thank you, baby!😃

Smita

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

whoa... amazing update and beautiful ending...

Khushi burnt her previous red sari and will do the same for this one 😲 Nicely said... it should have been different... Khushi put up a stand also... loved this part 😊 She was really insulted in the Diwali episode...

Khushi is pregnant 😃 Hope you can include a series about Khushi's pregnacy and how Arnav takes care of her

You are an amazing writer Smita and interpretations are mindblowing👏

Knowing,Finding,Loving and Saving Khushi are beautifully written stories

Waiting for Marrying Khushi to begin

Edited by varsha2KD - 12 years ago

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

It has ended? 😲 It took me by surprise!
But nevertheless, it's a wonderful ending.!

Last Diwali was an insult to Khushi, and I loved the way she threatened Arnav that she'll burn the red sari and go off to Buaji's house 😆 she knows her husband can't stay without her for even a single minute 😳

The icing on the cake is Khushi's pregnancy. Truly the best Diwali gift ever. I wonder if the show was still on air, maybe we would have seen a similar situation, but alas 😭
Arnav's reaction to the news was spot on. The way I had always imagined

Lovely story!!!! Can clearly say it's one of the finest on IF (actually all your stories are!)
I love the way you close all the loopholes the CVs forgot to close, and those which we couldn't get to see.
Thank you for this story! Looking forward to Marrying Khushi!
Can't wait

Loved the interpretation of chapter 16 Rashmi! And thank you for the emails! 😊