Virika OS: Happy Ever Afters Do Exist - Page 5

Originally posted by: candyVirika

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i dun think i need to tell how superb this OS was as u have already received loads of comments praising this piece of art 😊

firstly ... i really liked as it was extra long .. and for that a big big hugiee 🤗

secondly karina frm a long tym i was waiting for u to write something on this track .. and u did it .. so cant tell how much surprised i was whn i read the first line .. and for that a big big wala thank u

thirdly the strting was simply amazing .. just frm the last episode .. it was l am watching the next episode 😉

fourthly i love the way viren and jeevika were taking care of their cute maansi .. the way u have written it is 👏👏

fifthly that father daughter scene whn viren came frm the conference was soo aww .. actually in the whole os viren was soo aww .. the best father .. !!

sixthly u used ' fmji ' eee.. heard it after soo long .. hayye .. and the way maansi and mirah were saying this lol.. how do u come up wid all this ??🤢

sevently the delivery scene .. it was all like i am watching a virika movie 😆 i mean this part was like an interval of this movie :p

eighthly the foursome scene ...i wasnt expecting u to write a fousome scene .. bt u added it and it was like SONE KA SUHAAGA in this os

ninethly ur dialogues were truely aweome yaarrr .. my fav was

j - "Virenji where are you?"

v - "I'm at a restaurant eating lunch with my girlfriend"

j - "VIRENJI very mean. Tell me where are you?"

me loveddd it

tenthly the the way u ended it .. ice cream wala whole scene .. was damn cute .. hayye so adorable .. as i have wrote this before tht this os was a full on movie type .. bt i was also expecting a good baby bump scene .. anyways every thing was TRUELY good :D :D

good job keenu
continue all ur stories soon pleashh

Originally posted by: mehakLUVSvirika

Omg karina...

Eeekkksss...

Dis was such a splendid os...

I have no words for it...

It wasfreakin osssmmm...

Just couldnt get enough of virika...

I missed ur work so much...

Really ossm ...

Mirah mansi...awwwiiieee...

Thnx for such a long os...

Really luved each n every bit of it...

Missin wfl n heartbeat...

Plzzz update dem karina...

Its a humble request...

N do pm me nxt time u write anything...plzzz

Originally posted by: jenna_p

Such a cute OS..Loved it..

Beautifully written as always..

Thanks for the PM..

Continue soon..

Originally posted by: urmil

awesome...i always wait for you to write something on virika and you have fulfilled my wish again...will give detailed review after reading it again...i have read it once but randomly...thanks a lot not only for pm but for this os too coz i am badly missing virika ...🤗

Originally posted by: NikShaikh

wow amazing os
beautifully written
thanks for the PMS
do write more

Originally posted by: arshiasushma

awesome update fablous and mindblowing the two girls telling her mom fmji nice update thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sushmavirika

awesome update thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: kkprincess

osm

very nice

luvd it

the cute mirah and mansi...aww

both r so cute...

wel written

very gud...

lovely...

amazing