Virika OS: Happy Ever Afters Do Exist

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awesome OS..Completely magical...Thanks for the Pm!

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Marzii

@Marzii

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Its so nice to see your pm after so long Peeni...i have missed your writing so much..was so happy when i saw your pm, thought you updated your stories but no, its a new OS of our favourite Virika...Gosh i missed them so so so so effin much. Thanks so much for writing this peeni my love <3 Feeling so good after reading this..was imagining every single pinch of it..it was like i was watching the actual show after the last episode :( How i wish cvs added something like that before ending it..but oh well at least you wrote us something !!! loved it so much, another girl aweee Virens dream came true yet again..but i was hoping for a baby boy..not fair Jeevikas dream didnt fulfill mann:(( but its okk...in future you have to write another OS with Jeevika prego and having a baby boy 😆 overall this story was just beyond amazing peeni..i love you so much..and thanks a lot for giving us this treat!!!

P.S. im missing my Zaaine so much..please try to update that..please please please please please please 😳 ❤️

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nani2630

@nani2630

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Perfect family but I wanted mini Virennji
Karina missing you and your lovely storries

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Samia Sobti Tacker :D

@Asr-Ki-Sam

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Omg very well written Karina👍🏼
N the best parts waz the ice-cream date😳
n the bond dey share iz jus soo beautifull❤️
N when jeevs said Ranbir iz hot n viren waz like more den me?🤣
n devar-bhabhi hi5😉
Splendid OS👍🏼
Just loved it!😳

Edited by Asr-Ki-Sam - 12 years ago

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

absolutely brilliant totally loved it

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

karinaa... reallyyy lovely and amazinggg story... i lovedd itt.. i was smiling throughout reading the story... i loved the sister bond of Mansi, Jhanvi and cutiee Mirah... <3 <3

such a blissful feeling after reading virika story... keep continuinggg... as alwyss u r doing a greatt job...

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Krystlektacker

@Krystlektacker

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

well wirtten and well explained os..really loved each and every bit.wow the father and daughters due the 'fmji' bit was really cute and jeevika she is the same...now i realised how much i missed my virika thank u so much for the os..

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

thank u very much for this OS

mind blowing story its the continuation from 13th sept epi...

loved it as u wrote it very beautifully

virika blessed with two angels but i hoped the second baby to be a boy coz viren wanted a princess, he already has her and jeevs wished for a boy...

par koi gaal nahi the story s fabulous with virika little happy family

thank u once again 😛

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

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i dun think i need to tell how superb this OS was as u have already received loads of comments praising this piece of art 😊

firstly ... i really liked as it was extra long .. and for that a big big hugiee 🤗

secondly karina frm a long tym i was waiting for u to write something on this track .. and u did it .. so cant tell how much surprised i was whn i read the first line .. and for that a big big wala thank u

thirdly the strting was simply amazing .. just frm the last episode .. it was l am watching the next episode 😉

fourthly i love the way viren and jeevika were taking care of their cute maansi .. the way u have written it is 👏👏

fifthly that father daughter scene whn viren came frm the conference was soo aww .. actually in the whole os viren was soo aww .. the best father .. !!

sixthly u used ' fmji ' eee.. heard it after soo long .. hayye .. and the way maansi and mirah were saying this lol.. how do u come up wid all this ??🤢

sevently the delivery scene .. it was all like i am watching a virika movie 😆 i mean this part was like an interval of this movie :p

eighthly the foursome scene ...i wasnt expecting u to write a fousome scene .. bt u added it and it was like SONE KA SUHAAGA in this os

ninethly ur dialogues were truely aweome yaarrr .. my fav was

j - "Virenji where are you?"

v - "I'm at a restaurant eating lunch with my girlfriend"

j - "VIRENJI very mean. Tell me where are you?"

me loveddd it

tenthly the the way u ended it .. ice cream wala whole scene .. was damn cute .. hayye so adorable .. as i have wrote this before tht this os was a full on movie type .. bt i was also expecting a good baby bump scene .. anyways every thing was TRUELY good :D :D

good job keenu
continue all ur stories soon pleashh

Edited by candyVirika - 12 years ago