ArHi Collab FF: Cracks *Chapter 2 PG-16*(21/1)

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

im in luv vth ds ff

itz so intriguing

entirely diff frm d ff's i hv read til date

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

nice concept. but what arnav did that his mother and khushi hate him so much

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Amazing start, the first update was awesome.

Loving the concept of this collaboration, so excited to read further.

Can't wait to read how the story unfolds,

Awww poor Arnav trying to talk him mum but she would not let him see her was so sad.

Wonder what's happened between Arnav and Khushi, can't wait to find out.

Loved the update it was a fantastic read,

Thanks for the PM,

Continue soon, eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Thnx for d pm

Awesome start n interesting concept

So Arnav is away frm his mom

He is married to khushi bt they r nt together.

Khushi is provoking him n be sarcartic usin his words.

So Arnav hs no hesitation asking khushi to be with him.

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

lovely title.. Intriguing charecters and the plot seems interesting!
Arnav has messed up with lots of lives, making his own life Hell in process..

Payal loathes him, his mother, who he wishes to want to talk to is being hard and ignorant to him..

Khushi is his contract wife.. And she is engaged to Asad, Arnav loves her, Khushi loves him too.. SHe is hurt.. Very hurt!

Nice interesting start!

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256748

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Love it waiting for next part.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

such a twisted guy... whats happening here???

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@BlueBloodQueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

<font size="3">Awesome start dear...
Why arnav mom don't want come with arna..
Khushi is arnav's wife..
</font><font size="3">
So many questions are running in my mind right now..
Why khushi hate arnav
why no one know that aSr is marrIed
why payal hate arnav </font>
All things are mistery right now...

Edited by Punya13 - 11 years ago