ArHi Collab FF: Cracks *Chapter 2 PG-16*(21/1)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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COLLAB FF:

"Coming together is a beginning. Keeping together is progress. Working together is success."


Hey all buddies.

We(Avi and Hina) are here with a collab!


Few days ago avi scrapped me to tell that she has some creepy idea 😆 in her mind and she wanted to share it with me, so when she told me that she wants to write a collab with me i was extremely excited and honoured as well, As she chose me to work with her.😳

Now about the collab! Its going to be different! 😲 because we are not going to discuss the story with each other ever! 😃 we will write as we please, as, if I write a chappy than she would give her views about it right in the next post after me and then she would write the next as she wish to as we aren't going to discuss about the story ever, as i said. So IT will be like,


EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED😉


Because maybe if i write a part thinking some plot in my mind and when she write the next it may come out to be completely opposite to what i thought!IT can be like If my perceptions are from the east;hers could be of west or vice versa...so be prepared for this interesting and unexpected journey.😛

But one thing here is gonna be common😊.Hers and mine writing style.She would write in her awesome style and I in mine.😳

We have made a separate index i.e. MAIN INDEX where links of all our collab's will be given.😊


Guys make sure that u check next post after every chapter as its gonna be important cos we aren't going to discuss ever.Next post after each chappy will be either of avi's or mine as either of us will give our views about the chapter the other one will write!!😳

So here we present our first collab,

CRACKS...


SCROLL DOWN FOR INDEX!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Expect the Unexpected(Main Index):(made by awsome_avi😊)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3763390/expect-the-unexpected-an-index-of-collab




INDEX:

Chapter 1: (By Hina69) Scroll Down!!


Chapter 2: (By awsome_avi) Page 16

Edited by Hina69 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My point of view!


"It is possible to cross a river without wetting your legs,

BUT its impossible to cross life without wetting your eyes.."


Arnav Singh Raizada..the name itself held power.If we say that power and ASR are synonyms than it wont be wrong..no..not at all because his every feature,demeanor screams authority and perfection.

Arnav singh Raizada: A dark Man...with a light heart.
A man who seems perfect, but is the most imperfect human being. Every body wants to live his life, but is this a life?


But this person..ASR..was enigma,a puzzle which no one could solve till now.


Puzzle... yeah that is wat it is, his life and his family.
He has a mother whom he has not seen since 14 years, he has a wife... sorry contracted wife... who in herself is a great mystery.


He never accepted or denied any of the news related to his indoor life which were usually printed in certain magazines and page 3 news.Why he never said anything about them? Well another question which only he could answer!


|But did he had the answers?
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Payal Singhania,owner of Singhania hotels stared at his back with her hatred filled eyes as some memories flashed in her eyes.Her eyes got moist.


Singhania... payal singhania, another mystery to be solved, another name in the dark night.
The main mystery about her is her relation with Ratna singh raizada. What is her relation? Is she any ways related with khushi?
And what connection of hate does she have with Arnav singh Raizada?


"I wish you rot in hell Raizada!" she said with contempt
Her last words...another mystery.

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"Mrs.Raizada.." he called.

What? Mrs Raizada? does anyone calls his mother like this? But yes...if a child meets his mother after 14 years and then too not sure about the love bond between them, this is the only procedure...but...but only for A.S.R.


"Kya main dekh sakta hoon?(Can I see?)" he pleaded hoping she would turn.


"Apka chehra.." he chocked "I was talking about your face.Kya mai de.kh sakta hoon?" he urged.


He swallowed a lump.His tears on the verge of falling.

"Maa.." he rasped "Please.."



"When can I meet you?" his voice held that emotion of a child who was desperate to catch a glimpse of his mother for which he was waiting for years..



Another mystery for that arrogant raizada... it proves he has a heart.

**
"We never got to know how to contact you when we needed to! but you can contact us by calling on hotel reception phone" she said with authority indicating the end of discussion.If anyone meet Mrs.Ratna Singh Raizada than they would defiantly know from where ASR got his attitude,stubborness as well as arrogance.


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Only one person could comfort him.



His khushi... his wife...his..his..his love.
But would she?
Could she?
Should she?


Khushi singh raizada!
What is she? no one knows! A simple girl? an arogant girl or...just khushi.



"I am YOUR husband! I have all the authority to stop you or question you" he said breathing on her face.


Husband? huh! a contracted husband...who knows that his wife is engaged to asad singh! Like really?
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So here starts the story of mystery... which has to be solved...unfolded... in different ways!


Hats of hina! you did a great job!👏
Now it's my turn!
I hope I will do it justice!😳
Edited by awsome_avi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved this FF
amazing start
Edited by sspoorthy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Update Your Other Stories Too Please 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ress for me 😲
unress👏👏👏
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hawww Di...aapne mujhe bataya bhi nahi that ur starting collab so soon😭
but subhe-subhe SUPRISE bohotbohothbohoth accha hai
CRACKS⭐️⭐️⭐️
THE CRACK IS ASR 'S life
SUNFLOWER IS KHUSHI NA!
seee..mujhe sab samajh mein aathi hai😉😛🤣

It is possible to cross a river without wetting your legs,
BUT its impossible to cross life without wetting your eyes.."
its sooo goood..simply AWESOMEEE👏
kaha se liya aapne ye quote..these 2 lines are the storie's Base na😳😳😳
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ASR bohoth cruel hai..par i dont understand ki usne aisa kya kardiya ki Khushi aise behave kar rahi hai😭
gosh...he left his family 14years back...ab ye kaunsa nayi mystery hai boss?😕

wow...arnie thinks he can be arnav..HIMSELF ONLY IN FRONT OF KHUSHI😳
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hai re nandkishore..yaha par bhi Contract marriage😭
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jab i read khushi is from new work..tabhi i thought somewhere its gonna be connected to Qubool Hai..nd there comes Mr.Asad...instead of ahmed khan its Singh😛
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HAI DM..Ye kya ho raha hai??
engaged to asad...uff..nd DATE...HELL NO WAY...!!

aww...it was so cutee of arnav to hug khushi nd tell her to stay by his side..nd woh...she's busy smirking😡..i knoee ki arnie ki hi galthi hogii...OBVIOUSLY...but Di atleast khushi should have somewhere cried seeing him in that state😭😭😭
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Asad loves khushi as much as he himself do!
i dont think so.😡.anyway...it doesnt matter whether asad loves khush...it matters who khushi loves😳
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But jealousy..that was another matter altogether.
the perfect way to end chap 1..nd the 1st 2 lines were the perfect way to start the collab👏
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OKIEEE...bak-bak khatam😛
love u Hina Di


Edited by divya1122 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mind blowing!!!!!!! 👏
👏 👏
So much in single part
ASR's character sketch was just perfect,just like we saw him first time,even it was more correct and detailed than on screen,his power,arrogance,attitude,perfection everything u described so perfectly
And then his weakness as arnav,his soft side,love,care for his close ones
His helpless,child like innocence,soft delicate feelings u portrayed when he was talking to his mother
Just like in serial he was chota,innocent,obedient bacha for anjali
Lots of questions are there now
Like why his mother wasn't showing her face?kis galti ki itni badi saja?who is payal?shayad his bhabhi,akash's wife?what happened between arshi?and that contract marriage thing?asad singh??????everything is yet to know
So he loves khushi ha?and shayad she is doing all this to make him jealous or shayad she wants him to feel pain that she felt back then,what happened that caused her to get engaged to asad singh after being in contract with arnav???
Loved the collab idea
It will make this story full of surprises as you guys are not going to discus about it at all
Ek part me kuch alag angle se to dusre me alag angle se,wowww...m excited to know what will happen in next part,and there so many things jinka parda phash hona hai :D
Edited by guptaaesha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very very interesting one,...
Arnav had every thing in his life n he lost everything to probably his arrogance , Ego n Success...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys congrats for the collab ff
It is a very interesting concept of "Expect the unexpected"
Wish u guys all the best!!!
1st chapter of Cracks was awesome and interesting
Now waiting for Avi to see how she is going to continue
Thanks for the pm
😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@awesome_avi
I knoe kahaani aaj hi shuru huyi hai...but can u plzzz update ASAP...pretty plzzz
I love this FF...nd ur witing the next chappy..all the best :D

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