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Originally posted by: mishti_17

That was just amazing.. ❤️ Khushi being his support when no one was.. Such a beautiful story..

Originally posted by: mon16

That was a seriously a excellent piece of writing!!!!! loved it completely!!!

Originally posted by: aquagal

It's a beautiful story of growing in love steadily over the time.
Loved it.😊

Originally posted by: MsIPKKNDManic

I honestly just don't know how you do it..

How you come up with the most mind-blowing plots and how you execute each OS/SS/FF so flawlessly is truly a sign of how very gifted you are.

And this.. this was honestly a masterpiece. I'm so sorry that I've spent so long away from your fantastic work, I really am - real life has just kept me far too busy for my liking, but when I saw your email today, I knew I just had to read some of your sheer brilliance.

And I was not disappointed; I loved every bit of it.

I loved that little bit of ambiguity you put in when you talked about her wedding day - the second you mentioned that "that boy was long gone", I had a mini panic attack, fearing the worst! But their interaction after the wedding obviously cleared things up and had my inner fangirl flailing and swooning 😆

But seriously, I think most of all, I loved the amount of emotion in this; be it you describing his dad's guilt, Arnav's almost debilitating fear of losing Khushi or the mention of Khushi's own fears and insecurities.

A job very, very, very, very well done! 👏🤗

And thank you for still sending me all the emails, even though I don't get a lot of time to read them all

I promise I'll get through everything.. eventually 😕

😳😳😳 Hayye! Thank you very very much, sis! First off, can I just tell you how I miss you? Really, I do miss you a lot, but I also understand how the asli duniya can suck... It's pathetic...😡

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

Short and bitter sweet.

You have beautifully captured all their emotions.

Well written.

Originally posted by: SirenMitra

WOW!!!!!!!!Very different and amazing story!!!

❤️