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Originally posted by: arsf

beautiful story...

the best part is where u tell us dat khushi did nt doubt his love...bt doubted dat if he really loved her...nd was unaware dat it could be out of obligation...nd yes i loved that Dammit wala arnav...
dats the only language khushi understands...in the show as well he had to scream in order to make her belief...

nd now i guess its the most prized confession ever...followed by "hum bhi aapse i love u dammit"😳😳😳

Originally posted by: PhenoixTears

Wow, what a beautiful OS Shikha, brilliantly written and so heart touching. Love the way you wrote Khushi's apprehension in meeting the hi-fi ASR, it was superb. And it was Khushi's determination and love that he was walking on his feet, amazing!! You made love and friendship sounds so powerful and it is indeed. Love the ending, so romantic yet so heart touching, I was like awww 😳😳 And again, I loved all the dresses and jewellery, fantastic choice, loved it. Even the banner was so beautiful.

And yes you are right, Sarunfanatic_ji or I should say "Fried rice ji" is awesome, a lovely dedication to an equally lovely person 😊

Hayye meri jalebi!!!!😃 Shukriya Di! Vaise to, I take special care when choosing the clothing and jewellery just because of you. That's ever since you took that liking for the yellow earrings in 'The Frog Prince'.😆

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

Very touching! Your love stories have such a warm and real feeling to them.

Love your work!

Originally posted by: greshu

hey nice story, continue with more...

Originally posted by: Arshix144

Why didn't I check my email earlier dammit! Why am I so late? How on earth did I miss something you wrote Missy Shikhz?! Not Cool! Not Cool at all!

Ok now that I am done beating myself up about being royally late I will have to tell you how much I absolutely loved this piece. I think I just love whatever you write because I always know you will have a happy ending in store for me and in this case not only a happy ending but a heart warming feeling all the way through. The way you capture emotions is brilliant and in this instance I could feel every single emotion Khushi was going through. From her initial insecurity to her emotional reaction at seeing Arnav helpless in his hospital bed, to their marriage ( where you got us for a second thinking she is marrying someone other than Arnav) and finally to the time where they get to talk and really talk about how much they mean to eachother, how Arnav has fought against all odds and is able to walk again, how Khushi was there for him all the way through and how much he loves her.

Beautiful, beautiful work! Quite a surprise to yeah? So you are welcome to surprise us like this any time you like Shikha!😆 Love your stuff sista!

Originally posted by: esha85

A very beautiful and touching story...loved it...you should write more..

Originally posted by: jtammareddy

One word to describe it. BRILLIANT.

Originally posted by: chavvi16

awww that was beautiful
so he did walk again
but would have given up if not for her
wow that was just what they both needed one another right

Originally posted by: SS88

A beautiful, inspirational tale of love. You 're a very gifted writer, Shikha!

Originally posted by: Arshi-Nikita123

OMG !! I have no words for this..!

It was simply fabulous..

Very Very beautifully written..

It was so emotional...and heart touching !

Amazing yaar...

Really loved it !

I loved the characters..

And the story was lovely !

It wasn't a one shot , it was a full fledged story , and an extremely marvelous concept !

The Name was superb as well.

You totally nailed it !

Kudos.