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Uthra

@Viji79

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

First of all, thanks for the pm.

You have blown me away once again with your flawless writing prowess and story telling. The suspense that the woman was none other than khushi herself was ll maintained and gave an impression to the readers that khushi was dead and arnav is narrating the story to another woman. Well done.👏

I was reminded of barun's previous show baat hamari pakki hai.

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720865

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

you made me cry 😭 really :')

beautifully written..👏

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

That was simply heart wrenching!

This shows that some people do get that real "forever" kind of love we all dream about.

Beautifully written :)

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Awesome os.

It's remind me a movie 50 First dates or kisses . I dont remember correct name.

Firstly I guessed that someone else interviewing Arnav.

I felt bad for them. For both khushi and Arnav.

Khushi can't remember.

Arnav Waiting for his love to remember him, them, and their love.

Beautiful work.

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shona-li

@shona-li

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

This made me tear up. Such a beautiful story, and the source you drew inspiration from even more so. For a while, it felt like I was following you down a rabbit hole but what a lovely journey you've led us on. Bittersweet and touching. Definitely one of my favourites! And kudos to you for doing the volunteering that you do! The world is a better place with people seeking to make a difference in other people's lives.

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Aditi

@uv-crazyfan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Wow it was so beautiful. Loved reading it. Thanks for the pm dear :)

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Mind-blowing... Don't have words to say

First I though Khushi is dead & Arnav is telling there love story to someone but later that someone turned to be his Khushi...

Loved it..very beautifully written

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

What a poignant, maving story, Shiza, but even more moving was the real life story that is it's inspiration.

My only quibble is the use of the word 'inane' that you used to describe Khushi, she is, if anything, completely the opposite of inane, she is extraordinary, not a silly, vacuous person that the word 'inane' means!

Loved the metaphor of the cherry blossom.

As ever, your narrative technique was brilliant- Khushi as two personas, the one after listening to the story of the one before. Hoping someday the two become one to make Arnav whole again.

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Such a beautiful OS, is made more beautiful because of the inspiraton behind the OS. I was teary eyed by the end of it. The couple at the center have truly lived up to their vows "In sickness and in health"

Hope Arnav's wait will come to fruition some day.

Thank you for penning a heart touching story! You write wonderfully.

Cheers

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InvisibleSmile

@InvisibleSmile

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Japonica
What a poignant, maving story, Shiza, but even more moving was the real life story that is it's inspiration.

My only quibble is the use of the word 'inane' that you used to describe Khushi, she is, if anything, completely the opposite of inane, she is extraordinary, not a silly, vacuous person that the word 'inane' means!

Loved the metaphor of the cherry blossom.

As ever, your narrative technique was brilliant- Khushi as two personas, the one after listening to the story of the one before. Hoping someday the two become one to make Arnav whole again.

@bold : I think I wrote the term '' inane'' as more figuratively, than it to be an actual description of Khushi. She is anything but, in fact she is: bright, smart, witty, positive, beautiful, and so much more. Either way, I completely agree with you.

Edited by InvisibleSmile - 12 years ago

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