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Posted: 12 years ago
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i fell in love with this story... it was simply perfectly beautiful beyond the words...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just don't know what to do now?!...i am sitting here staring at my screen ...this was just amazing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AMAZING OS SO SAD YET BRILLIANT THIS REMIND ME OF A MOVIE I SAW IT WAS SO EMOTIONAL HEART BREAKING SOME TIME SHE WOLD REMEMBER HIM AND SOME TIME SHE WOULD NOT BUT HE WAS JUST HAPPY BEING THEIR WITH HER IN THE END THEY DIED IN EACH OTHER ARMS LOVED THE OS HEART FELT SOUL SEARCHING AMAZING STILL CHOCKED BECAUSE OF THE EMOTION THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, that was awesome! Loved how you wrote each emotion! Nicely done!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ek Bahar phir, you tug at our heart strings, so beautifully composed. They say love has the ability to conquer all and this Arnav portrayed that so well
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: throughmirrors

Did it you have to make to so heart-touching? Plus, the fact that this story is some couples real life, it just adds to the beauty of what you tried to portray. I would give you a hug, if I could. The story was not only my cup-of-tea but the way you narrated it, the beauty of this story heightened. In the beginning, I kept on thinking, maybe Khushi is no more. I kept on praying that I would be proven wrong also but I am glad I was wrong. It was such a nice surprise in the end when she slipped the ring onto her finger. I don't know how you do it...you spin simplicity from your words and that in turn churns out real emotions. It was so subtle yet so heart - warming.

I don't know if you purposely picked the rain but I felt it held some kind of symbolism for the couple. I have been told rain is often taken be a god's blessing and in some form a re-birth. When it rained, it was as if they were blessed yet again. Simple things like these are enough to make you want to believe in love again. And, the cherry blossoms, I knew you read but not to this extent. I had to search up cherry blossoms after reading this OS.

You are marvelous, hun. I absolutely loved this OS. I hope you write more like it. Your writing is like you said, strands of spun candy floss. Sheer, beauty.



I think only you could have understood the silent implications of the rain! Thank you for making the effort worth it in the end. Honestly, I adore the rain and I remember my mother telling me that rain is god's grace. If it rain, it means, it is meant to be. You read into those in-between-lines so perfectly. I love you for it.

You don't know the feelings that emanate within me, when I sit face to face with the couple. It makes you want to believe in love. I have never experienced love but if I could -i'd want it to be like that. Self-sufficient and always reliable. Nothing in life can guarantee happiness, but you can always work towards contentment.



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: devishree

no words

i am speechless
marvelous just awesome
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Thank you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was beautiful. If one of the two forgets everything - the feelings, the hurt, the hope - beautifully written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😛great story...& u have written it so beautifully...
I loved reading it...

that woman is really blessed to have a man like that who loves her a lot,who daily repeats their story,who has a hope that his wife will remember him some day
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was heart touching and beautiful
awesome story 👏

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