SwaRon OS : My Take on the Current Track (UPDATED)

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[quote]SWARON OS : A Take on the Current Track[/quote]


She made her way to the locker room and sat there disappointed with her life. Everything was going haywire and she didn't know what to do. Tired and devasted, She opened her locker to quench her thirst just when her eyes caught something. The flashbacks came running to her mind when she saw those gifts, how Swayam had tried everything to win her. How much he loved and how much did he actually know her. Looking at the current happenings it was difficult for her to believe this was the same Swayam who used to love her so much, that he would never even bother to look left or right before confessing his love. He was someone who fell in love with her not because of her outer glamour or because of her money, but someone who loved her form within. But today, it felt as if she has got to meet a new Swayam. Someone who doesn't even care about her, and for him, the last thing in his list would be her. She took out the perfume along with the other gifts and looked at them, she couldn't avoid the small little smile that had come up to her lips. Suddenly the voices of Simmi and Rinni brought her out of her thoughts and quickly kept the gifts inside her locker and closed it.

" Hey Sharon. I'm so happy hamara fest successful gaya. I was so tensed. And the best part, even dance is back. What better way to end the fest? Right Sharon?" Simmi said who was busy packing her bag to go back home.

" Hun? Ohh ya, I'm glad the fest turned out to be good. After all St. Louis ne organize kiya tha, it had to be good. "

" Yaa And by the way Swayam told me to inform you that VP sir ne hum sab ko one day leave di hai. Now I can peacefully sleep."

" Simmi, Are you sure yeh boys ka koi aur stupid plan nahin hai?"

" No Sharon, VP sir clearly told Swayam infront of me only to tell you and Aashi about the off. I mean maine unhe baat karte suna. Swayam told us to inform you aur usne bola that vo aashi ko khud inform kardega." Rinni said in between their conversation

" Accha Sharon me and Rinni are leaving. You want a drop?"

" No thanks, I'll tell Rey to drop me. Actually I have to check the college once before leaving if everything has been picked and if people can come and use it tomorrow. Even the payments have to be made to the caterers. So I think I will see you guys day after"

" Cool then, bye"

After the girls left Sharon opened her locker once again. Taking a final glance at the gifts she decided something. she had to get back her previous Swayam back. After the dance coming back to their team and even Rey and Swayam patching up, there wasn't really a reason for them to stay separate. Smiling to herself she closes her locker when a plan hit her mind.

***

The next morning he sat there on his sofa thinking that who could have sent him the box of 5 star chocolates. As far as he remembered, there were only a couple of people who knew about his love for 5 - stars and it didn't really look like one of them sending this to him. He even searched inside the bouquet but to his utter disappointment he found nothing in there. He tried remembering the dates again and neither did this day seem very special to him apart from the fact that today was one of his classmates birthday and that fellow should be getting gifts not him. He kept both the things aside and went to his bed. The fest was indeed tiring and had was really energy consuming. Feeling dizzy, he soon fell into deep slumber.I

t was evening by now and he had a long sleep.The alarming voice of his ringtone woke him up and he unwillingly received the call.

" Hey dude, tu kahan hai. Subah se phone try kar raha hoon but tu hai ki utha hi nahin raha. Lagta hai mere dono friends ko ek saath gayab hone ki aadta lag gayi hai" Swayam checked his phone and got shocked to see 20 missed calls from Rey

" 20 missed calls? Seriously Rey."

" Haan, toh main bore ho raha tha. Ab mai kya apne best friend ko call bhi nahin kar sakta"

" Chup kar nautanki. Abhi mat dimag khaa"

" achcha batao toh tum dono kahan ho?"

" mere bed par!"

" Kya? Kya kar rahe ho tum dono tere bed par. Chee"

" Aye chup kar jaa. Vo Sharon mere saath nahin hai. Main apni baat kar raha tha vo Pata nahin kahan hai. Aisi gandi soch apne dimag mein laya bhi mat kar. Samjha"

" Achcha sorry baba. Accha sun mein tujhe 2 ghante mein pick up kar raha hoon, tu mein aur Sharon kahin chalte hai. Bahut time hogaya. "

" Par Rey"
" Main kuch nain sun raha byee"

Before Swayam could say anything the call was cut. Suddenly he saw Ramu kaka entering with his evening tea. Yes, that was what he exactly wanted at the moment. He took the cup and sipped it. Before he could even gulp it down, he puked it out.

" kaka, yeh kaisi chai hai?"

" Woh Swayam beta, yeh humne nahin banayi. Kahin se aayi thi thermos mein. Unhone bola sham ke samay chai mein yahi wala chai dena. "

" accha? Naam toh bataya hoga"

" haan kuch s se bol rahe they nahin sec."

" achcha chodo Aap aisa karo jab agli baar ayenge toh unka naam kahin likhvalena. Abhi aap mere liye dusra chai banado. Iss chai mein toh dood itna kam hai aur chini itna zyada. Koi kaise piye"

" Haan mein bana deta hoon , tab tak aap tayaar ho jaaye. Vo rey babu ka phone aaya tha bolne ki aapko boldey vo ek ghante mein aa rahe"

" haan mein tayaar hone jaa raha hoon."

Swayam got ready and had his tea when he suddenly heard the horn and left home to meet his friends.


UPDATE - PAGE 4


[quote]Only 1 part left. should be posted tomorrow definitely. have already written it.

Do like and comment. it means alot. will try and reply to each and every comment.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aisha dat was amazing yaar. .
After seeing precap i went mad thinkin of Wat sharon is going to do. .
But reading ur os made me so happy. .
I completely enjoyed it. .
Superb os. .
Swayam ne chai gira di omg sharon ko pata chala toh swayam baba ki kher nahi😆 😆
Very well penned down. .
Pls update next part soon. .
I actually can't wait to read more. .
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the os..There is no hope of getting such a track from cv's but u surely penned it well..

lol..swayam ne chai phek di..

overall fun to read:)

m actually eager to read the next swaron meeting..

So hope ur tomorrow comes soon and u update..:)


Edited by SwaRon_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start 😊
Sharon sending gifts to Swayam
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aisha dis was fab yaar
I loved it
the way you conceived this one was really awesome
post the next part soon
sorry for the short feedback will reply in detail after the next part

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome aishaa
loved it a lot
swayam to gya 😆😆
update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue soon aishaa--plz pm me when u do?
i really loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its Beautiful<3<3<3
Plz continue:-)
jus loved it:-)<3<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Aisha,
Wow this update is simply fantastic.👏
Loving the way Sharon sending gift to Swayam and also Rey, Swayam and Sharon going out together, hmmm that's interesting.😉
Loved all the dialogues as well.👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for the next part.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great OS👏
Sharon being Swayam's secret admirer I just love to see Sharon trying to get her Swayam back😳
Swayam ne Sharon ki chai gira di 😆😆
Sharon sends 5 Stars to Swayam OMG that is great😆
Please Update it soon

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