KR/Swaron OS: Out Of Line

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

vaishuu...
wat a os dear!!
superb.. mind blowing.. fantastic..
i loved it so so soo muchh..
nd the names.. "kriyuu, reyu, swayu.."
hayyee choo cutee...
awsm wrk gal.. juz brilliant..

👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Brilliant os!!

naughty convo was totally worth eeping about!!

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perfect_arsha

@perfect_arsha

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

supercool os!!!
the time when the story reached rey's house, this os turned into breathtaking os!!!

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awesome os best friends se sidha hot couple
Loved it to the core
Thanks for the pm

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

omg !!

this was truly beautiful

i mean both the versions rocked.. so do the couples...

i loved it

just wanna read it once again...

awesome 👏👏

thanks marium for the PM

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

that was well written vaish... ur os just loved it...
both the version was quite cute ,sweet and adorable and they came together
as kriyaansh and swaron ...

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Awesome one..👏Count my like too, like button's not working.😡

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

baby...u r just amazing...
loved the character design...
the idea..the execution...the treatment...
the freshness in the story...
there is something very special in your style of writing...lets call it vaish-style😉...
loved the KR/SS 1st in controlled mode...
next moment when their hearts started controlling the tamed hearts...it was just explosive...
loved the childhood besties turned love-birds...

loved loved loved the OS😳🤗