FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out) - Page 42

Thanks for this lovely update

My love ASR and beautiful khushi...it's treat to see them back...

Poor shlok I hope yaha koi problem na ho...

Continue soon

Oh so it had Ipk more than Ebp😆. That was great. Never had I thought you are going to make Arnav and Shlok friends that was great to read. I really liked the update.

Divorce? Does Athsa knows about it or no her super annoying mom felt it was necessary to take the initiative on behalf of her daughter?

I'm glad Jyoti has sensed that something is wrong with her dad. Are you going to disclose his true colors, since the Ff is probably ending by the next chapter.

In the next chapter can we have more of War Path rather then Avenging Angel?

I hate it when parents treat their adult children like kids? Kalindi should have told Astha about Shlok's call, I understand the need to protect her but also respect her decision otherwise Kalindi is no better then Shlok, she is making decisions that affect Astha.

Why do i get the feeling that NA sent the divorce papers to Shlok?

Shlok is suffering from depression and is heartsick...I LOVE IT!!!!!!

Thank you so much for continuing🤗, means a lot. It is an emotional read(its a compliment), loved the attention to detail. I felt an unique energy in this chapter, may be because of the presence of IPK characters I love.

Astha wearing black, felt like she is mourning and trying to hold on to him through her clothes, poor thing. I have never felt that Shlok ever noticed her inclination towards brighter colors, if he has noted that, then seeing her at the party wearing black will be like a slap to him. Guessing he will be more tormented, knowing that he is responsible for her transformation( more regret, bring it on!). OK, I must confess, started feeling sorry for him. Thank you for blending IPK and EBP so well, I loved it👏. I liked that you mentioned Anjali as ANGEL-y...she is truly an angel. Are you planning an MU between Astha and Shlok over divorce papers(if then we will get more chapters,I'm happy), guessing they both have no role in it. At this rate most of the rooms in Agnihothri mansion will be messy and locked down by Shlok, to keep the bittersweet memories of the girls he loved 🤣. Do something about that room with Swathi's stuff to make Astha realize that he has moved on. Shlok's reaction of not trusting that his father can be wrong is a believable approach.

Lines I loved:-

her brother's eyes watered..Shlok, softly: Business trip. She doesn't need to compromise and make it work with a man who never deserved her in the first place. ...You portrayed his helpless jealousy so well.

Just like that. Impersonally. In a cold, white envelope, she sent him his life's decision.

There was middle-class and royalty, Hindu and Muslim, Lebanese and Persian, and then there was Khushi. 😆😆 she is in a class all of her own.