Love Pain And Hurdles ||Kriyaansh SS|| Part 5 Page 24 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Madhukumari


achha aisa kya??
Matlab tu bi wohi shft ho gayi hogi na?tbi itni knwldge hai . .:-P


Kaha yaar , yeh sab toh bhadpedia ka kamaal hain..:P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Wow awesome update lovd it
Very much
Krisha bond
But
WTH why kriya is behaving so weird what she hiding
And
Wht the past bet shivan and her
Bahut q hai ans nahi pata update next part fast asap
Waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Another Mast si Story it is 😃...
Bohat he interesting story line hai ...
KriSha already sissy's , KR ka relation bhi chup nai hai 😃 , Kria has both her parents BUT this brings a 'Secret' along too 🤔...

Kria and her past *Which i think has Shivam in it *

Phir bhi Great start hai 👍🏼...
N woh banner bhi Amazing hai ...
Already loving it ❤️...
N Shu-Kriya for the Pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
nice story
after watching thur episode i love shivam
but now reading this i hate him
cont soon thnx fr pm
congress fr new story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Part 2

Kria closed her eyes , as shivam's words came in her mind . She spoke to herself.

"Your deadly past is back kria! You can't run away from it now! You have to be strong. Apne liye , apni behen ke liye aur apne pyaar ke liye . Jaisa shivam kehta hain waisa karti jaa , usse confess toh karna hi padega!"

She slept .

---

In college , Sharon came. All were in the class.

"Hey sharon!"

Simmi said. Sharon smiled weakly.

"Kya hua? And where is kria?"

Swayam asked.

"Kuch nahi , kria ko lekar thoda tensed hun."

"Kya hua kria ko?"

Rey immediately asked.

"Some guys were misbehaving with her toh usse chot lag gayi . Thapad toh maar dia kria ne unko , lekin mujhe ghabrahat ho rahi hain."

"Kaisi ghabrahat?"

Bharat asked.

"Kria ka ek past hain , jisse voh bahot darti hain! Aur mujhe shak hain ki uss past mein jo main culprit tha voh aur koi nahi balki shivam hain. Kria ne toh mujhe bola voh nahi lekin i am scared . She looked so weak so scared , and i am sure ki koi ladke nahi the. Something happened."

"Kaunsa past?"

Rey asked.

"I can't tell you that rey . If kria feels comfortable enough , she will tell you and i hope even the part which i don't know."

"Why? Is she not comfortable with me? Does she not trust me?"

"She does rey lekin,"

"Lekin she is scared to tell rey?"

Swayam asked.

"Yes! Kind of scared to tell anyone of you , but guys promise me you won't ask her about it! When the right time comes , she will tell you."

"Fine!"

All said.

"If that shivam has done anything which has hurt baatcutter , i swear i'll kil him."

"We will kill him dude."

Swayam said.

"Guys , it's not confirmed ki shivam is related to her past! It's what i think , not the truth na!"

All sighed.

----

Kria woke up as her phone rang , she thought it must be rey , and picked it up.

"Rey i am fine seriously , aap tension kyun."

She was cut by a voice.

"It's not rey!"

Kria sat up straight , realising it was shivam.

"Sh-shivam?"

"Yes! Now listen to me carefully , tum kal mere college ke gates ke bahar milna."

"Kal ,kab?"

"2 o'clock."

"Shivam , uss waqt meri rehearsals hain."

"I don't want any arguments! You are coming! That's it , nahi toh."

"Nahi toh what?"

He laughed , a devilish laugh . Kria gulped.

"Fi-fine , i'll be there."

She was going to cut the call when.

"Call cut karni ki sochna bhi mat miss.ghai! Abhi apne ghar ka darwasa kholo."

"Ghar ka darwasa?"

Confused , at how he knew she was staying with Sharon.

"Oh come on kria! Mein jaanta hun ki you are staying with Sharon , tumhari mom bahar gayi huyi hain na."

Kria sighed in relief and got up , trembling she opened the door , and saw a packet.

"See that packet?"

"Ye-yes!"

"Kholo usse."

Kria did , and saw a skirt , and a halter top.

"Yeh kya?"

"Yeh pehen kar kal mujhe milna."

"N-no!"

"Why do you test my patience sweetheart?"

"Shivam please."

Almost on the verge of crying.

"Fine! Don't wear this!"

"Thank you so much!"

"Instead of that don't wear anything na!"

"What?"

"Option is yours sweetheart . Bye."

---

Kria was numb , she ran inside . And kept the clothes inside . She sat on her bed , her phone rang. It was rey.

"Hey baatcutter."

"Rey."

"Kya hua baby you sound upset!"

"Please idhar aa jao na."

"Fi-fine i am coming."

After a while , the bell rang , kria got out of her bed and ran to the door , she opened the door , and hugged rey tightly.

"Baatcutter , kya hua?"

Kria did not reply , rey stroked her hair , and took her inside . He made her sit , and held her hand.

"Kya hua?"

"Rey , voh."

"Kya sweetheart?"

"I missed you!"

"The truth kria!"

Rey said sternly.

"M-mujhe m-mom ke pa-paas ja-jaana hai-hain rey."

Rey sighed , he knew she won't tell the truth and pulled her in a hug.

"Uncle aunty toh do din baad wapas aa rahe hain na jaan. You meet them then."

"D-do di-din?"

"Aaj badi yaad aa rahi hain unki."

"Bas yun hi."

"You sure this is the truth."

"No it's not!"

Rey pulled her back and wiped her tears.

"Tell me what's wrong?"

"Arre I was kidding rey! Aapko lagta hain mein aapse kuch bhi chupaungi?"

"I trust you jaan , lekin aaj pata nahi kyun lag raha hain ki you are hiding something big , and this thing is hurting you!"

"Nothing's hurting me rey , jab tak aap mere saath ho , i won't get into any problem , trust me rey."

Rey hugged her back.

"Tum kuch bhi karo kria, but please don't hurt yourself."

"Rey , i won't! Bas abhi maa aur papa aa rahe hain na , then i'll be fine!"

"Itna miss kar rahi ho unhe?"

"Haan!"

Kria closed her eyes , and sighed . Rey stroked her hair not sure whether she was saying the truth.

"Bas papa jaldi aa jaaye , i'll tell him everything. Just yeh do din kaise bhi beete , the first thing i do is call him up. How i wish i could tell you rey , lekin abhi aapka aur mera relation bachana , apni di ke dhoke ka badla lena is what i want. And i am sorry for lying to you."

Kria said in her mind. While rey.

"I can't leave you alone when you are in pain kria , if that shivam is hurting you na , he is gonna pay a huge price for it , no one messes with you kria! No one."

Hope you all liked it . Now you must have guessed that shivam is related to kria's past. The past will be revealed soon. BTW THE NEXT TIME YOU WANT PMS FOR THIS STORY KINDLY POST YOUR REVIEW... :)

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Loved it

Ab Shivam kia kare ga?😲 (b/w shivam ke recent comeback ke bad usey bad imagine karna kitna muskil hai :P)

KR were Adorable

Update Soon :)
Edited by zona_malik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
aarrggg,,,,, this shivam...😡
i hate him... to the core..

aww.. loved the sweet kriyaansh moments...

thnks for the pm..
and pls update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Awesome update 😊
Shivam😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
res
unres...
awesome update...
shivammm d cheapo will neva change 😡
loved gang n specially shareyam's concern or kriya...
i wish kriya would have told d truth to rey...
hope she dont get into any trouble...
thnx fr d pm..
Edited by Princess_Devil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Awesme update..
Really luvd it..
Update nxt part soon..

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