Love Pain And Hurdles ||Kriyaansh SS|| Part 5 Page 24

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I know many of you want to kill me 😛 . Apne already pending works ka update nahi de rahi aur ek aur story lekar aagayi . But don't worry yeh story choti hain . But mere dimaag mein bahot dino se chal rahi thi . Accha enough of my bakwaas here i present you my story .



For Part 1 , Scroll down.

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Part 1

The dazzlers were broken beyond limits. Shivam had cheated the whole team , especially Sharon. All were really very upset , and the weaklings were trying their level best to help them . All were sitting in the canteen.

"You were right kria! Mujhe uss shivam se dur rehna chahiye tha! I shouldn't have trusted him."

"Sharon! Jo hua so hua! Ab we just need to find a way through which we can make shivam confess to what he did."

"How will that be possible kria?"

Asked an annoyed rey.

"We can try rey!"

"Tumhe toh khush hona chahiye na kria! Ab tumhe compete karne ke liye koi team nahi!"

Said vicky.

"Shut up vicky!"

Shareyam shouted together.

"Listen vicky , galti meri thi , tumhe koi haq nahi ki tum meri behen ko taunt karo! Voh toh bas humein console karna chahti hain."

Sharon said . Everyone in the group knew that krisha were sisters and kriyaansh were in a relationship. Only the group knew about this.

"Look kria , i am really sorry. Mein gusse mein kuch bhi bak deta hun! And you know that na?"

Kria smiled and nods.

"It's fine vicky."

"Lekin kria , how did you know shivam accha ladka nahi hain?"

Suddenly simmi asked. All look up.

"I just got the vibe."

She said. They nod.

"Chal kria , it's getting late!"

Krisha went away .

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The next day , kria went to KR college. The kr dance team was there. One of the guys told shivam.

"Bhabi aa rahi hain dude!"

Shivam smirked.

"Finally she realised that i am perfect for her."

Kria saw them . Her hands were sweating . She came there. Shivam came to her.

"Hey kria!"

Kria rolled her eyes.

"Look , i am not interested in talking to you. I will just come to the point ."

"And what is it?"

He puts his hand on her waist , kria moved back.

"Tumhe jaakar sach confess karna padega ki tumne Sharon ki team ka routine churaya!"

Shivam laughed , and came close to her . A crowd had gathered . Shivam pinned the strand of hair behind kria's hair which was on her face . Kria moved away.

"I won't sweetheart."

"You have to shivam!"

"I won't!"

"You are a bloody jerk."

She slapped him hard on his face.

"And you so deserve this slap! Bloody disgusting jerk . Looser a*****e!"

Shivam looked at kria , and held his cheek .

"I will make you confess shivam!"

She turned to leave , when he held her hand turned her , he bought her dangerously close to his face. Kria got scared , he twisted her hand , and threw her down harshly . Kria cried in pain , he then picked her up.

"Mujhe thapad maarni ki himmat kaise huyi tumhari!"

He then slapped her . Kria was too scared to react. Tears rolled down her cheek.

"Abe shivam ladki hain voh! Tu paagal hain kya!"

One of his friends said.

"Shut up dude!"

He then took kria close to himself.

"Now listen to me kria! You are just mine! And maine uss team ko issliye toda kyunki uss mein reyaansh tha! And remember kria , tumhare aur mere beech jo bhi aayega na , i will destroy that person . And rey ne bhool kar di kria .

"You can't do this shivam! You toh got over me na?"

"Who said that! I loved you i love you and i will love you!"

"You are obsessed with me shivam! You have gone crazy."

"Yes i am crazy! And you have made me that kria! Now listen to me , tumhe rey ke saath rehna hain na? Aur mujhse confess karwana hain? You want rey to be unharmed?"

Kria nods scared.

"Then you have to do , whatever i tell you to. And if you don't , you know what can i do."

Kria looked at him. Tears streaming down her cheeks .

"Am i clear?"

Kria did not reply.

"I asked something!"

Shivam shouted , his grip grew tighter , kria nods.

"Wh-what d-do I Ha-have to do?"

"Just wait."

And he kissed her cheek , kria pushed him away with all her might and ran out . Tears rolling down her cheeks.

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Sharon was in the hall , when kria opened the house door , and ran into her room . Closing it with a bang . Sharon got up and went there.

"Kria?"

She opened the door , kria was sitting on the bed crying badly. She ran to her.

"Kya hua? And where had you gone?"

"Shi-shivam ke college."

Sharon looked at her , and saw her head bleeding a little.

"What the hell did he do!"

"No-nothing! I just got injured . Bahar ku-kuch lad-ladke muj-mujhe ched ra-rahe th-the toh issliye."

She hugged Sharon , Sharon stroked her hair.

"Kria? Are you sure?"

"Haan!"

"Did he do anything sweetheart?"

"No!"

"Accha , kria kya shivam wahi ladka hain?"

"Nahi Sharon."

"Hmm , sach bol rahi hain na?"

"Haan!"

"Kria , agar voh hain , toh please tell me sweetheart , tu dar mat . Iss baar mein hun tere saath , dad hain , mom hain . Hum sab hain kria."

"Sharon , agar shivam voh ladka hota na toh i would have told you."

Sharon wiped her tears.

"Kria , just remember one thing , i won't ever let that disgusting creep set his eyes on you again . If you see him once again , tell me , i will make sure he goes through the same hell as he made you go through , sorry not the same hell but far worse."

"I know that my protective sister. Accha Sharon i am tired , i wanna sleep."

"Okay , anyways who the hell were those idiots who made my sister cry?"

"Random jerk , i slapped them! Don't worry."

"Accha wait."

Sharon came back ,and wiped the little blood on kria's head and bandaged it. Kria lied down , closing her eyes , when.

"Kria?"

"Hmm?"

"I think you should tell rey the truth about your past with that guy."

Kria opened her eyes.

"When the time comes Sharon , i will tell him everything."

"Okay."

And Sharon went.

Hope you all liked this update . All the confusions will be cleared later on in the future updates. 😊 Aur shivam ko jitni gaali deni hain de do 😆😆 .

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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(All the chapters are hyper linked)


Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res. . . . . . . . . .
Unres. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Kya bolu main?? . . . . . .
As m realy-realy loving this storyline. . .
KriSha sisters hai,sbko pata hai. .
KR relationshp mein hai woh bi sabko pata hai. .
Now. .nw. .nw. .
Shivam the 🤬 is behaving so harshly with kriya. .I so damm hate him kriya. . . .
U knw ishu. . . .as mujhe puri story pata hai,but still m realy excitd to read further,as i know tu bilkul hatke story ko persent karegi. . . .
So m realy looking 4ward to it. . . . .
Awsm concept re. .
Continue soon :-D

P.S kisiko apna confusion clear kerwani hai toh do contact me. .
Mujhe puri story pata hai. .i can be wondrful help 4 u guyss, hain naa Ishu?? 🤣
Edited by Madhukumari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res..
unres..

awsum start..
loved it..
jaldi se next part update kar..
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hehehe. . .
Ishu. .mai confusd nai hu. .pata hai na kyu? *grinning*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Hehehe. . .
Ishu. .mai confusd nai hu. .pata hai na kyu? *grinning*


Yaar Kissi Ko Secret reveal kia na! Maar khaayegi tu..:P
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Originally posted by: kriyaanshfreva



Yaar Kissi Ko Secret reveal kia na! Maar khaayegi tu..:P


hehe... Kisi ne abi tak pucha nai hai,koi puchega,tb dekhungi :-P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhukumari


hehe... Kisi ne abi tak pucha nai hai,koi puchega,tb dekhungi :-P


Haan haan..:P
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Awesome start!!;)
Loveddd ttt;)
Continue soon!!!
And sry d like button s not working!!

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