Raabta - A KriYaansh SS - part 1 (updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys! how r u? hope all r fine.
firstly, i want to thank all the people who liked and replied to my post. thanks a lot. this really encourages very much.
secondly, here's the first part.

PART 1
(DELHI)

3 cars stopped in front of the mansion. singhania's, shekhawat's and d3 group came out of the car.
*all the couples of the d3 group r married*

vi:phew... finally we reached to our destination😊.
nil:ya, the place where humara best friend humse door chala jayga😭.
sw:shut-up guys, rey kahi nahi ja raha hai, yahan uski shaadi hai ok.
bh:mere bhai, shaadi ke bad har insan ho bina apni marzi ke apni biwi ki har baat manni padti hai..aur yeh baat to tu be manta hai na?
sw:ha but...
sh:kya kaha, maine kuch sunna nahi😔.
sw:nahi,nothing.
sh:better.
si:don't trust him sharon. all boys r the same,
ne:sachi! inse zayda mean to koi ho he nahi sakta.
vi:no honey it's not...
vishaka cuts in between:dude she's right and dodn't u try and change her mind.
bh:tu zayda mat bol nahi to...

this fight continues. girls vs boys was on. no on e could say that they were married. but someone was quiet all the time. that person was rey. he was not interested in all this. all he wanted to get over with this marriage thing soon. rey's and swayam's parents had gone inside the mansion a long time back. someone was their lokking at rey all he time. she was taani, thinging that rey was thinking that rey was thinking about her. she went to him and tapped on his shoulder.

ta:aap theek ho na?
re:ha, mujhe kya hua hai?(looking away)
ta:main notice har rahi hon jabse humari shaadi ke baat hue hai tabse aap shant ho gaye hai. what's the matter?
re:i said na nothing(faking a smile🄱). i think we should go inside now.
ta(in mind):chahe aap mujhe batao ya nahi, i know that u love me.

they reached the gang who were still fighting. rey was trying his best to stop them, but all in vain. losing his patience, he shouted:shutup!just shutup. enough of this drama now. i want everyone inside the mansion right now😔. saying this he moved forwad with taani following him. the gang was shocked😲 at his behaviour. from the time his marrige was fixed with taani.he was the same. he spoke very less. his behaviour and atitude changed. all thought this was the effect if taani.(actually this was the side-effect of taani). they also moved forward.

as rey entered the mansion, he was taken abask by a sudden bone-crushing hug. he saw the person and was shocked😲😲.

re:tu..tu yahan...kab...how come?
per:saale teri shaadiho aur main shamil na hon, not possible. tune to shaadi me invite he nahi kiya to main khud he aa gaya.

the gang was standing and looking at the two talking and laughing. they were thinking who was that person. swaron were thinking of the time they last saw rey laughing like this, it was actually a long time ago. they were happy seeing him this wayšŸ˜›. they realised that he was someone close. tanni was as usual looking at her prince-charming.(old habits die hard🄱)

per:rey where's my bhabhi?
re:bhabhi?šŸ˜•
per:duffer your would be wife!
re:oh ya! (turned back) guys u still standing there, come here. (gang proceeded)
per:hey guys
gang:hi
per:meri bhabhi ji kaha hai?(dramatically)

rey flinched a bit at the word bhabhi🤢. he never wanted this.but taani was way to happy, actually she was blushing.

si(pulling taani forward):yeh hai humari bhabhi.
per:yeh?(shocked)😲
sw:kyon pasand nahi hai?
per:maine yeh kab kaha? aur vaise bhi shaadi to rey ne karane hai, mujhe kya!😲
saying this he moved a bit towards rey: bhai teri pasand ko kya ho gaya hai. mumbai mein ladkiyon ke strike hai kya that u chose her, u should have told me, main tere liye a mast item lata.šŸ˜‰
re:bahot hogaya, tu...
ne:rey iska intro nahi karwaoge.
per:are yeh kya karega, (in mind)-ladki to dhank ke choose nahi ke, pata nahi ise kaha se le ke aya hai🤢, mumbai ke to nahi hai,
ne:excuse me,aap to intro kare wale the.
per:oh sorry, so hello people i am...
si:simmi
ri:rimmi
like this everyone gave their intro. girls were very happy😊 whereas boys were not interested.

that person was very hadsome and charming😳. any girl would easily die for him without giving it a second thought.

per:guys nice meeting u. by the way i am ROHAN MALHOTRA, rey's cousin.




Edited by perfect_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE
hey guys!
i am happy that u liked the intro. hope u like the first part.

just wanted u tell u somethings:
1. i have changed this story from os to ss. the length of the part way vary at times. and i can't guaranty regular updates.

2. if anyone wants pm, do send me buddy request.

thank u once againšŸ˜›.
Edited by perfect_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
welcome to the forum..
interesting concept..liked it a lot..plzz continue soon n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rey and rohan are cousin... the chapter was as usual of fight of gang...
look interest... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...continue soon n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Hey dipika nyc attempt yr loved both intro nd part 1...even m new here nd bingo ! a great taani nd rey(together) hater...chuck it...cntinue soon nd gd luck
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey wow dear this is amazingšŸ‘
Rey weds Taani😲😲
loving this twist
so update next soon šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
1st part awesome...
Loved the update...
Nd update soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
nice update
loved it!!!
but rey taa Ki shaadi?????
and Rohan kria Ki shaadi????
Rohan rey ka cousin????
rey ko Rohan Ki shaadi ke baare Mein nahi malum kya???
by the way sahi kaha side effect and Rohan ne bhi sahi kaha...mumbai Mein ladkiyon Ki kami...hehehheee
ladki dhaank Ki chosse kar leta...
by the way continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
awsum intro..
loved it..
and 1st part was also awsum
taa ki shaadi rey ke saat..🤢
awsum concept..
do update soon
and do pm me..
hv send u the request..

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