~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

so you are completing the stry in full circle..

yayyy

I just really love the way u showed steps... and how pu shpwed everybodys involvement..

so sweet...

the small meaningful convos... awww...

and then how they are each othe ke support system... gorgeous...

I love how u show the undersyanding of kr..

that's the usp of rtp...

the love.. respect.. and the understandin..

and poor kria... she must be distraught if not more..

he was a part of her life... a big part...

waiting for next...
and I lubh u... :-*

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nightlife1881

@Priyanka_G14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

kriyas father expired kya? btw awesome upgrade

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

awsome update
lykd it
do update soon

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GARIMA

@grungta11

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Amazing update...:)

I luved the chapter...:)

Hoping to c some keya n rivaan bonding in the chapters...;)

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ratika16

@ratika16

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Amazing chapter
Rey is a gud father
U potray dis story amazingly !
Thanks 4 pm

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riddhima.r.

@riddhima.r.

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

A beautiful work indeed
loved it
both of them are the dream parents a child would need
felt bad about kriya's father
beautifully presented
well done

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

just loved it Mania..

superb...

the revenge of rey at the beginning was awsome...

i really loved the way u showed each and every part...

neha's part with keya...

kriyaansh part..their love...

rey's and rv's part..rey's and keya's..

simply awsome..amazing..

pls update it soon..

with lots of love

moumita

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

I guess something happened to kriya's dad...

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Way too awesome update..
Loved it...
Rey ne kya revenge liye .. lol...
I loved d way rey takes care of keya , rivaan n kriya so perfectly...
Beautifully written...
Update soon

Edited by cool_star14 - 11 years ago

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#430

Res...

will unres tomorrow... (:
_______________________

Unres...

ahhh that was wonderful...

you are one amazing writer...

you wrote small small things instances so beautifully...alwayz...

i really loved this part also...

the way they care for each other...

and its going to end...huff...

that news wasabout her father kya???

loved it very much...

do update soon... (:

Edited by ..Roop.. - 11 years ago