~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Congratzz for the new thread...🥳

You deserve many more... specially for this love paradise... :* 😃

Wow.. me loving it dher sara... 😛

Rey in dehradun is always a surprise... a sweet one...😊

Lol ... this tanisha is a sick soul... her nerve to still flirt with him... some ppl are shameless...🤢

Hehe... but rey did full justification for her insane deeds.. good .. 😉

Love to read ... that how much he's in love with her... her simple n cute gestures are enough to make her love him...😛

Omg... he proposed her... eeepppsss...

Vo bhi itna seductively... I guess kriya na jaan ke nakhre kar rhi thi... she knows ki rey ne toh mana hi lena hai...☺️😆

Hayeee ... beautifully written manu... tu toh puri expert ho gyi hai... ID ka kaam chod de... full fledged writer ban ja... 😎

Its beautiful!!!!!! Rey love to pamper her with world's prettiest jewellery...🤗

Omg.. subah subah hi car le aaya... its amazing...😲

Hahaha... sahi me... makeup a new story abt proposal... nhi toh...🤣

Happyyy bday manu darling... 🤗

May your birthday bring a smile to your face, happiness to your heart and many blessings to your life...😃

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Nice twist and the proposal was unique...

Now waiting to see them together managing up lives

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Rey in Dehradun... Kya baat hai

Kriyaansh moments were too gud...

Loved d way rey proposed Kriya..

Ring was beautiful ...

Awesome update..

Loved it..

update soon

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

itz going fab...

the way ur taking the story is something we all could have only wished for...

i mean sooo much of love between KR...i kinda envy them now😆😆

Rey or be it Kriya...these two r potrayed at their best here, totally admire em..

And yea.. a doubt here, all of a sudden it's looking as if it is Rey who was'nt previously ready for the marriage n stuff...

but was'nt it Kriya? who was'nt ready yet...and was'nt she the reason coz of who Rey too had to keep his dreams regarding marriage aside? Sorry if m wrong...but i really remember that convo between them! 2 convos actually...

anyways...waiting for d next update eagerly...

totally loving it

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pinky1712

@pinky1712

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Loved It... :) :)

Wat an amazing update...

loved the way Rey proposed ;)

thank you so much for the update...

already waiting for nxt upd :) :)

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

CONGO 4 the new thread di 🥳
update was awsm. .
Aahaa. .rey pahuch gaya apni family k paas :-D aww. . . .
And annd and
kriya ko shaadi ke liya haan kerwaneka ka kya mast plan tha. .haiye. .asie rey karega toh koun usse mana karega 🤣
realy,it was super romantic with ful of Love update. . . . .
Lovd it :-D
p.s Happy Birthday di :-D

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Superb update...
Loved rey's surprise...
''Change the call into reality''
tanisha uke toh mazze aye...
Haye!! Loved d way rey bring lriya in terms of marriage...so romantic...
Ring was so beautiful..he gave it in slepp...from whre rey gets such wondeful ideas...
Ur writing style is just superb

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Maaniaaa Di :D

Remember me?

Its Upasna here, I lost my touch in reading fictions some time back, and when I was back.. I read RTP in freaking 1 day 😳

Di *Takes Deep Breath*

I really don't have words to put in now, I am left so so hypnotized by this story of yours, I really can't imagine anything else than this fiction...

The start- When you introduced a single mother Kria and the way she is carrying her life- hiding the biggest truth which might shatter everything, I was so much attached to her, She really took my heart away. And now I am in love with this Kria of yours- Bold, Beautiful, Loving, Caring, Innocent.

Her character is so blissfully knitted in this story.

And then came my Rivaan! 😃😳 Awwieee He is so so cute! ❤️ I just love the way his speaks... "Love you Mommy.." And everything.. From his Dino to his race cars.. and everything.. He is so so so Cute!

And there you absolutely won my heart when you described that he looked like his father :')

And now that I mentioned about the father... Yes.. Rey- HE IS FREAKING ADORABLE!

I really wonder how did you manage to plot his insecurities and his character so well!

Well again no surprise- Its been written by YOU!

The way you described their first time when they were 17, My heart cried out for them. And when they re-enacted it..I literally had goosebumps and I cried.

And the most beautiful part of this story is you not only gave us the emotions but many light hearted moments too. :) With Rivaan Calling Rey Dadda for first time..being pampered by his parents and those naughty loving conversation between Rey and Kria. :')

I am emotionally stuck with them now!

And And It is important to mention here. SHIVAM! Why he enters when Rey and Kria are having their intimate time! -_- I felt like cursing him to death.

And yes, Sharon and Swayum were so helpful too..

I really feel lack of words you see 😆 Didn't I?😉

"Aftereffects of being in Hyper- Emotional Mode" This is perfect sentence to describe my situation lol!

And btw.. I just saw on forum.. Its your Birthday today Di. 😃

Happy Birthdaaay Di.. 🤗

You are truly amazing! And YOU ROCK! [l]

🤗

Love :*

Upasna

Edited by Incandescence. - 11 years ago