~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38 - Page 5

it was an freaking awesome update...

Love the update...:)

Originally posted by: Incandescence.

Maaniaaa Di :D

Remember me?

Its Upasna here, I lost my touch in reading fictions some time back, and when I was back.. I read RTP in freaking 1 day 😳

Di *Takes Deep Breath*

I really don't have words to put in now, I am left so so hypnotized by this story of yours, I really can't imagine anything else than this fiction...

The start- When you introduced a single mother Kria and the way she is carrying her life- hiding the biggest truth which might shatter everything, I was so much attached to her, She really took my heart away. And now I am in love with this Kria of yours- Bold, Beautiful, Loving, Caring, Innocent.

Her character is so blissfully knitted in this story.

And then came my Rivaan! 😃😳 Awwieee He is so so cute! ❤️ I just love the way his speaks... "Love you Mommy.." And everything.. From his Dino to his race cars.. and everything.. He is so so so Cute!

And there you absolutely won my heart when you described that he looked like his father :')

And now that I mentioned about the father... Yes.. Rey- HE IS FREAKING ADORABLE!

I really wonder how did you manage to plot his insecurities and his character so well!

Well again no surprise- Its been written by YOU!

The way you described their first time when they were 17, My heart cried out for them. And when they re-enacted it..I literally had goosebumps and I cried.

And the most beautiful part of this story is you not only gave us the emotions but many light hearted moments too. :) With Rivaan Calling Rey Dadda for first time..being pampered by his parents and those naughty loving conversation between Rey and Kria. :')

I am emotionally stuck with them now!

And And It is important to mention here. SHIVAM! Why he enters when Rey and Kria are having their intimate time! -_- I felt like cursing him to death.

And yes, Sharon and Swayum were so helpful too..

I really feel lack of words you see 😆 Didn't I?😉

"Aftereffects of being in Hyper- Emotional Mode" This is perfect sentence to describe my situation lol!

And btw.. I just saw on forum.. Its your Birthday today Di. 😃

Happy Birthdaaay Di.. 🤗

You are truly amazing! And YOU ROCK! [l]

🤗

Love :*

Upasna

Thank You sooo much Upi 🤗
Of course I rememba you, you are such a darls there is no way I could forget you
Looking at your comment, now I can say proudly yeah I did it! *giggles*
I mean you noticed everything that u kinda gave synopsis of my work... which is very touching 😊

I m so elated that I could give you something to STUCK😛😆

Thank You for the wishes too!! :*

hello

me thinking that Mr. Sharma has to do something with his worries !

kriya is pregnant again yaye n yes it was an awesome upgrade

I think that rey is worried becoz of that reporter
anyways that was a wonderfull update loved wbile reading ...
thanks 4 the pm

Aww rey again has to go back...
i really wanna know why rey is so overprotective for kria?

May be he stll thinks that she might leave him...