Dream Come True-part 2 and 3 updated on page 2 and page 5

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Kriya just entered the gates of her dreams. She was at the All India Dance Championship. It was always her dream. Her beautiful face had a few drops of perspiration. But that perfectly carved lips owned a smile, the smile of excitement. She was moving the strap of her bag up and down with nervousness as she kept moving nearer and nearer to her fulfilling dream.
Kriya: "Thank you Universe ji. Aapne mere sapne ko pura karne mein madad ki. Aage mein apni jaan laga dungi bas aap mere saath rahega."
She kept moving backwards and looking around when she hit someone. She stumbled and fell into the person's arms. The heartbreaking face was covered with cascading black water. (Her sight was blurred by her hair) She couldn't see who was the person holding her.
Kriya: "Kya Universe ji! Aise din ki shuruwat aapne aisa kyon kiya?"
saying this she stood up and stared into the face of her dream boy. It was REYANSH SINGHANIA. The dancing superstar and the judge of the competition. (Although Kriya was a great admirer of Rey but she couldn't ever learn his dance form 'cause whenever she tried to she always ended up staring at his face.) Rey had an irritated expression on his face and by the time Kriya could react or come out of her dreamyworld Rey had moved away.
Kriya: "(To herself) Mujhe nahin pata tha ki Rey itne Khadus honge. Kuch bola bhi nahin aur chale gaye."
Kriya then turned towards the way Rey had come from. There she saw the other two judges. The DANCING JODI WINNERS were getting down from a black limo. SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT and SHARON RAI PRAKASH were coming towards her hand in hand. Although Sharon was Kriya's role model she still felt awkward seeing them hand in hand and laughing. Kriya's mind again returned to Rey. Rey, the angel Kriya worshipped didn't turn out to be the person she pictured. But Swayam was perfect. Right from the heavenly smile to the slender legs. He was born to be a dancer and yet Kriya never saw him like her crush. She considered Swayam to be her friend if not best friend, but nothing more than that. She turned around to walk away.
Voice: "Hey Kriya! Tum yahan audition dene aayi ho?"
Kriya turned around to face the person. It was Swayam. Swayam and Kriya had met once before when Kriya went to a dance class. Swayam had gone there once to teach them a little dance. Kriya was the first dancer to get it right.
Kriya: "Haan. Socha ki tumhari seekh ko kam pe laga de."
Sharon: "Tum dono ek dusre ko jaante ho?"
Swayam: "Haan. Mein aur Kriya Dehradun mein ek dance class mein mile the."
Sharon: "Tumne mujhe iske baare mein pehle kyun nahin bataya?"
Swayam: "Sorry Babu, age se nahi hoga. Aur maine tumhe ek aur baat nahin bataii...
(smiling evilly at Kriya) ki...
Kriya tumhari..."
Kriya: "No Swayam..."
Sharon: "BATAO Swayam!"
Swayam: "Ki Kriya tumhe apni role model maanti hai."
Sharon: "Oh! That's so...
nice and sweet. In that case I am really looking forward to your performance."
Then Kriya and Sharon shook hands and then 'THE COUPLE' went away.
Kriya: "Hey Universe ji, kya kar rahe ho aap? Kabhi khush kar dete ho toh kabhi embarrassed to kabhi dukhi..."
saying this she went inside the building. Kriya again played with the strap showing the tension increasing with each step. She went to the reception to register her name.
Receptionist: "Name please..."
Kriya: "Kriya Ghai."
Receptionist: "Pass..."
Kriya shuffled through her bag to find it but couldn't. She started retracing her steps. She came over to the place where she fell into Rey's arms. It was lying there. She picked it yp and came back just in time to get registered. Since she was the last candidate, a lot waiting awaits her...
Kaisi khala yeh dil mein basi hai
Ab toh khataayein fitrat si hai
Mein jo tujhse door hua...
The song continues to play in the background...
Announcement: "Kriya Ghai..."
Kriya gets up and moves towards the audition room and with a slight nod at Swayam she begins...
Aye khuda, gir gaya, gir gaya
Main jo tujhse door hua
Lutt gaya, lutt gaya
Aye khuda, aye khuda...
Rey raises a hand to stop Kriya and the song.
Swayam: "Well done Kriya!"
Sharon: "Superb..."
Rey: "(coldheartedley) You're selected..."
and he walks away from there
Sharon: "Don't mind him. He is just a little..."
Swayam: "(completing Sharon's sentence) heartbroken..."
Kriya: "Oh... (she didn't knew how else she should react)"
Sharon: "(smiling warmly at Kriya) Tum ab jaa sakti ho..."
Kriya: "(returning the smile) Thankyou..."
Kriya leaves the audition room.
Inside the room...
Sharon: "Yaar Rey ko aisa nahin karna chahiye tha."
Swayam: "I know...
Par main kya kahun. Mujhe pata hai woh kya feel kar raha hai..."
Sharon: "Woh toh main bhi samajhti hun, but still...
Woh Kriya se rudely kyon behave kar raha hai?"
Swayam: "You're right...
Usne baaki contestants ke saath iss tarah baat bilkul nahin kari."
Sharon: "Iska matlab kya hai? Rey ke behavior ka..."
Swayam: "Shayad iska ek reason ye hai ki Kriya Rey se vaise hi behave kar rahi hai jaise..."
Sharon: "(completing Swayam's sentence) Jaise Taani behave karti thi."
Swayam: "Meri behn ko beech mein mat lao please...
Uski koi galti nahin thi."
Rey: "Guys please..."
Rey was standing at the door with an angry expression.
Sharon: "I'm just saying Rey...
Tum Kriya ko galat tarah se treat kar rahe ho."
Swayam: "Uski toh koi galti bhi nahin hai.You shouldn't be rude to her."
Sharon: "Swayam's right. You're being unfair to her."
Rey: "I know, but I can't help it. Woh mujhe baar-baar Ta...
uski yaad dilati hai."
Rey walks out of the room with teary eyes as his past flashes infront of him in glimpses...
Kaali-kaali khali raaton se
Hone lagi, hai dosti
Khoya-khoya inn raahon main
Ab mera, kuch bhi nahin
The song continues to play in the background...
Pehli nazar mein aisa jaadun kar diya:Rey is standing and talking to Swayam when Taani enters. Taani was wearing a sky blue afghani with a black sleeveless top. Her hair was open with a puff on the top. They were flying due to the soft breeze around her. She was wearing casual sandals and holding a hand-made jute bag. She was crushing the strap of her bag nervously just like Kriya was doing today.
Yeh raat mastaani: Rey was entering Taani's room for the first time through the window. Taani was scared of the noise he made while climbing. Taani was holding a flower vase and was about to bringit down on Rey's head as she saw Rey's face.
Baahon ki darmiya, do pyaar mil rahein hai: Taani was walking dreamily when Rey scared her from the back. Taani lost balance and fell right into Rey's arms and the air blew Taani's hair into Rey's face. Kriya had also fallen into Rey's arms in the same way today.
Pyaar hua, ikraar hua, pyaar se phir kyon darta hai dil: It was Valentine's Day. Rey took Taani to a decorated room. The room was decorated by Rey himself with red roses and white and red balloons. Rey stopped at the centre took Taani's hands and said, "I love you!" Taani went red in the face. She replied shyly,
"I love you too, Rey!"
"I love you too, Rey!"
"I love you too, Rey!"
The sound echos in Rey's ears.
He again feels the pain he felt that day when Taani left him. It was like someone stabbed him with a knife and was doing it again and again. He was kneeling in his room. The room that he had selected for the stay held no happiness for him. He wipes his tears off and leaves the room. He is going to meet Swayam...
His bestfriend...
Taani's cousin brother...

To Be Continued...

This is it guys I will post the rest later...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was awsum
Nyc start
Plzzz do continue
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was truly beautiful dear..
loved it a lot
please do write more and do PM me
would love to read them 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awesome
nice start
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadafarsha

This was awsum

Nyc start
Plzzz do continue
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me
Thanks for the pm

Thanks yaar
I will surely update ASAP
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Originally posted by: -spongy-


it was truly beautiful dear..
loved it a lot
please do write more and do PM me
would love to read them 👍🏼

Thanks...

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Originally posted by: Abhilashaarsha

awsum update..

update soon

Thanks I will surely update
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nyc start...
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At the rehersal hall...
Kriya was practising Swayam's steps for the second round: Step to Step. First was Swayam to teach the steps. His dance style was hip-hop. The steps were quite easy, especially for Kriya. Sharon was now climbing up the stairs to the stage.
Sharon: "Hey guys! You are now going to dance on the beats of contemporary."
Everybody shouted with excitement.
Kriya already knew all the steps of her role model yet she was excited to ser her perform live.
Sharon: "1, 2, 3, 4, pique, jump, 5, 6,7, 8 and then pivot turn. Now you all try with me."
They all tried. It was pretty awesome for Kriya. Then came Rey's turn. Rey was teaching Jazz.
Rey: "Hey all...(he seemed more cheerful as compared to some time ago)"
Kriya: "Aa gaye Mr. Rude."
Rey: "Let's start..."
The steps were a little difficult. Everyone had a little problem understanding so Rey came down to teach individually.
Kriya had a lot of problems as well, in managing the steps. Her posture was coming all wrong. Seeing this Rey came over.
Rey: "Aise nahin... aise."
Kriya's back was facing Rey so he didn't knew to whom he was teaching.
Rey: "Ye haat upar karo.. and straight. Ab mera right hand ko pakdo and turn..."
Kriya turned and Rey on seeing her face became frustrated again.
Paas aao gale se lagao: Rey was teaching Taani some steps. Taani wasn't a dancer but Rey was trying hard to make her one. The were laughing as Rey tired to move the unwilling Taani Suddenly Rey clutched Taani by her hand and turned her quickly. His hand now rested upon her bare back while one was still holding her hand. He pulled her closer when Taani turned her face sidewards. The cold breeze moved Taani's hair into his face. He slowly moved them away to which Taani shivered and ran away. Rey stool their smiling. Rey was holding Kriya in the same position as he once held Taani.
Rey was having a mixed feeling. He was sad due to Taani and angry with Kriya. He swirls her around roughly and leaves her. Kriya fell into her partner's arms. Kriya became confused. Her innocent face had a frustrated look. She went after Rey to talk to him and to know what his problem.
Kriya: (patting Rey on his back) Rey...Mujhe aapse baat karni hai.
Rey: (turns)bolo...
Kriya: Yahan nahin bahar...
Rey: Nahin. Tumhe jo baat karni hai yahin par karo.
Kriya: Nahin Rey. Bahar chaliye...(saying this she moved out of the room).
Rey unwantingly follows her out. Kriya goes straight into the next rehersal hall.
Kriya: Aapki problem kya hai Rey. Aap mere saath aise kyon behave kar rahe ho?
Rey doesn't reply. Kriya frustatingly shakes Rey.
Kriya: Boliye Rey!
Rey: (shouts) Tum ho meri problem...Tumhari harkate hai meri problem...
Everything goes silent.
Heartbeats...
Kriya: (after recovering) Par maine aisa kya kiya Rey?
Drops of tears form in her beautiful almond shaped eyes daring to drop from there. Kriya sobs a little.
Rey: (softens) Nothing...
Rey turns to walk out.
Kriya: Please Rey... Mujhe Bataiye... aap aisa kyon kar rahe ho.
Rey: Kuch nahin...Ye meri alti hai...Sorry...
Rey walks out of the room without turning back. Kriya goes numb for sometime. She doesn't know how to react. She drops down to her knees. Rey looks at Kriya from outside the door and feels Sorry for her and is angry with himself for doing this to her. She didn't know Rey at all. Sharon was right. She didn't deserve to be like this and he will not let her be. Rey goes from there. Kriya wipes her tears off.
Kriya: (looking up frustratingly) Thankyou Universeji ! e ache din ko aur happening banane ke liye.
She leaves the room and enters the washroom.
Meanwhile...
Sharon: Rey kahan hai?
Swayam: Maine usse Kriya ke saath bahar jate dekh tha.
Sharon: Kriya ke saath! Don't know ki iss baar kaun sa bomb phatega.
Swayam: Let's go and check him out. Kahin kuch ulta seedha na ho jaaye.
Sharon: Ya right... Let's go...
At the rehersal hall...
Kriya's Partner: tum kahan gayi thi? We have to perform next so let's practice...
Kriya: Ya right...
She makes a face and then practices the whole routine. Only one thing remain's on Kriya's mind all the while-Rey was doing wrong to her. After a little practice it was her chance to perform. She went on the stage and the song began...
Bheeghi Bheeghi raatein
Bheeghi Beeghi baatein
Bheeghi Bheeghi...
Akhon mein kaisi nami hain
Aa haan haa haan haa
Aa haan
Aa haan haa haan
Na jaane koi
kaisi hai yeh zindagani zindagani
Humari adhoori kahaani...
Since the results will take some time, Kriya and the contestants went away. Kriya went to the cafe to have some coffee. To relax her body and mind.
She was half-finished when someone placed a bouquet there and left. She was about to call back the person when her eyes fell on the card attached with her name on it. She pulled the bouquet towards herself. Rey smiled to himself seeing her smile. He was the person to give the flowers. The bouquet consisted of white and yellow flowers. The letter said...
Kriya...
White signifies peace and yellow friendship, isiliye maine socha ki tumhe dono dedun, taki tum mujhe maaf karke meri dost ban jao.
Sorry...
Rey
Kriya looked once at the flowers and then at the card. She then tore the card into pieces and took the flowers wth herself and threw them into the dustbin. She walked out of the cafe angrily.
Rey saw all this with an aura of sadness. He went to Swayam to know more about her.
Rey: Hey Swayam (waving and shouting to catch his attention) Swayam.
Swayam: Rey...Humne tumhe kahan kahan nahin dhundha...
Rey: Sorry yaar. Main cafe chala gaya tha.
Sharon: Vaise hum dono ne list laga di hai.
Rey: Kaisi list?
Sharon: Arre woh selected ones wali list.
Rey: Sorry...I fogot...Anyways, Swayam, woh tumhare paas isiliye mein aaya tha, kyonki mujhe Kriya ke baare mein janna tha.
Swayam: Kya janna hai uske baare mein?
Rey: Uski like...uski dislike... Vagera-Vagera.
Swayam: Yaar Rey, Main usse itne ache se nahin jaanta. You do one thing-Tum uska FB page check karle, shayad kuch mil jaye.
Rey: Okay...Thanks...Bye guys.
Rey leaves the place and goes to his room. He flips open his laptop and open's Kriya profile.
He smiles slighty on reading his own name in her likes.
Rey: Toh... Madam ko puppies pasand hai. Chal beta Rey, lagja kaam par.
Meanwhile...
Kriya: Rey ki himmat kaise huyi mujhe rose gift karne ki? Kabhi gussa ho jaate hai toh kabhi flowers bhejte hain. Problem kya hai inki?
According to the results Kriya was in the last round along with two other contestants-Shivam and Ashi. She was going to the rehearsal hall once again. When she enters, Shivam is talking to Ashi about who will dance with whom. They were discussing about the third round Dance With Me in which the three finalists had to dance with one of the judges.
Shivam: So Ashi, tum kiske saath pair up hona chahti ho?
Ashi: Main toh kisi ke bhi saath pair types ho sakti hun but I wish types ki mein Swayam ke saath hi dance types karun.
Kriya: Tum batao Shivam! Tum kiske saath dance karna prefer karoge?
Shivam: Well...There is only one female judge soI just want to dance with her...But still let's see...Kahin odd pairing na ho jaye...
Ashi: Odd pairing...Yaani..Girl-girl and boy-boy types???Haan woh thoda awkward types zaroor hoga.
Kriya: But still kisi ek ki paring toh sahi hogi...I mean hum girls mein...
Ashi: Haan...Aap bilkul sahi types keh rahe ho. Main bus yahin wish types kar rahi hun ki woh main hi hun.
Announcement: All the contestants please gather in the rehearsal hall in a minute.
Kriya was just wishing through the conversation that she either dance with Swayam or Sharon. She couldn't handle Rey or his mood swings anymore.
Shivam: Let's hope for the best guys...
Swaron walk in after some time. Swayam moves towards Kriya while Sharon deals with the rest.
Kriya: Yaar Swayam...Ek request hai...
Swayam: Haan bolo...
Kriya: Yaar, kuch karke mera aur apna ya phir mera aur Sharon ma'am ka nikal waade saath mein...
Swayam: Rey se problem? (Kriya gives a slight nod in the positive) Hmm...I wish mein kuch kar sakta...but you know how the system works...Nothing is in our hands. Everything's random. We can just hope for the best.
Kriya: Par...
Right then Rey enters with some event organizers. Kriya goes silent.
EO: So guys, you all ready?
The three of them said yes at once.
EO: Alright...The pairing has been done. So here it is...First up will be Swayam and...Shivam...
Kriya prays mentally that Sharon and she have been paired.
EO: Second will be Sharon andAshi and last will be Rey and Kriya...
Kriya: What?
Swayam: Shit!
Rey: Shucks!
Sharon: OMG!
The official wishes them all luck and departs.
Kriya: Hey Universeji aap aisa kyon kar rahe ho?
Swayam: Guess what...Nightmares sach hote hai...
Sharon: Ya phir...Tum Rey ke saath dance karne ke liye itni prayers kar chuki ho ki bhagwaan ne tumhari yeh prayer nahin suni...
Kriya: Whatever...jo ho chuka so ho gaya...Tum log jao apne partners ke saath. Mein baad mein milti hun.
Kriya was about to leave when a puppy walks in through the door with a paper around its neck. She cuddled it in her arms and freed the pup of that ridiculous collar.
Kriya: Guys look! Yeh kitna pyara hai...
Sharon: So cute...
Sharon takes the pup from Kriya and pampers her. Kriya looks at the paper which now seems to be a folded letter. She opens it up and reads...
Kriya...
Mere roses ko toh tumne dustbin mein daal diya, ab kya isse bhi daal dogi? Mujhse friendship nahin karni hai toh mat karo but iss puppy se zarur karna!
Rey
Kriya: Rey! Ab aap bach nahin sakte!!!
Kriya storms out of the room while Rey enters from the other door.
Rey: (To Sharon and Swayam) Thanks guys...For playing along...
Swayam: Anytime yaar...
Sharon: Ya anytime...
Rey: Thanks...Anyways...Gotta go. Meet you guys later.
Rey leaves the room and reaches the open stage. He then messages Kriya to meet him there for practices.
Kriya: (On receiving the message) Thanks Rey...Aapne khudi apna pata bata diya. Ab dekhiye mein aapka kya karti hun...

To Be Continued...

This is it guys I will post the rest later...
Edited by ___SAD___ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Massst hai yaar!!!!
Awesome!!!
Rey is heartbroken!!! 😭 😭 😭 vo bhi taani ki vajah se!!! 😡 😡 😡
Chalo taani n rey saath mein to nahi hai!!!!
Kriya is damn nervous!!!! Fidgeting d bag strap!! Hota hai!!! Mujhe bhi hota hai!!
Direct landing!!!! 😆 😆 😆
Kriya ko bolna maan jane ko!!!
Sharon uski role model hai!!! 😊
Dats good!!!
Matlab swaron were just playing along!!! Rey ka plan tha!!! 😲
Abe ye judge hai ki kya hai???
Story awesome hai!!!
Ab kriya kya karegi???
N vo ese reject kyun kar rahi hai????
N rey ko info kyun chahiye??? Attracted hai kya???
Hmmm...aashi shivam n kriya r in d final slot!!!
Idhar shivam koi problem nahi karega na??/
Koi nai!! Jaldi se update de do!!! N thnx for d pm!!!

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