KriSha SS |Eclipse| Chapter 3 + Note Page 20 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Aquilia_Aditi

Okay, this means that you're gonna tell me the entire story!😆

Originally posted by: Aquilia_Aditi

I hope this KriSha is Kria and Sharon.😳🤣

Originally posted by: Anjori_ArSha

Amzing start ...

loved it totally ... <3 <3

the way you write is totally amazing ... ^_^

Originally posted by: ShonaSparkzz

The way you described the helplessness of a dying person is mind blowing Finally

Never imagined the story would start from a patients point of view

atleast not someone who apparently died and mysteriously came

back to life Hehehe You should know by now, being in your sangat I have also followed the motto of "expect the unexpected."😎

And the women, you mentioned really caught my attention. I

wonder if she is there in as the story develops or is it between the

guy who came back to life. You very well know the story so just Shut Up😳🤣

What I truly loved was the way you managed to take my breath

away was the last paragraph. An element of surprise and shock. Now I can happily go away to heaven.😆

And something that leaves you in a chaotic situation of mind

the writers mind is incomprehensible.😊👏 I know, I am great😳😎

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Is the update coming up

Originally posted by: anjali22

Nice update

Originally posted by: ronikaseth

u r awesum
unique & beautiful starting

Originally posted by: Pinkpearly

amazing start

luv it

Originally posted by: -spongy-

beautiful chapter

i loved it

the description of every single thing was amazing... Thank you so much dear.

and the start of the chapter was really unexpected.. Well you should expect the unexpected throughout the SS.

this is your first work that i will be reading and after chapter 1 i'm quite excited now... 🤣Dear this ain't my first work you are reading. It's just that I have changed my userId name and this is my first work you are reading by this new ID.😆

really well conceptualized and well written chapter...

amazing 👍🏼

kudos to you 👏👏 Thank you so much😳😳

would love to the read the next chapter

update soon

and do PM me

thanks lot for the PM

i really appreciate it... Sure you will receive the PM.