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BedOfRoses

@AwesomeSauce.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Btw, why did you have to write that for the prologue. Meko bore kar ditta! *Sigh* Kitta intense tha. And did I tell you I'm hating intense these days?!

Edited by Aquilia_Aditi - 11 years ago

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Aquilia_Aditi
Btw, why did you have to write that for the prologue. Meko bore kar ditta! *Sigh* Kitta intense tha. And did I tell you I'm hating intense these days?!

Who said that it was for you?🤣

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Anjori

@anjoriii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Amzing start ...

loved it totally ... <3 <3

the way you write is totally amazing ... ^_^

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ShonaSparkzz

@ShonaSparkzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

The way you described the helplessness of a dying person is mind

blowing

Never imagined the story would start from a patients point of view

atleast not someone who apparently died and mysteriously came

back to life

And the women, you mentioned really caught my attention. I

wonder if she is there in as the story develops or is it between the

guy who came back to life.

What I truly loved was the way you managed to take my breath

away was the last paragraph. An element of surprise and shock.

And something that leaves you in a chaotic situation of mind

the writers mind is incomprehensible.😊👏

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shakz_KR

@shakz_KR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

u r awesum
unique & beautiful starting

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

beautiful chapter

i loved it

the description of every single thing was amazing...

and the start of the chapter was really unexpected..

this is your first work that i will be reading and after chapter 1 i'm quite excited now...

really well conceptualized and well written chapter...

amazing 👍🏼

kudos to you 👏👏

would love to the read the next chapter

update soon

and do PM me

thanks lot for the PM

i really appreciate it...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

that is truly amazing.. and I hope this story keeps this interesting as it would be carried forward...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Mindblowin start aditi 👏
Beautifully described ⭐️
Moi waiting for the next part 😳

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Amazing update 😊

well penned

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

An interesting chapter...I really loved it and you know that. Man! great start. Wonder who that girl and guy are? jo girl fas thi in some lonely place...probably its kriya or sharon :-P :-P ...no guess for that guy...zaroor kisi ne black magic kiya hoga unn saare patients par 😆

Me waitin for update..