KriSha SS |Eclipse| Chapter 3 + Note Page 20

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Sanskriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nice start 😊

continue soon

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aishwarya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Aditi 🤗
D prologue s amazing and well written 👏
Waiting eagerly for d 1st chappy 😳
And love d title 😳

P. S -my lyk button s not workin sowwie
Count me too 😳

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zona_malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Woah dat was really deep n moreovr KRISHA SS

really looikng forward to it

b/w Amazing Prologue :)

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: asmaju
Reserved!!!

Unreserved..
Seeing this was a OS that was about to be given last year and is brough but this year as SS..

I shall only leave a deatiled review once all chapters get posted..

Doesn't the birthday girl desrve this fellas..

Ab attack Aditi for it 😉

Fine with me.😳

I just wanted to know if you liked it or not since it was your birthday gift...😒

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: *Khushii*
Aditi, it's the first ever work I'm reading of yours 😳 Obviously you can guess how I peeped in. I love how you've written the prologue. So engulfing and interesting <3
May not be able to continue reading but I shall try (=

-Edit-

PS: I can definitely imagine KriSha on this!!

Love,
-Khushi.

Khushi seeing your like on my fic I literally pinched myself real hard to check weather it was my dream or not. When it turned into reality, I scrolled up to check if it was my work or not..🤣

Yes! You and your love for KriSha drove you here. Thank you. Glad you liked it.😳😆 No problem. as of now I don't have any right to scold you or be angry with you on this one.😳😛

Edited by Flame.Of.Rose - 12 years ago

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: lovely7010
What should I say about it? I've already told you my thoughts about it.

Like I told, it's amazing and interesting. Kinda supspence thriller.

loved it.

Looking forward to it.

P.S hope you remember you promised to update the first chapter by the end of asma's birthday...

You just gotta wait and read whenever I update to know whats going on...😆😆😆

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: anjali22
Nice

Thank you.😳

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
prologue seem interest and different... do continue soon and pm me

Glad you liked it.😳 Sweets you gotta add the ID on the second post of first page for pms.

Edited by Flame.Of.Rose - 12 years ago

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ppl_alwys_leave
The prologue is awsum...I can totally feel it...plzzz continue and also plzzz pm me...would luv to read further...u r a totally amazing writer!!! 😊

Thank you so much. Glad to know that you liked my work.😳 Please add the PM ID mentioned on first page.😊

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ShonaSparkzz
Aditu it has come out really
The way you comprehended the candle and veil was amazing
The connection you tried to create with your choice of words hit spot on
I'm sure this is one of the best gifts Asma di would be receiving
Well, luckily for me
I won't have to wonder and kill myself trying to understand that :P
With coldness death and warmth of light on your balance, create the story of the perfect equilibrium catastrophe

Frankly speaking Shona, more than that of Asma di, I was scared of your views to SS. I, kind of, doubted that will I be able to do justice to the concept. Trust me, this comment from you and I know I will be able to do it.🤗

🤣Really lucky you😆, But still you only know the half of the story. I can do anything with the second half😉.