ARHI SS 'LOVE AGAIN' PART-4 Page 26, 25/10 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
today only i saw this story yaar...really nice...i don't know how to give feed back in a detailed way i will try to write as mush i can ( like i do with other stories i read...)

really nice story,so the story begins after the temple scene...interesting concept no body ever tried on this part...

part1: really like the way u written arnav pov how his life changed after meeting kushi and their conversation at different times...his taunts,and her answers...reminded every thing intial day of IPK before first diwali...enjoyed while reading it...
he misses kushi, every min, they seperated for 2 yrs...u gave each and every detail how arnav feels for kushi...

part2: so he met her after 2 yrs...liked the way kushi asked arnav questions bravely...yes first he has to answer kushi first...than only he has a right to question her...

she left abruptly no body knows where she go or only arnav doesn't know???is she married???i will stop thinking for now...

thank u for giving us beautiful story ...if possible please add me to u r pm list...

cheers...



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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
hey that was a brilliant update dear...
why i loved it cause unlike in the serial here both khushi n arnav actually spelled out their inner turmoil...its nt a very straight forward confession...but it reflects the immense confusion both have in resp of their relationship...
this was something i had craved to see in IPK, bt it never came...
so hats off to u for giving it me here...
well loads to surprises are in store for us i guess...
ur doing gr8 job dnt be nervous...this story is ur baby..u need nt give us ny explanation abt its twists n turns...
all that u shld do is update as soon as possible 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sometimes all you need is words and sometimes words mean more than actions."

Although I did get a jolt from the last line, I am glad that she did not revolve her entire life around Arnav. Don't be mistaken, I still don't like the fact that she is married, but I am glad she did not halt her life for this coward. Hear me out first...
These 2 years, what did really Arnav do? Except for being a successful businessman, and a good brother to Anjali and an inspiration to Akash, what did he do to with his life? Nothing. Simply nothing.

He waited, he dreamed, he analyzed every hurtful words thrown at Khushi, he remembered all the memories he spent with her, he let her take over his life, and despite knowing where she is residing, he did nothing. He could not bring himself to run to her and apologize for every words spoken against her, for every pain inflicted on her, and every tear she shed because of him. Yet he claims to have loved her above and beyond...

Khushi's pain was reflected with every word that you penned down. She was broken, and shattered to see Arnav's indifference towards her. He is caring one moment, and then turns into a demon the next. As they say, 'sticks and stones only break bones, but words can shatter the soul', Khushi certainly did not deserve to bear the brunt of his hurtful words. It was not just once or twice when Arnav lashed out on her, instead it a continuos process of putting her down and taunting her, whether it was because of her class, or her job. A person can only bear so much. I think the icing of the cake was when he mercilessly threw Khushi's mother's last keepsake, and stood behind her when she was on the ground looking for it. How can a person who loved someone be such cruel? But I am happy to see this strong Khushi. She is not the same woman anymore, she has been through enough heartache and pain to keep quiet with all the questions and accusations Arnav threw at her.

Arnav is a heartless monster.

And for Arnav to expect Khushi to be waiting for him, is such a slap to Khushi.
Edited by aycma98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
the update was intense and in the end you surprised me! Brilliant 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Excellent chapter 👏 The tables have turned. Khushi's outburst was very well written. I am glad that there is no Lavanya and I hope the black beads necklace that Khushi is wearing means nothing just like Arnav's words two years back. Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
nice update ..continue soon..but plz let arshi be together again😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Wow... glad dat i found this !!
it amazes me how ipk members are turning out to be wonderful writers...
brilliant storyline dear...
keep going
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Chapter 2.

Excellent style of portraying the story.
Loved it.⭐️👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nids
Edit 1: Early update!! 🥳
Geeta add a index somewhere on first page.
Will be back after I read the update.

Edit 2: Wow! What a twist you've brought to the original story. So Khushi was there to teach Anjali. I love the way Khushi told him exactly how she felt. She never got an opportunity to do so on the show.

The way you wrote her dialogues was superb!!! Fantastic update and it lived up to my expectations.

Arnav Arnav Arnav! What do I say about him. Her leaving has really broken him and now he wants answers. But before he has a right to demand anything he has to win her back.

Is she married??? No, never! Khushi would never marry someone else. But I'll wait for you to unfold the mystery of the black beads.

Great job!!
Edited by Nidsubh007 - 11 years ago

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