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Rupa

@voldemort

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

wow very nice start...u are narrating the same story with a diff script...

and its sooo damn interesting...

do continue soon...and plss do pm me...

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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Wish sunday was here already

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: aycma98
I am glad I caught this story right from the beginning. I loved that you gave a different perspective to the departure in the temple.
I loved the little spin you gave about the Diwali night. Such a contrast to that man, and the man today. It has been 2 years, and he wakes up to her thoughts every morning and sleeps with her invading his dreams. I hope such is the case with Khushi as well.

Loved it, and please do pm me with the updates.

WOW!! This is such a lovely comment 😃. Thank you so much!! You just summarized what Arnav feels in two sentences.

Thanks for taking time to read and comment. Will definitely PM the update, hopefully tomorrow.😃

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shaaa

@shaaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

just loved it..continue soon..😊

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

you will send pm to me also..😕

velle hu.. isiliye kuch aur sujha nai😆

P.S- Matlab padhna hai.. bs main aise hi aa gayi..😛

Edited by Shruti21 - 11 years ago

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MoonlightAura

@MoonlightAura

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

That was a really good start! You have a great potential dear. Don't undermine your work. During introduction I could help but agree with you that IPK has left a great void in our hearts and after so many months after trying so many ways to entertain myself after a long trying day, I cannot help but turn to the world of fanfic of Arnav Khushi their saga still continues, and to the great author who have taken time and effort to keep us entertained. We have our own world in here where we are bound by our love for these characters. Arnav is caught in the web of his own making, too arrogant to concede defeat, his crimes against Khushi where many but still salvageable in this timeline. Will be waiting to see how you carry this forth.Take Care,regards,MoonlightAura

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: MoonlightAura
That was a really good start! You have a great potential dear. Don't undermine your work. During introduction I could help but agree with you that IPK has left a great void in our hearts and after so many months after trying so many ways to entertain myself after a long trying day, I cannot help but turn to the world of fanfic of Arnav Khushi their saga still continues, and to the great author who have taken time and effort to keep us entertained. We have our own world in here where we are bound by our love for these characters. Arnav is caught in the web of his own making, too arrogant to concede defeat, his crimes against Khushi where many but still salvageable in this timeline. Will be waiting to see how you carry this forth.Take Care,regards,MoonlightAura

Hi there,

Thank you for reading the and the wonderful words. You are right Arnav was a very complex personality and he always viewed the world and others from his lens. And I am exploring things from his lens too and how things could have been. IF is a great place for FFs and you will be blown away by the brilliant writers we have on this forum. They all are very inspiring.

I hope you like this story and they way I take it forward.

Buddy me if you would like to get PMs for updates.